Koi Jaane Na! (OS) Completed!! - Page 2

mind blowing... i hop we can see dis happen in YHM...actually i indde want the outcome of dis trck in the way u written...

wow!  amazingly written!
raman's angst was so arresting- it wasn't childish nor was it overreaction👏
i really liked how it wasn't just angst, you ended on a lighter note😃
loved the thought on love in that last para ⭐️
fantastic as always👏

Awesome OS...loved the confession and the conversation before that was perfectly in sync with whats happening!

So heart touching
Loved it
The ending hahaha
Shamelesss rkb !!

Beautiful update
Loved the part. When Raman expressed his feelings

Originally posted by: aaminah123

It was brilliant, his emotions and insecurities were well written and the way she took the fist step towards their relationship was just the right thing to do. And I loved how you showed a mature raman, voicing his fears in the right manner, without any juvenile act.

I couldn't agree more to what you have mentioned in the note above, I second the thought and this j-track is getting over the board now. Ishita and mani clearly have forgotten to use their brains and eyes also.

Originally posted by: aishu_divan

WOOOWW..it was like you read my mind😃😃 FANTASTIC👏..this was what exactly was going on in my mind too dear😊..I wanted a bold Ishita to confess what she felt for Raman..I know she has accepted him mentally but this advance was required for Raman to know what she actually feels for him..😊..The mental trauma of Raman and the emotions flooding through Ihsu's mind as she learned about his insecurity-all expressed so perfectly..👍🏼..Beautiful OS😊 thanks dear🤗

It ws EPIC one... the one OS which will be remembered by me always...!!
Each n every line ..dialogue... phrases are perfect at their place...
i loved it that raman didnt shout but ws heartbroken... making ishita understand that he has already beared this pain ... loved it when ishita told him that why he is incomparable to mani...

It ws an amazing writing dear...!!!
Incredible... thnkss for this one... This kind of sincerity... emotions... could be seen in forum only... Ws a needed OS to get over current track and to make diwali week outstanding!

Originally posted by: Maaneet099

thank you! At least people in the forum realize the depth of the situation and write amazing stories :D

loved it!

Originally posted by: Nikki_Titli

omfggg BESTEST ISHRA OS i hv evr read till date...u did JUSTICE to BOTH chars yaar..aah how i wish if i could get EXACT VERSION of this confession...too too perfect..!! i hv same views lik u for the track n so this ws evn more relatable..!!