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Posted: 9 years ago
'True love'
            Part-7
Next day
Rk woke up late as he had drunk a lot last night he saw the time and was shocked it was 11:45 am in morning
Rk:- shit yaar I m late today also I need to talk to Madhu
( but his cell started ringing he frowned when he saw the caller ID )
Rk:- what is it Deepali ???
Dips:- Rk , where are you ?? I was trying your call since morning
Rk :- sorry , tell me what is it ???
Dips :- Rk, dad wants to meet you today , he wants us to get married as soon as possible
Rk:- what have you lost it Deepali , we are already engaged n now wedding , it's not possible now make some excuse to ur dad n delay the wedding okk
Dips;- but Rk
Rk: bye I have some important work
( he cuts the call )
Rk was confused what to do now on one side Deepali wants to get married to him and here last night he realised his love for Madhu
Here Radha enters Rk room with coffee for him
Radha;/ rishu, what happen what are you thinking beta ???
Rk:- nothing mom
Radha;- rishu I m ur mom u can't hide things from me ha ... I know you well beta
Rk:- maa I m confused, I don't know what to do ???
Radha:/ means , why r u confused beta, do only that thing which u think is correct
Rk:- Okkk maa , thanks
Radha:- ur welcome my son
(Rk decides to confess his feelings to Madhu n avoiding meeting dips he called her after 3-4 rings phone was picked )
Rk:- hello Madhu
Karan:- gud afternoon Rk , it's Karan here
Rk got angry hearing Karan's voice from madhu's phone
Rk:- where is Madhu??
Karan:- Rk Wo actually Madhu and trish Diii has gone out , I mean beauty parlour you know this ladies I tell you
Rk:- Madhu is gone out then why she didn't took her cell with her
Karan:- nice question Rk , Wo Kya hai na her bettry was dead n trish Diii had appointment at 11:00 am so she left her cell in her room for charging n I was searching my jacket in madhu's room and her cell ringed n I picked up
Rk:- ohhh Okkk
Karan:- hmm
Rk:- hey Karan do u have any idea till when she will be back
Karan:- no Rk actually whenever Madhu goes to parlour she spend 2-3 hours there it's her hobby u know
Rk:- yeah yeah I know everything abt her
Karan;- Rk you want me to give her any of your massage???
Rk:- no Karan thanks I will meet her in evening only its Sangeet today na
After attending Rohan's Sangeet I will be there too
Karan :- ohh okk but then too I will tell Madhu to call you okk
Rk:- yeah thanks Chal bye
Karan: bye

(Rk decides to continue his work for rest of the day and talk to Madhu in evening and confess his love to her )

Rk reached Rohan's place and greeted him and found dips there
Dips :- ohh Rk thank god we met here
Rk:- yeah
Dips :/ r u planning to go in trish side Sangeet
Rk:/ obviously I m going there only , I can't miss her SAngeet she is Gona kill me for sure
Dips :/ correct , even I m going there so can we go together
Rk :- yeah sure
( he thinks it's correct opportunity to talk to dips abt his feelings for Madhu but can't talk as dips was busy on her cell phone talking abt some project till they reach malik mansion )


They both went inside
Both were greeted by padmini and malik
As Rk entered inside he was only searching for one person but was not able to found the one anywhere so he went to trishna to greet her they were chit chatting abt some thing but they were interrupted but malik's voice

( ladies and gentlemen thank you so much for coming here and giving my daughter trishna your blessings as you all know that mehendi function is on day after tommrow but tommrow is also big function here so my younger daughter madhubala is getting engaged to her best friend Karan kapoor )
Everyone there started clapping as the announcement was declared
Karan and Madhu come near malik and took his blessing n same they did to padmini, Radha, Mohan and reena jii)

Now Karan tool Mike from malik and started speaking
Karan:- madhubala , Madhu , Maddy since the first day I have seen you I have loved you , your smile makes me smile when you are sad that makes me sad also I want to make you happy for life time now he bends on his knees will you plz accept my praposal Maddy I love

Madhu:- yes Karan I will marry you (she didn't saw Rk ) and hugged him and from behind comes there friends and hugged them.

