SwaRon FF: Remember You - Page 4

Ananya

@ExpectoPatronus

IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 9 years ago

ohh gosh... Why i m thinking ke sharon wl frgt her past.?? :'(
awsm update dear... Loved it as usual.
plzzz update soon... God bless

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Khizar Ali

@Khizar_SWARON

Senior Member

Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: AnanyaVruShan
ohh gosh... Why i m thinking ke sharon wl frgt her past.?? :'(
awsm update dear... Loved it as usual.
plzzz update soon... God bless

Yep same feeling here, what if she forgets everything?

By the way awesome update and great job hope you update soon enough

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@Incorrect

Goldie

Posted: 9 years ago

you literally scared ma gal

thankfully sharon z alright

i must say very good update

emotions were penned nycly

update soon dea

love

shini

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shaaz23

@shaaz23

Senior Member

Posted: 9 years ago

Great update
U scared me
But thanks for saving Sharon
I think next is memory loss
Update soon will be waiting

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Manisha Bhardwaj

@Rockingbhardwaj

IF-Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

I was like ..what...is sharon dead?..
you
really scared me dear...
bt rlvd to know that she is fine...
very emotional update dear...
thanks 4 d pm.

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athi_vrushan

@athi_vrushan

Goldie

Posted: 9 years ago

You just scared the shit out of me,
agar aage nahi likhi hoti tho meri heart attack ho jati.really nic update.wanna read more n more.update the nxt part soon.thnx 4 the pm

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Mansi

@Mansi98

Goldie

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Posted: 9 years ago

Nice update👏

bt un scared me 2 d hell😲

will be waiting for d next part😊

update soon😊

n thanx fr d PM😊

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paro1311

@paro1311

Senior Member

Posted: 9 years ago

This sounds a lot diff from friendzoned in terms of character.. as u said urself, they were your own creation while here u r dealing with already familiar ones. but then again u r doing full justice to them here as well.

Coming to the story an accident at this point is scary and seems to be the point that kicks off the story. im a big Imagine dragons fan:) so loved the way chapter 2 started. Ur an awesome storyteller so no doubt im gonna follow this story too.

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rosy kohli

@rosyrkohli

IF-Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

tis was some catch i can say tat

something got stuck in my throat wen i read the end

i was completely taken aback wit the end

n then i scroll down to read ur note

n relief spread thru my viens

coming to ur ff swayam's pov his pain was heart-wrenching

i cud actually emphatise wit swayam

his emotional experience on a whole was very apt

his reaction wen he chokes the other person

n then wen he is embarassed

on his on behaviour was superb

he was tat involved in processing tat sharon is hurt

n his emotional aspects of pain.comes out as a rage

i think u definitely know how to express

wat a character is truely going thru

i hav to say tis was one exceptionally brilliant way

of presenting ur chapter

all in all a very emotional update

do update soon shristi 🤗

Edited by rosyrkohli - 9 years ago

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darshita

@sweetydiyafrien

IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 9 years ago

the both the chapter were quite shock but great and fabulous...
do continue soon

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