OS I am sorry Mr.kapoor last part updated page 2 - Page 3

Malati

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Posted: 9 years ago

Good execution of the two parts.
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Posted: 9 years ago

Very beautiful story... loved it.

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luvsakshi

@luvsakshi

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Posted: 9 years ago

Wow ...

lovely one ,...so every Mu cleared and loved the way you penned down .👏

Do write more ..

Thanks for pm ..

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contactcharu

@contactcharu

Goldie

Posted: 9 years ago

very nice
beautifully written

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leena

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Posted: 9 years ago

awww awesome update dear I so enjoyed it a lot... its too gud too read... i m loving it moving for the next part... will comment on last one...

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leena

@leena04

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Posted: 9 years ago

wowoowwo u took story into diffreant turn I so enjoyed it... RaYa finally pachted up... Ram undestood Priya's reasons & her condition was penned doen superbly it was way too gud too thought so enjoyed maxed one... & the last hot part was the best part of story... do write more will be waiting for it...

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