Here Rk's heart was broken into pieces he had never imagine that his Madhu will agree easily his thoughts were disturb by trish
Trish:- Rk, your best friend Madhu is going to get married don't you want to congratulate her ???
Rk:- trish when did this happen ??? And why Madhu agreed ???
Trish;/ Wo actually Rk last night mom and dad loved Karan and madhu's chemistry in dance and secondly karan's love for Madhu it is visible in his eyes
Rk:- that it's in my eyes too
Trish:- yeah you must love Madhu she is ur best friend na Rk
Rk:- but how Madhu agreed
Trish:- mom n dad talk to her n she happily agreed as she is very comfortable reena Aunty and karan's loves for her is enough
Rk:- ohh ( I have to talk to her now it's enough she can't marry any one like this I love her )

Trish: Rk , come we must go and congratulate them come , wow even dips is also here

Madhu and Karan were surrounded by there friends from Mumbai
Dips :- Congo Madhu ( hugged her)
Madhu:- thanks Deepali
Dips :- congratulations to you also Karan (shakes her hand )

Karan:- thanks Deepali, Rk you won't congratulate your friends
Rk:- ohh of courts Congo Karan ( but he ignored Madhu this time )

Trishna :- guys it's my Sangeet yaar nobody is going to dance or what ???
Dips:- we all will dance trish but with our respective partners correct guys
Madhu :/ yeah , Karan will you Dance with me (looking towards Rk who's gaze was on her)
Karan:- sure , but Maddy its my line
Trish :- so you both will start first hmm go ahead
Dips :- Rk shall we
Rk /- yeah


Balam Pichkari started playing in background

Balam pichkaari Jo tune mujhe maari
Toh bole re zamaana kharaabi ho gayi
Mere ang raaja Jo tera rang laaga
Toh seedhi saadhi chhori sharaabi ho gayi..

(Madhu started dancing waving her hands in air)

(Itna mazaa kyun aa raha hai
Tune hawa mein bhaang milaya) (Repeat once)
Dugna nasha kyun ho raha hai
Aankhon se meetha tune khilaya

(Karan came in between and started dancing with her )
Ho teri malmal ki kurti gulabi ho gayi
Manchali chaal kaisa nawaabi ho gayi

Toh balam pichkari jo tune mujhe maari
Toh seedhi saadhi chhori sharaabi ho gayi


Haan jeans pehan ke jo tune mara thumka
Toh lattu padosan ki bhaabhi ho gayi
Haan balam pichkari jo tune mujhe maari
Toh seedhi saadhi chhori sharaabi ho gayi
Haan jeans pehan ke jo tune mara thumka
Toh lattu padosan ki bhaabhi ho gayi

(Now Rk came near Madhu n hold her hand spin her and she bumped into his chest)

Teri kalaayi hai haathon mein aayi hai..
Maine maroda toh lagti malaayi hai

(Madhu also in full attitude answer in with her dancing )
Mehenga pade ga yeh chaska malaayi ka
Upwaas karne mein teri bhalaayi hai

Rk and Karan both dance
Ho bindiya teri maahtaabi ho gayi
Dil ke armaano mein behisaabi ho gayi

Toh balam pichkaari jo tune mujhe maari
Toh seedhi saadhi chhori sharaabi ho gayi
Haan jeans pehan ke Jo tune maara thumka
Toh lattu padosan ki bhaabhi ho gayi..
Balam pichkaari jo tune mujhe maari
Toh seedhi saadhi chhori sharaabi ho gayi..
Haan jeans pehan ke Jo tune maara thumka
Toh lattu padosan ki bhaabhi ho gayi... Hey.. hey.. hey..

