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Dear forumwaasis
This is my first attempt at an OS though I'm an avid reader of all the os, ss and ff
This is something based in the current track
Writing from my phone so please ignore the errors.
Not proofread
It begins from the point where shagun to defend herself yells adi's name in court.
Shagun: par Maine kuch kiya nahi toh why should I go to jail? Your honor yeh accident Maine nahi mere bte Adi be kiya hai, I was only trying to protect him.
All shocked specially ishita who looks at Raman with shock and accusatory eyes.
She wipes her tears and gets up and says something to mrs kaul.
Mrs kaul: your honour meri client mrs Ishita Bhalla wants to say something
Judge: mrs Bhalla ko Jo bhi kehna hai woh witness box main aake kahe.
Ishita walks towards the witness box and everybody is wondering what is going on in Ishita's mind.
Judge: go on mrs Bhalla what do you want to say to the court?
Ishita: your honour jab bache galti karte hain fault unka nahi hota, fault unke parents ka hota hai, unki upbringing pe hota hai.
Aditya ke saath bhi wohi hua, accident usne kiya but galti Uske mom dad ki hai.
Uski ma ne ek 12 saal ke bache ke hath main gaadi pakdadi aur galti Karne ka chance diya aur pita ne bache ko sahi raah dikhane ke bajay uski galti pe parda daalna chaha.
Your honor main nahi chahti hoon ki mata-pita ki galti ki sazaa ek 12 saal ke bache ko mile, that's why I want to withdraw the case your honor and I apologise for wasting the courts time.
Judge: mrs Bhalla ki baatein sun kar yeh adaalat unhe yeh case waapas lene ka adhikar deti hai and ms shagun and me bhalla ko yeh warning deti hai ki agar Aditya se phir koi galti hui toh na sirf Aditya pe balki mr Bhalla and ms shagun pe bhi case kiya jaayega. The court is adjourned
Ishita walks out if the court, the bhallas and iyers are very proud of ishita and Raman has tears in his eyes. Tears of guilt, sorrow and pride all mixed in one.
Everybody comes outside the court and Raman goes to ishita and his tail shagun follows him.
Raman: ishita aaj tumne Jo kiya Uske liye I cannot thank you enough...I mean(ishita cuts him)
Ishita: please Raman don't be in the mu that I did anything for you, I did it for that 12year old child who hasn't been taught any values. When you knew you could have simply brought him to my amma and made him apologise, made him realise his mistake. But no you instead of teaching him values were trying to cover up his crime. I'm ashamed at you Raman
(she turns to walk away when someone grabs onto the end of her pallu. When she turns around to see it's adi who has grabbed onto Ishita's saree)
Adi: kya sachi main sorry bolne se sab theek ho jaata?
Ishita: ( she kneels down in front of Adi). Beta, sorry beta nahi bolongi. Listen Adi everybody makes mistakes but what is an even bigger mistake is not owning up to the mistake and apologising for it. Just like you love your mother, I too love my amma and you nearly killed her. Have you thought about that? Once you realised she was ok you should have apologised to her, but you didn't do that either. Khair it's not my place to tell you anything.
( she gets up to leave)
Adi: ( hesitantly) Ishita aunty will you take me to your amma?, I want to apologise to her.
Raman shagun and ishita all three are shocked.
Ishita: of course be..(sorry) Adi chalo I'll take you to my house and you can apologise to her.
(Adi leaves with ishita without so much as a backward glance to Raman and shagun who are standing there in shock)
********************iyer house****************
Adi: I'm so sorry aunty, I should not have been driving that car and I should have helped you even after I hit you. Please forgive me(crying)
Mrs Iyer: aiyyo Adi it's okay, dekho I'm perfectly alright now. But never make a mistake like this again.
( just then ruhi comes from school and sees ishita and runs to her)
Ruhi: ishima mujhe bahut bhook lagi hai...jaldi kuch do na
Ishita: ruhi tum jao apne kapde change karo tab tak ishima tumhare liye fatafat noodles banayegi.
(Ruhi sees Adi)
Ruhi: Adi bhaiyya aap bhi khane ko aao na, ishima world ke sabse best noodles banati hai.
(Adi looks hesitantly at ishita)
Ishita: haan Adi aa jao tum bhi khane ko aao.
*************Bhalla house*************
Ruhi ishita and Adi are at the dining table and ruhi and Adi are eating. Mr and mrs Bhalla, romi and simi are there too.
Ruhi: yummy ishima noodles
Toh Kitne tasty hain, maine right bola tha na Adi bhaiyya ishima world ke best noodles banati hain ki nahi?
Adi: yes ruhi they are really very nice.
( they finish eating)
Aunty now I should leave
Ishita: Arre Adi how will you go I'll drop you chalo.
Romi enters at that time.
Romi: bhabhi aap relax karo main Adi ko chodke aata hoon.
Before leaving
Adi: thank you ishita aunty for teaching me what was right and ruhi is right aap sach main world ke best noodles banate ho. Also aunty aap mujhe beta bula sakti hain.
Everyone present in the room have tears including Raman who has just entered and witnessed the scene between ishita and Adi.
Raman (st) ishita tumne aaj ek minute main mere bigde hue bte ko sahi raasta dikhaya, Maine kuch toh acha kiya hoga ki tum meri zindagi main aayi. ( wipes his tears) Maine tumhe bahut hurt kiya hain ishita but aur nahi, aaj se main tumse tab tak maafi maangta rahoonge, tab tak manata rahoonga jab tak mera diya hua sabhi dard tum bhula paaogi.
Thank you for reading guys, hope it didn't disappoint.
Feedback both positive and negative will be highly appreciated.
