One sad story, Rae.
Hate him as much as you want, one can't help feeling sorry for the arrogant man going through so much pain. He is miserable and he alone is the reason for this misery.One sad state of affairs.
One sad story, Rae.
Hate him as much as you want, one can't help feeling sorry for the arrogant man going through so much pain. He is miserable and he alone is the reason for this misery.One sad state of affairs.
Originally posted by: BlueMystique
I like the way you write Arnav. Especially, Arnav who is broken.
His thoughts reminded me of the 10 things I hate about you speech, a much sadder version of it, of course.Poignant and Poetic. I liked it :)
Brilliant, once again a few words that speak volumes. By not revealing too much, you leave the readers mind open to many interpretations. I loved that
Arnav's hate for Khushi made him forge a realionship with her, his hate for himself forced him to let her go...Hate the sin, love the sinner...
MistyRains (Sona) I'm so glad you made Rae write this. It's an amazing piece. And something I've always wished Khushi had done.
Originally posted by: bablubli
Thank you Rae...beautifully written! So aptly describes Arnav & the state of his mind. Very poignant. Please do write more often...
Originally posted by: Titaliya_AP
This is how Arnav would have handled being separated from Khushi. We do not know if he knows the truth or not because it does not matter, all that does is that Khushi is no longer with her Arnav. Belle left before she could save the beast in this one and now he has doomed himself...
Beautifully written, a little over 500 words that convey so much. Hate, love, anguish, desperation, loathe, fury, and probably so much more. I could clearly visualize this, I can imagine this scene happening in IPKKND, actually I find myself wishing it did!
Originally posted by: IronButterfly
Couldn't live with her & now can't live without her.
He's broken.
Very well written.
Originally posted by: AngelTeen
To rephrase (if I may) -Arnav's 'hate' for Khushi made him forge a relationship with her, his hate for himself allowed him to let her go...And I love this line - Hate the sin, love the sinner...very nice.Thank You so much for commenting and the constant encouragement! :)
Originally posted by: Japonica
AT, WOW! This is the perfect short story.
Super to read your work after so long!
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