Hey kyun no vaccancy ki hothon pe gaali hai
Jabke tera dil ka kamra toh khali hai
(Kamra toh khali hai]
Mujhko pata hai re kya chahta hai tu
Boli bajan teri neeyat kawaali hai
Zulmi yeh hazir jawaabi ho gayi
Tu toh har taaley ki aaj chaabi ho gayi

Toh balam pichkari jo tune mujhe maari
Toh seedhi saadhi chhori sharaabi ho gayi
Haan jeans pehan ke jo tune mara thumka
Toh lattu padosan ki bhaabhi ho gayi
Balam pichkari jo tune mujhe maari
Toh seedhi saadhi chhori sharaabi ho gayi
Haan jeans pehan ke jo tune mara thumka
Toh lattu padosan ki bhaabhi ho gayi

Haan bole re zamana kharaabi ho gayi
Haan bole re zamana kharzabi ho gayi

They complete there dance and went near Trishna

Madhu;- did you liked it didu

Trishna :- I loved it Madhu, but Madhu why don't you And Rk dance for me

Rk:- means

Trishna :- Rk you and Madhu dance really well together since many days I haven't seen both of you dancing together plz for me plz Rk and u tho sing well too plz for me once

Rk:- ohh Kk trish only for you ( Rk wAs happy as atleast now trish was talking some sense and sending my Madhu with me )

Rk forwarded his hand to Madhu and she first hestiate but accepts it and goes with him to Dance floor

( Rk thought to express his feelings through his song and dance to Madhu)

(Pehli nazar mein from race )

Rk holds Madhu close to his chest and started dancing with her

Pehli nazar mein
Kaise jaado kar diya
Tera ban baita hai
Mera jiya
Jaane kya hoga
Kya hoga kya pata
Is pal ko milke
Aa jee le zara
Mein hoon yahan
Tu hai yahan
Meri bahon mein aa
Aa bhi ja
O jaan-e-jaan
Dono jahan
Meri bahon
Bhool Ja aa
meri ba
Baby i love u, baby i love you, baby i love you, baby i love you so much
Baby i love u
Oh i love u
I love u
I love u so much
Baby i love u

He sung those lines looking into madhu's eyes and she was shocked that it wasn't song he was literally speaking those words from heart


Har dua mein shamil tera pyaar hai
Bin tere lamha bhi dushwar hai
Dhadhkon ko tujhe se hi darkar hai
Tujhse hai rahtein
Tujhse hai chahtein
Tu jo mili ek din mujhe
Mein kahin ho gaya lapata
O jaan-e-jaan
Dono jahan
Meri bahon mein aa
Bhool Ja aa
Kar diya Deewana dard-e-Kash ne
Chain cheena isqh ke ehsaas ne
Bekhayali di hai tere pyaas ne
Chaya suroor hai
Kuch to zaroor hai
Yeh dooriyan
Jeene na de
Hal mera tujhe na pata
O jaan-e-jaan
Dono jahan
Meri bahon mein aa
Bhool Ja aa
Baby i love u, baby i love you, baby i love you
(Karan and Deepali don't like there closeness but didn't speak any thing )

As song fineshed Madhu was well aware abt Rk feelings for her so she try to go away from him but all in vain he took her to near by room

Madhu:- Rk , what are u doing???

Rk:- why it is hurting you or what ??? That Karan always drags you like this only na ???

MaDhu:- Rk , Karan is my fianc he have all rights on me

Rk:- no he don't , only I have rights on you did u get it or not only me rishba Kundra have rights on Madhubala

Madhu:/ Rk have you lost it what you are speaking

Rk:- yes I have lost it , I love you Madhu I love you Madhu

Madhu:- you love me really Rk u love me then why did you proposed Deepali ha

Rk:- it's just an crush Madhu you are my true love

Madhu:- you have lost it Rk

Rk:- yes I have lost it but Madhu plz believe me I really love you Madhu

Madhu :- Rk it's too late now u are fixed for Deepali and I m fixed for Karan so you plz better forget me and think me as friend

Rk:- don't you dare to join you name with Karan

Madhu :- Rk shut up plz its too much now

Rk:- yes it's too much Madhu I won't let you marry him that's my promise

Madhu:- Rk

Rk:- Madhu tell me do you love me plz tell me na Madhu plz did u have or had any feelings for plz Madhu tell me