Thank you.
This is my first attempt at an OS though I'm an avid reader of all the os, ss and ff
This is something based in the current track
Writing from my phone so please ignore the errors.
Not proofread
It begins from the point where shagun to defend herself yells adi's name in court.
Shagun: par Maine kuch kiya nahi toh why should I go to jail? Your honor yeh accident Maine nahi mere bte Adi be kiya hai, I was only trying to protect him.
All shocked specially ishita who looks at Raman with shock and accusatory eyes.
She wipes her tears and gets up and says something to mrs kaul.
Mrs kaul: your honour meri client mrs Ishita Bhalla wants to say something
Judge: mrs Bhalla ko Jo bhi kehna hai woh witness box main aake kahe.
Ishita walks towards the witness box and everybody is wondering what is going on in Ishita's mind.
Judge: go on mrs Bhalla what do you want to say to the court?
Ishita: your honour jab bache galti karte hain fault unka nahi hota, fault unke parents ka hota hai, unki upbringing pe hota hai.
Aditya ke saath bhi wohi hua, accident usne kiya but galti Uske mom dad ki hai.
Uski ma ne ek 12 saal ke bache ke hath main gaadi pakdadi aur galti Karne ka chance diya aur pita ne bache ko sahi raah dikhane ke bajay uski galti pe parda daalna chaha.
Your honor main nahi chahti hoon ki mata-pita ki galti ki sazaa ek 12 saal ke bache ko mile, that's why I want to withdraw the case your honor and I apologise for wasting the courts time.
Judge: mrs Bhalla ki baatein sun kar yeh adaalat unhe yeh case waapas lene ka adhikar deti hai and ms shagun and me bhalla ko yeh warning deti hai ki agar Aditya se phir koi galti hui toh na sirf Aditya pe balki mr Bhalla and ms shagun pe bhi case kiya jaayega. The court is adjourned
Ishita walks out if the court, the bhallas and iyers are very proud of ishita and Raman has tears in his eyes. Tears of guilt, sorrow and pride all mixed in one.
Everybody comes outside the court and Raman goes to ishita and his tail shagun follows him.
Raman: ishita aaj tumne Jo kiya Uske liye I cannot thank you enough...I mean(ishita cuts him)
Ishita: please Raman don't be in the mu that I did anything for you, I did it for that 12year old child who hasn't been taught any values. When you knew you could have simply brought him to my amma and made him apologise, made him realise his mistake. But no you instead of teaching him values were trying to cover up his crime. I'm ashamed at you Raman
(she turns to walk away when someone grabs onto the end of her pallu. When she turns around to see it's adi who has grabbed onto Ishita's saree)
Adi: kya sachi main sorry bolne se sab theek ho jaata?
Ishita: ( she kneels down in front of Adi). Beta, sorry beta nahi bolongi. Listen Adi everybody makes mistakes but what is an even bigger mistake is not owning up to the mistake and apologising for it. Just like you love your mother, I too love my amma and you nearly killed her. Have you thought about that? Once you realised she was ok you should have apologised to her, but you didn't do that either. Khair it's not my place to tell you anything.
( she gets up to leave)
Adi: ( hesitantly) Ishita aunty will you take me to your amma?, I want to apologise to her.
Raman shagun and ishita all three are shocked.
Ishita: of course be..(sorry) Adi chalo I'll take you to my house and you can apologise to her.
(Adi leaves with ishita without so much as a backward glance to Raman and shagun who are standing there in shock)
********************iyer house****************
Adi: I'm so sorry aunty, I should not have been driving that car and I should have helped you even after I hit you. Please forgive me(crying)
Mrs Iyer: aiyyo Adi it's okay, dekho I'm perfectly alright now. But never make a mistake like this again.
( just then ruhi comes from school and sees ishita and runs to her)
Ruhi: ishima mujhe bahut bhook lagi hai...jaldi kuch do na
Ishita: ruhi tum jao apne kapde change karo tab tak ishima tumhare liye fatafat noodles banayegi.
(Ruhi sees Adi)
Ruhi: Adi bhaiyya aap bhi khane ko aao na, ishima world ke sabse best noodles banati hai.
(Adi looks hesitantly at ishita)
Ishita: haan Adi aa jao tum bhi khane ko aao.
*************Bhalla house*************
Ruhi ishita and Adi are at the dining table and ruhi and Adi are eating. Mr and mrs Bhalla, romi and simi are there too.
Ruhi: yummy ishima noodles
Toh Kitne tasty hain, maine right bola tha na Adi bhaiyya ishima world ke best noodles banati hain ki nahi?
Adi: yes ruhi they are really very nice.
( they finish eating)
Aunty now I should leave
Ishita: Arre Adi how will you go I'll drop you chalo.
Romi enters at that time.
Romi: bhabhi aap relax karo main Adi ko chodke aata hoon.
Before leaving
Adi: thank you ishita aunty for teaching me what was right and ruhi is right aap sach main world ke best noodles banate ho. Also aunty aap mujhe beta bula sakti hain.
Everyone present in the room have tears including Raman who has just entered and witnessed the scene between ishita and Adi.
Raman (st) ishita tumne aaj ek minute main mere bigde hue bte ko sahi raasta dikhaya, Maine kuch toh acha kiya hoga ki tum meri zindagi main aayi. ( wipes his tears) Maine tumhe bahut hurt kiya hain ishita but aur nahi, aaj se main tumse tab tak maafi maangta rahoonge, tab tak manata rahoonga jab tak mera diya hua sabhi dard tum bhula paaogi.
Thank you for reading guys, hope it didn't disappoint.
Feedback both positive and negative will be highly appreciated.
Thank you.
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