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Disclaimer:
Whatever is mentioned in this OS is purely a work of fiction produced from my zombie head as I have these days lost sleep like many of my co-Ragna lovers due to ofcourse RagNa!
You may not follow anything but that again is not my fault. If you can follow EMA that CV's show then I thought you are capable of digesting anything under the sun!
WARNING:
This OS is not about RagNa so please dont bash me if you read it expecting some RagNa coochie-co moments and what you read make you go to the toilet!
Also let me inform you this is a Mature Love Story and by mature I dont mean Mature content it means Love story of Matured people!!!
So if you are still reading this line, it means you are in love with my writing skills no matter however horrible it is and I would like to take this opportunity to thank you for being so loyal to me and continue to read...
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Ek Nayi Mutthi Ek Naya Aasmaan!
This is from continuation of today's episode where Vitthal comes home and finds Raghav at their home! He is enraged and asks him to leave.
When he hears that Kamla intends to take the order from Raghav for the party he looses his cool!
What is with you two mother and daughter? Dont you have something called self respect? Besharmi ki hadd paar kar di tumne! How could you both forget what he did to your daughter?
And you Kalpi? What is it with you? Have you forgotten your insult so soon? These rich people only know to take advantage of us and he is doing exactly the same.
Why do you women never listen to me? Dont you respect me?
Kamla says 'Aisa nahi hai Vitthal, Cafe is not our own but also belongs to the entire chawl. And they will want to take this order as it will give us profit'.
Vitthal slaps on his forehead and nods his head. Kuch nahi hoga tum dono ka. And sits on the sofa. Kamla keeps his tea on the tabl and she and Kalpi both leave to give this good news to the chawl women. Someone has heard this entire conversation at the window behind the curtains.
Vitthal is in tears. His entire life he has always loved Kamla and Kalpi and he has never gone against any of Kamla's wishes even if it was giving Kalpi's right to Paakhi! He felt so helpless now.
Suddenly he saw a hand holding the tea cup towards him.
Ab toh chai pee hi lo! Tumhaari biwi jo banaa ke gayi hain.
When will you realise that Kamla has always done what she feels is right! She alienated my Paakhi from me and always made me look like a joker in front of my husband Saahil. See naa nowadays Saahil is also not bothered about me.
What not I have done for him? I have always supported him in all his decisions right or wrong. And what did I get? Today I am in this chawl and even listening to your taunts. I thinks our fates are similar! Both our life partners and our children don't value us.
She said with tears in her eyes.
Vitthal who is always irked by her comments today felt a pain in his heart! He looked at her and saw her tears were real!
Oh I know you are a perfect Kamini but did not know that you had a heart too. So now you can understand my feelings is it?
Neetu laughed through her tears. You are amazing you know that? You cannot live without taunting me right? It gives you some 'Kick'😉 right? What do you think of yourself? Salman Khan!
Vitthal, hello memsaab Salman toh actor hai actor, samjhi? I am real! He laughs, waise tum bhi kuch kam nahi! Bilkul woh serial waali kya kehte hain? Haan Vamp...Vamp ho!
Neetu widens her eyes but then smiles when Vitthal says ekdum Kamini par khoobsurat!!
Haan Saahil also used to say that but these days he does not even call me! She hugs Vitthal and starts crying!
Vitthal is completely shocked! Excuse me madam main sirf achhi auraton ko hug karta hoon! I mean my wife and my daughter!
But Neetu was still crying! and mumbling Meri beti ne bhi mujhe moo pher liya and sniff sniff my chocopie ki toh koi kahbar hi nahi!
What will I do now! Imagine being alone at this age!!Vitthal I am sorry for everything I have realised that being bad is no good!!! But please dont call me Kameeni. Atleast I m less Kameeni than Raghav an my own daughter!
Vitthal wanted to just go away from her amd make her stop wailing. He was worried what if Pakya walked in and found him like that? Achha theek hai I will not call you Kameeni but promise me you will not hurt Kamla or Kalpi and stop scheming against them. I will buy you your favourite chilly paneer and chow mein if you stop crying.
Neetu stopped crying and looked up at Vitthal in shock! Tumko maalum hai mujhe chinese pasand hai? Vitthal himself is surprised that he remebered such details about her!
Haan woh pichli baar mein laaya tha toh saara tumne hi thoos liya tha! Neetu was embarassed and sheepishly said haan mujhe na khaane ka badaa shaukh hai... Woh asli punjaaban hoon naa!
By the way mujhe nahi pataa tha Marathi men are so sweet! she said shyly. Kamla is so lucky naa.
Vitthal smirked I dont know if she is lucky but I used to think I am lucky to have a wife like her. But it seems I am never good enough for her!
Neetu: Lets be friends Vitthal! Lets go out in the evening, You know I always wanted to eat those roadside paanipuris but Saahil always made fun of me. You will take me naa. We will forget our sadness and have some fun. We also have right to live our lives fully naaa!!
Vithhal wanted to say no to her but he was surprised when he heard himself saying theek hai jaayenge!
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I was just feeling bad for these two characters isliye this OS! Hope you have enjoyed reading this as much as I enjoyed writing it!
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