MadhU:- yes I did love you but now no Rk you choose Deepali over me and my parents choose Karan for me

Rk:- nooo

Madhu:- do whatever you want Rk I m going to marry Karan for sure okk

Rk:- This thing is not going to happen mark my words Madhu and I m damn serious this time , I m sorry for last time but it won't happen this time

Rk come forward and kissed Madhu hard on her checks and left from there



( Madhu was too shock to respond )

So what will Rk do I need your suggestions guys do tell me what you think hoe he should make her fall for him now

It's end of part -7 hope you liked it I know Rk is rude but it's just his frutration that's it

Plz guys hit the like button and comment on it plz its means a lot to me



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Posted: 9 years ago
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superb update dear
n madhu y is she doing this when she loves rk Edited by v.p.joshi - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
👏 me first...yayyy...n was surprised to see two updates...loved both of them madhu being strong n not a love sick puppy in front of rk was v v nice...good she said yesbto karan but wanted rk to feel the sorrow of what madhu went thro when he was with dips... let him suffer more n he should wooo madhu at no end in all sorts that madhu should melt but not easily...lovely


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Posted: 9 years ago
Now may i say that madhu is a mules head 
On wat basis can we demand that rk shd suffer bcoz clearly madhu didnt trusted her love enough to go n confess him wen he announced the engagement if after confession he wld have rejected her then her rejecting him wld have made senses but clearly she didnt took any initiative to get him or make him realise her n his love whereas he not only confessed but is also taking step to stop her frm ruining four lives so i dnt think there is any need for him to suffer as her rejecting him for no reason is enought heartbreak for him now aint it 
Phir bhi let rk get in some accident n break his bones n go in coma for short period automatically everything will get cleared bcoz surely dips wont wait for him then n madhu wld realise her stupidity of saying yes to karan n their families wld also get insight into their stupidities 
Rest upto u n i dnt want stupid karan n madhu romance they really annoy me to core atleast rk is not dancing with dips nor chanting her name but madhus karan chanting sucks top core it reminds of donny bhai era of mb lol n i hate that period 
But tell me if she really loved rk then how she forgot him so easily that he needs to make her fall in love again surely u cant forget ur first love like that its no tofee wrapper to throw away 
But madhu ke case mein sab jayez hai lol 
Waiting for my heros heroic antics now i m sure he is going to break his engagement with dips in party .
Edited by Love-Blossoms - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
thanks for the pm
wonderful update
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hmm!! Nice update... RK should make her realize that she still love him madly... It's time to show RK's passion for her 😉
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Posted: 9 years ago
Superb update...
Madhu said yes to karan...wowww...now rk baby u gonna get d taste of ua own medicine..ab pta chlega how it feels lyk to c ur love wid sum1 else...
Girl u used my fav song pehli nazar n i fell in love wid dis song ol ovr again...
Waiting fr d nxt update..
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome and super update
Really I wanted this to happen a lot 
I want Madhu to get engaged to Karan
and Rk to feel what she felt
Deepali is pushing him for marriage
He wants to propose Madhu
and finally he proposed her

Now I think Rk must make Madhu fall 
For him 

Waiting
Continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
Why is madhu nt accepting rk n spoiling 4 lifes i think rk will prove to madhu n their parents dat she luv him n cant live without him
Awesome update i luv dis update alot has madhu n rk both confessed their luv
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Posted: 9 years ago
Good answer madhu gave to rk !! First n all he ignored her love and den coming at last moment !! Make rk lil suffer !! If it wud have been any other pair instead of rishbala i wud have said madhu to go with karan and that is rite but here i want my rishbala together ! I cant see dem seperate !! 
noww think think think wat rk will do ? hmm jealousy will not work as she already accepted rk wid deepali and used to it !! One thing can be done make this karan a wrong guy and rk has to prove karan bad !! Den wat abt deepali shr will also feel bad rite? Hmm lets ser wat happens in future updates ! 
Nice update !! Thanks for pm