RAYA FF : Room Number 101 PART 14 On Page 35 22Nov

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Posted: 2014-10-16T10:57:34Z




 

HERE IS MY NEW STORY



                                    " ROOM NUMBER 101 "



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PART 1

PART 2

PART 3

PART 4

PART5

PART 6

PART 7

PART 8

PART 9




 PART 1

 

::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::LONDON :::::::::::::::::::::::::::

 


In Mall

 

KK: are Sudheer JI Aap Yaha

 

Sudheer : Are Bhabhi Aap Kaisi hai app or mera Yaar Kaisa hai...???

 

KK : Msin theek hu Aapka Yaar bhi theek hai aap kaise...???

 

Sudheer : Main theek hu...

 

KK :London Kab aaye...??

 

Sudheer : Jee main to abhi aayahu lekin shipra or priya yahi hai. 1 saal se..shipra yaha aao...

 

Shipra KK met and KK ask aapki family yaha hai hame pta hi nahi thi...

 

Sudheer : wo bus time hi nhi mila...and shipra ye priya kaha hai...

 

Shipra : wo koi book lene gayi hai...

 

KK: mera beta Ram wo bhi book lene gaya hai kitna Time ho gaya aaya nahi...

 

Ship : Ha priya ko bhi time ho gaya...chaliye wahi chalte hai...

 

 

 

                   HERE

Ram priya in same book store...

 

Priya in hudi tshirt and capri full on hip-hop style,earphone plugged bubble gum in mouth walking towards "How to " book section

 

Ram in black suit,red tie walking towards the same book section...

 

Both at same book self and at same time...

 

Priya: yippeee mil gayi her voice loud enough for everyone...

 

Ram : yes mil gayi...

          

Both hand on same book...

 

Priya takes book in her hand

 

Ram : excuse me earphone aapne lagaye hai iska matlab ye nahi hai ki hum bhi behre hai...

 

 Priya behave like a deaf bcoz of earphone...excuse me r u talking to me ????

 

Ram : yaaa i m talking to u...

 

Priya plugged out earphone : yaaa say...

 

Ram point to the book which is in priya's hand...

 

ye book mene phle dekhi thi...

 

Priya : tooo  

 

Ram : too matlab ye meri huyi...

 

Priya :SRK ko jaante hai aap...

 

Ram : kya ???

 

 Priya : Srk shah rukh khan...

 

Ram : ha SRK ka full form pta hai mujhe...

 

 Priya : ha use mene phle dekha tha lekin wo to gauri ka ho gya...

 

 Ram : matlab... Priya : matlab ye ki jo chiz aapne phle dekhi iska matlab ye nahi ki wo aapki ho gyi...

 

Ram : what is this nonsense ????wo book pe phle mene hath rakha tha.

 

 Priya : kabhi train me baithe hai aap...

 

Ram : ab book ka train se kya lena dena...

 

Priya : hai lene dena hai...

 

Ram : or wo kya hai ??

 

Priya : ye book store hai train nhi jaha pahle kapda daal diya to seat apki. ..

 

 Now ram completlt pissed off... And priya walking towards the bill counter...

 

Ram : excuse me miss hip-hop girl ye so called philosophy apne pass rakhiye...

 

aap indian hai isliye me itne pyar se baat kar rha hu warna...

 

Priya : dekhiye Mr.double battery...pyar se to main baat kar rhi hu warna ab tak...

 

 Ram in very harsh tone...1st warna kya and 2nd double bettry matlab with pissing his teeth...

 

Priya : apna size dekhiye samz aaega double bettry ka matlab...

 

Ram : how dare u call me fat...

 

Priya : mene aapko kab mota kaha aap khud hi kah rahe hai btw happy reliazation...

 

Ram : u jst shut up main khaate peete ghar se hu...tumahre jaisa nahi hu kapde phnne ka dhang bhi nahi ki ladkiyo ko kaise kapde phnna chahiye...

 

Priya : wo to dikh raha hai ki aap kahate peete ghar se hai...or rhi baat mere kapdo ki to meri body main jaise chahu kapde pahnu aap ko kya shadi karni h kya mujhse...

 

Ram : are kaisi ladki ho tum...shadi in ur dreams...

 

Priya : waise bhi aapke niche dab ke marne se aacha hai ki main sucide kar lu...and she goes to the counter and give her Credit card and take the bill

 

Ram stood their like dumb.. Ram : wat mere niche dab ke how shamless girl...

