RagNa OS: A Wound Heals | Ek Mutthi Aasmaan

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Amy

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Posted: 9 years ago

Gosh Raz, this is the last thing I want to happen in EMA..But I loved ur OS..the way u portrayed Kalpi's emotions r good!! 👏👏

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Erika

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Posted: 9 years ago

😭😭😭

I don't want Raghav to slap Kalpi. Kalpi should sap him in return 😡

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@HappySmiles

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Posted: 9 years ago

Brilliant OS Raz!!😃
I feel bad for Kalpana and anger at Raghav.😡
I am glad that Kalpana didn't listen to any of Raghav's words after the slap, she was insulted in front of her mom after all.
You have written this in such a nice way, keep it up.😳

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Foram

@foram.

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Posted: 9 years ago

nice os...
m in tears 😭 😭 😭

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Priya

@priya_remix

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Posted: 9 years ago

OMG Rags thank god I read this because I was about to make a similar OS! But I got busy updating my FF and thought will post this OS tomorow!

And trust me I had thought about exactly the same thing! Great minds think alike dont they?

Nicely written though! Very emotional! Although I had wanted Kalpi to spit out the venom that his slap gave her and then leave him to rot in hell with the devil's companions

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rani214

@rani214

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Posted: 9 years ago

Wow amazing loved ur os

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ragnabw

@ragnabw

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Posted: 9 years ago

Loved ur OS razz plz update soon 👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

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MagicalMadness

@MagicalMadness

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Posted: 9 years ago

Loved loved loved it!!! I want kalpi to do this! Continue don't stop there show her journey and how she makes rags eat his words and meet someone new!!

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