~Ashlok FF:Written in stars:2~ch 82-epilogue on pg115,117,118*complete - Page 5

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Ashley realy wonderful story .I some how missed ur story after chapter 16 but today i got up all wow wonderful work dear i was reading it again and again after chapter 42 i was literally cried oh god shlok and varad is so mean it will b terrible to her she has none to express her self god its too much i accept she did mistakes but wat shlok did to her is can't justify plllsss update soon i want to see him repented pls updae soon yaar can't wait more
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Posted: 11 years ago
#42
plz update soon... 😭
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wow ... everybody is sooo dyingfor d update 😊 wow Ashley hv a lot of people crazy for ur FF 😉 well I guess u njoying ur weekend hope u hv a gr8 1 😊 bt whenever u get free plz update soon we r all craving
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Posted: 11 years ago
#44
wow I'm the first
awesome update. I want astha makes him suffer by her silence 😈
Edited by athmi - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#45
yippie...finally...waited whole day 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hi Ashley,
''You are not stupid,mistakes are meant to happen and as long as they are corrected, they become a learning experience which makes us stronger and better able to deal with the problems in future. Don't think about such things,they will just make you unhappy and anything which troubles you and makes you unhappy, it will make me unhappy too.''
These lines captivated my mind a lot dear.. Very beautifully written..
By mistakes people learn and realise ...
All Obstacles are stepping stones for a brighter future..Very nicely put..
NA is worried about her mental dilemma .. How can a brave be so depressive.. He is our detective now.. I guess kavya assistant to dig in the diary.. Not sure..
Shlok and Astha.. their chemistry.. Im not commenting as .. many have already commented..
Her tears.. MEANS A LOT NOW.. he is to grow up now and find the
TEARS WHICH SHE IS SHEDDING..
IS IT
SALTY ??
SWEET ??
BITTER??
SOUR??
Why the cry ???
Pain,Emptiness,Longing, Craving ..???
He to become Hero now..
I will wait ... Thanks a lot for ths update..
Edited by deepavasudev - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#47
ohhh thank u for the update ,was for waiting for this
beautiful update,now its shlok's turn to be sad as astha is not talking to him and avoiding him
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Thank U for the update dear now its a turn for shlok to suffer neatly written sorry for being greedy pls update another too yaar 😛
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Felt so pity for aastha :( poor her shlok had broken her, the tiny he once knew is gone, she is gone and maybe won't come back
That was visibly for me the moment he started kissing her cheeks and she just cried and told him.not to touch hear
She can't bear his touch an longer even though he apologised for his behaviour at the function
I just hope she listens to him once
He was wrong but she was wrong too she repented for her mistakes now it is his turn to repent!
Loved it dearest pls update soon and do pm me *-*

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Very nice emotional update. Loving it please continue soon.

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