 

Ram walking towards the bill counter but priya out of shop accidently she drop bill and ram follow her shouting her name he took the bill...

 

Excuse me...miss hip hop girl...

 

P: Now what...

 

R : 1st r u shamless... 2nd i m not that fat actuly any girl ready for me that wat u said...but i m one woman man... 3rs gr8 idea mujhe apni nonsense baato me busy rakha or ye book le aayi lekin u cant take this book out of mall...

 

 P : 1st i m not shamless   2nd u said u r not that fat that means u beleive that u r fat... 3rd yes this is my idea which is only executed on fool like u...and wait a min...where is my bills Ram show her bill of book...

 

U cant exit without this bill also that dress...

 

P : What the hell...u thief ...

 

 R : mind ur tounge...tum waha ye bill gira gayi thi ...now say sorry and give that book to me...and after this only i ll give bill of ur dress...

 

P : Never...

 

 R : never say never...

 

Ram...Priya... Both see their parents came towards them...

 

Ram tum yaha ho...krishna said to ram...

 

 Are priya tu bhi yahi hai...sudheer said to priya...

 

Now its shipra's turn she see books in priyas hand chalo tujhe book mil gayi...

 

 Krishna : are Ram ye sudheer sharma ji hai tere babuji ke bachpan ke dost...

 

 Ram : namste uncle... Namste beta namste kaise ho... I m fine uncle thank u...

 

Sudheer : krishna ji ye meri beti priya hai...priya yad hai tumhe main tumhe mere or Ak ke baare me batata tha ye unhi ki wife meri bhabhi KRishna ji hai...

 

Now our priya She benned down touches her feet..say namste aunty...

 

 Krishna surprise to see and said beta tumhe dekh ke lagta hai ki log bahar aakr bhi apne sanskar nahi bhulte...

 

Ram made faces...

 

Are tum dono pointing to ram and priya yaha kyu khade ho...

 

Our priya show here her smartness...wo kya hai na aunty jee ye apke bete mere bill mujhe wapas de rhe the galti se gir gaye and priya takes bill from ram hand and say thank u ram and say hi i m priya...

 

ram annoyingly shake her hand...

 

Krishna : Accha achha bahut ho gaya milna milana chalo sudheer ji ghar chaliye inhe bhi surprise dena hai

 

Krishna dragg sudherr and shipra with her and said chalo ab tum dono bhi chalo...both say ha aaye...

 

Ram priya behind them... Ram : very smart...

 

P : thnk u...

 

Ram : i change my word very evil...

 

P : same to u...

 

Ram : so aap dusro ki chize chudane ke alwa kya karti hai...

 

P : kyo aapko kya shadi karni hai mujhse...

 

R : o hellooo main to kya dunia ka koi bhi mard agar uska dimag theek hai naa to wo tumse shadi na kare...so i m not intrestd Priya mad faces and keep.quiet...

 

Ram : o hello main aap se puch rha hu miss hip hop Again quiet

 

Ram while walking see her that she doesnt reply he think may be she feel bad that i shd say this things to her she is my father's frnd daughter...

 

Ram agian accha baba sorry mujhe wo sab nhi kahna tha...sorry...

 

Priya : its ok kya nam tha aapka ha ram...its ok... (Ram think itni jaldi naam bhi bhul gayi lol)

 

Ram : to aap jab se jawab kyo nahi de rahi thi...

 

 Priya : main soch rahi thi ki mujhe khush hona chahiye ya sochna chahiye ki aap mujhme intrestd kyo nahi hai...

 

Ram : kya???? Kya kya kya...

 

Priya : haaa means agar aap jaisa insaan mujhme intrestd nahi hai to sach me mujhe apne baare me sochna hi chahiye...

 

Ram : wat u mean aap jaisa ram asking with his eyebrows up...

 

Priya : aap jaisa matlab show him her hand up down and seeing him from top to bottom

 

Now ram cough and shut button of his coat breathe in say... Is baat se mujhe bhi kush hona chahiye ya sochma chahiye... Hering this priya smiles and say copy cat...

 

Ram : same to u...pointing book in her hand... Priya give bill of books and dress to gaurd and They all come out of mall...

 

in parking area...

 

Sudheer ji and shipra ji u have car ????

 

SS - Haa Kk- ok aap aisa kariye aap meri car me aajaeye and ram priya ek car me aa jaenge...

