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Zain have heard Aliya's voice on the phone so he is shocked.
Niw he is aware that his Aliya is in Pune.
And yea not only the precap the whole 2-3 chapters will be confusing.
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Chapter 10

 

Aliya is shattered. A mixed feelings of love, joy, sorrow and fear. Her heart beat fastened and she couldn't breathe properly. The name made her eyes go wet in a second. Her body felt a current. She is sweating profusely. Her face turned pale.

Farheen : Got it...She is Aliya.

Zain : Aliya...Aliya...Farheen hand over the phone to her.

Farheen : What?

Aliya ran out of the room.

Farheen : Maam  maam...

Zain : What happened?

Shabana and Aayat are confused seeing Zain's reaction.

Farheen : She ran out of the room.

Zain : Oh no...

Farheen : Wait I'll call you in a min.

Farheen hanged up the call and he went out the room.

Staffs saw Aliya running out and all were in panic.

Farheen : What happened to her?

Staff 1 :  No idea sir...

Staff 2 : Cone on follw her go...

Farheen is left clueless and totally confused. He called Zain again.

Zain : What happened to Aliya.?

Farheen : I have no Idea. She ran out of the room and her staff are following her out. I think she is not feeling well or something.

Zain : What happened in the room?

Farheen : Nothing we were just talking on the deal...and her face turned pale and she rushed out.

Zain : What were the conversation exactly before she left.

Farheen : Zain, why?

Zain : Sir, please I need this...

Shabana and Aayat were afraid now seeing Zain turning pale.

Farheen : Ok I'll try to...

Zain : Mr. Khan you may not know...

Farheen : You asked her name and I was talking with you...

Zain : Then...What she told?

Farheen : Then she asked what happened to myself and you when I were not clear in my words...

Zain : She included me...can you recall the exact words?

 

*FlashBack*

 

Farheen : Oops the call got cut. Leave it...Wher were we Maam...

Aliya : In my name...

Farheen : Yes, maam your name...

Aliya looked on.

Farheen : No maam in my name...

Aliya : What happened to you and your client Mr...

Farheen : Zain maam...Mr. Zain Abdullah.

Aliya : Zain Abdullah...?

Farheen : Yes, Barkat Royal's owner. Zain Abdullah.

 

*Flash Back Edns*

 

Farheen : Then...

Zain : Oh no...do you have no idea where she is now???

Farheen :  I am standing in the corridor right now...no idea where she is...

Zain : I want Jasmines number and Aliyas...

Farheen : Ok I'll text you.

Zain sat in the sofa holding his head. When Aayat and Shabana sat in either sides and asked what happened.

Shabana : Zain what happened?

Aayat : Is everything ok??

Zain : No, Doll nothing is ok...

Shabana : Atleast tell me what happened?

Zain : Fhoops...Aliya ...Aliya...

Shabana : What happened to Aliya???

Zain : Aliya...is Aliya...I was to meet her...but I came here...Aliya...

Aayat : What Appi is in Pune now? So can we go there now?

Zain : She is not...She will not stay there anymore.

Aayat : Why?

Zain : She ran out her Cabin hearing my name and identity.

Aayat : Who told her.

Zain narrated all the way his trip to Pune and his journey till Bhopal...

Shabana : Allah, why are you giving this much tests to my children??

Aayat : Appi...I need to see Appi right now.

Zain : Well, I need to leave for Pune right now...

Zain went out and came back in few minutes.

Shabana : What happened?

Zain : The car...(He sat down in anger)

Shabana : Don't worry we may take a bus...

Just then Aayat got a call and she backed away.

Aayat : What? Why have you called me?

The person in the phone : Aayat...just now I came to Pune and you know whom did I see here?

Aayat : Aapi...I know...

Person : So why don't you guys come and meet her...

Aayat : Well, can you do one help for me?

Person : Ofc I can.

 

Place : Pune

Aliya ran all the way to her home...She locked her inside and cried out loud screaming Zain.

Aliya : ZZzaaaiiinnn...

The voice, the sound was from her heart deep inside her heart...

 

Few hours passed. She attended no calls...almost she had 100s of calls...

The knock at the door brought her again to sense...She looked at the time.

Aliya : It must me the Milk man.

She opened the door and the door was ajar...She turned back without seeing the person on the door.

Soon after the door was opened full by the person she heard a voice behind.

Zubbair : Aalu...

Aliya : Zubbu (Shocked) You...here...what are u doing here?

Zubbai : I just saw you running towards this colony so I came, I mean followed you here and I lost you so I had to ask all the houses from the first row and atlast found you here... What happened? Are you ok?

Aliya : No, nothing to me...I am ok...

Zubbair : Umm, Can I have a galss of water?

Aliya : yes, yes why not??

She moved towards the Kitchen.

Zubbair dialed a number. His phone showed Aayat.

Zubbair : Aayat. Plan A Success.

Aayat : Go on with the plan B. I have made Jiju stay here. Done. I'll cut the call now. Bye.

Zubbair : Done. Bye...

 

Precap :

Aayat : Jiju I think the bus has left...No bus  till tomorrow morning.

Zain is standing tears in his eyes.

 

 

 

 

 

Edited by ZaYa_Stories - 9 years ago
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