 

Shipra kept eye on ram and priya...she said gud idea... Ram priya reach their

 

KK- ram beta tu priya ke sath unki car me aa jao main

 

SS ko apne sath le jati hu...

 

Ram : par ma its ok... Chale mis hop-hop... Yes double bettry...

 

Ram : give me keys...

 

Priya : y its my car and i knw driving... (Kk and ss left)

 

 Ram : i dnt trust u... Priya : ok then u can take cab and i ll follow ur mother byee...

 

Ram : are insist bhi nhi kiya...

 

Priya : aana chaho to abhi bhi aa jao...

 

Ram : ok he going to sit at back seat open the door...

 

Priya : o helllooo main tumahri driver nahi hoo...come and sit in infront seat janti ho aap ko jyada jagah lagti hai but my car have enough space for u...

 

Ram gets annoyed and come to front seat...

 

Priya started engine ram give direction his house and with lil fighting and talks both reached thier...

 

               Wow beautiful place... Priya said...

 

ram :Thank u...both enter in house sees

 

tea already served and Ak ans Sudheer enjoy thier talks and Shipra KK busy in gossiping... Sudheer calls priya and tell Ak ye hai meri beti priya...

 

Ak surprise to see girl in capri and hudi tshirt but he even more surprise to see When priya touches his feet and take blessing...namste uncle kaise hai aap...

 

And takes place on couch... Ram jst stand behind that couch

 

Ak- beta main theek hu ek baat kahna chahta hu...

 

 P : ji kahiye... Ak- beta aapko dekh ke lagta hai ki insaan ki pehchaan uske kapdo se nhi uske nature se hoti hai...

 

Ram says dhang se jante nhi hai warna pata chal jata nature kaisa hai...its loud enough to hear priya...

 

She gives angry looks to him...

 

Kk- beta jao priya ko apna ghar dikhao apna kamra dikhao... Ram give wierd looks to kk but agree chaliye...

 

Priya jst noded and goes with him... On climbing stairs priya says mujhe aapka ghar dekhne me koi dilchaspi nahi hai...

 

Ram : na mujhe tumhe dikhane ki... Jst priya's phone rang and she says can i take this call...

 

Ram : ye phone chori ka hai ??

 

 P : excuse me...mera phone hai R : to mujhse kyu puch rahi ho...

 

P: its manners may be u dnt know...

 

R : laugh and say looks who talking abt manners...

 

Priya attend call she said no really yar congo...i m out mene chk nhi kiya let me chk and she unknowngly open a door and goes inside that toom

 

Here Same time ram phone rang and he cames to another room to take call... Ram came out of room and see here there where is priya... Then he realize his room's door open...he runs inside the room... At that time priya cut the call and.she jst turnd and her eyes fall on bed...full of mess...poster on walls and some magazine on desk shattered...

 

And she turned around and saw ram looking him... And she said can i use ur laptop... Ram scratching his head by finger and said o yaa what happn suddenly...

 

P : o i have to chk my mail... R : yes here u go he give her lappy...

 

P : priya chk her mail and said i cant beleive... R : wat... P : i cant beleive i m going to Harvard university also i have option of IITs too...yippee and she dance like mad...there...

 

 R : said o congrats He said one min lett me chk my mail too...

 

He open his mail an he said ooo my god i cnt beleive i too get admission in Harvard University...

 

Both look at each other...

 

Bg bade acche lagte hai...

 

 

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Edited by Janilover - 2015-11-21T11:35:11Z
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Posted: 2014-10-16T11:16:55Z
interesting concept.. do continue
thanks fr the pm
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Posted: 2014-10-16T11:23:12Z
Beautiful story pls continue soon waiting for it
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Posted: 2014-10-16T11:26:54Z
Interesting start SmileSmileSmile
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Posted: 2014-10-16T11:29:28Z
Awesome Smile
Love priya's new look!!!
First meeting main hi fight...
Continue soon!!!
And thanks 4 pm!!!
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Posted: 2014-10-16T11:29:35Z
superb...very interesting
raya ka nok-jhok ek dum mast
loved it...thanks for PM
please continue
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Posted: 2014-10-16T11:30:01Z
superb it is..
update d nxts soon...
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Posted: 2014-10-16T11:50:40Z
exactly  our raya 
 journey starts with fighting now waiting for further 
 thank u for ur Pm.

 aapki FF mujhe  BADE ACHE LAGGTE HAIN .

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