Life Is Full Of Secrets Good Bad Who Knows KR SS upd.pg. 7

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Hey guys 

I know sab log yeh soch rahe honge ki yeh kaha se tapaki well mai kahi se nahi tapaki hu. ðŸ˜†

Well an idea was bugging me since 2 weeks so i thought why not write a story on it. 

I havent thought of a title yet so joh title tum ko lage ki stroy ko suit karga wo mujhe bol dena

Enough of my bakbak 

 
INTRO.

What happens when your past comforts you?

What will happen when you meet your past?

What will happen when you get to know the truth which you never knew excited in life?

What will happen when you meet people you never knew were related to you? 

Many secrets will be revealed.

I know ki Intro thoda maybe shayad pura confusing tha but story ke sath jata hai se.
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Character Sketch
Reyaansh Singhania: son of ranvijay singhania. Best friends with swayam & sharon. 
Ex- of kriya. He also dated taani but broke up with her as she could not understand him.
He wants to meet his mom but he does not know where she is. He is brought up by his dad alone. Love kriya. 


Kriya R Singh Shekhawat: daughter of kritika shekhawat. Younger sister of rajveer shekhawat. Best daughter, best sister, best dancer, best student, great friend to have, best lover, & best SIL that everyone saying about of her. She is following her brother footsteps by being best in everything. Ex- of rey. Loves him alot. Know alot about his secrets & truth that he is not aware off. Best friend of Rohan. S & neha. 


Rohan. S: no one know what the S stands for in his name. Son of Preeti. S best friend of kriya & rajveer elder brother of neha. Loves both kriiya & neha equally. People always mistake him as a playboy or a innocent guy but when you get to know him he is a really quite sweet guy. Yet he is quite mischievous guy. Kriya partner in crime.


Neha. S: daughter of preeti younger sister of rohan. She is really close to kritika kriya's mom shares all her problems with kriya, rajveer & rohan. She is more close to rajveer than rohan. While kriya is close to all 3 of them. 

Rajveer shekhawat: kriya's elder brother. Best brother, best son, best businessman, best friend & best husband. That everyone's saying about him. In every way he is best in every way. Loves his sister his angel to death. If anyone hurts her it will their last day on earth. Loves his wife & mom alot. His baby his sister has always been his first priority. He is happy that his wife does not mind that & loves his sister as much as he does. Loves neha like his own sis. He has spoiled the 2 girls big time. Best of rohan.

Naina Rajveer Shekhawat: wife of rajveer. Loves him alot. Loves kriya like her baby. Is really attached to kriya & neha. Best bahu, best bhabhi. 


Kritika Shekhawat: mother of rajveer & kriya loves her kids alot. Really happy with their achievements in life. Loves rohan, neha, naina like her own kids. One the best buisness women in india. Has deep secret that no one knows other than her family. Preeti & kritika family live together & they own a big international company together. Best friend of preeti. 


Preeti. S: mother of neha & rohan. Loves her kids. Treats rajveer, naina & kriya like her own kids. She is really close to kriya always shares her problems with kriya. Best friend of kritika

Ranvijay Singhania: rey's father

How can we miss our gang & yes taani & aashi are there
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PART 1
Story starts after kriya comes back. Everyone is rude to her except neha & aashi. They were in canteen. Kriya was seating alone doing something on her phone. 
While gang was seating near by her table. Two guys were passing comments on kriya. 
They came near her. One of them tried to touch her before he could he got slap on his face. He looked up to see dared to slap him it was kriya. 
Kr: iss baar srif thapad mara hai dusri baar kisi bhi ladki ke sath batameze ki na tho mai make sure karuing ki tum dono collage se suspend ho jao. Wase bhi tum boys ka acha hai jab bhi koi nayi ladki dekhi nahi ki uske batameze karna suru. You guys are disgusting im very disappointed that this college has students like you. Shame on you.
 
Kriya left from there. After college all were seating BB court. Kriya was also there 
because neha & aashi forcefully pulled her there. A car stop before the gate of basketball court. The person inside the car honked few times. Kriya looked up well everyone looked up at the car the glass came down.
P: angel come on 

Kr: aa rahi hu
 
Kriya started picking up her stuff. 

Kr: neha tujhe nahi aana kya 

Ta: usse aana hoga wo aa jayehgi 

Kr: tumhara naam neha nahi so apne kaam se kaam rakho tumhara ghar nahi ki sab ko order deti raho. Wase bhi bholo maat ki GS bhi tum manipulation se bani ho
 
Kriya went from there. Neha went up to the guy in the car talked to him for a while. 
Neha came back.

Aa: woh kriya ka boyfriend types hai kya

Ne: aare nahi nahi woh uska bada bhai hai 

Si: uska naam kya hai kafi handsome tha

Ri: aur hot bhi

Sh: cute tha  
 
All looked at sharon as they never excepted sharon to say something she is never easily impressed 

Ne: girls girls sorry to break your heart but uske bhai ki already shadi ho chuki hai aur uske bhai ka naam rajveer hai 

Sw: tum kese janti ho i mean usne kabhi apne bhai ka metion nahi kiya tha 

Ne: wo actually before she could answer her phone rang 

Ne: ha bhai 

Ne: nahi bhai mai akele aa jaungi 

Ne: bhai 

Ne: ok bye 

Neha turned around. 

Ne: sorry neha ko jana hoga ab bye

All: bye neha  
 
Neha ran from there.
Everyone left for their house. Taani was really angry that kriya was back. Taani tried many ways to become like kriya. Dressing like her, talking like her, handling responsibility like her but was never successful in it. After all trying to be Kriya Shekhawat is not easy.
At kriya's house. 

L: pari niche aaja 

Kr: coming mom 

Kriya came down. Another lady was setting the dinner table 

L2: preeti kyun bighad rahi isse 

Pr: arey kriti jese tu neha ko bighadti hai wase mai kriya ko wase bhi kriya meri hi toh beti hai

Kr: ha mumma wase bhi birth aapne mujhe diya aur bada kiya preeti mom 

Kri: chal aaja dinner ready hai

G: hey monkey *guy said while hugging her*
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PART 2
 Here is the next part its long as you guys wanted it to be long.

G: hey monkey *guy said while hugging her*

Kr: Hi Robert 

Kri: rohan aa gaye tum 

R: ha mom 

They all had their dinner after dinner kriya, neha & rohan were seating in living area while their mom were in their rooms. 
Kriya was chasing rohan while neha was just looking at them.

Rajveer came out of the study after listening to the shouting noise. He was wearing a beater & tracks. 

Ra: neha champ kaha gayi 

Neha just pointed at the stairs were kriya was chasing rohan. 
As soon as they came downstairs raj pulled kriya back by holding her waist. 

Ra: chod de bichare ko 

Kr: aap bol rahe ho iss liye 

Ro: thank u yaar teri behan jungly hai yaar 

Kr: teri toh 

Raj pulled her back again 

Ra: soja jaldi 12 ke baad mujhe tum logo ki lights on nahi chahiyeh 

Kr;ne: ok bro/bhai

Raj kissed her forehead and left for his room after getting water. 

Neha, Kriya & Rohan were doing something on his laptop 
kritika came out of her rooms 

Kri: kriya soja fir subha chilayehgi ki teri nind puri nahi huyi aur rohan ko pareshan karegi

Kr: aapko nind aa rahi hai toh sojao na maine kab bola ki mere sone tak aap so nahi shakte. Aur wase bhi Robert ko koi problem nahi hai toh aapko kyun

Kri: chup shatian raj ne tujhe puri tarah se bigaad ke rakha hai 

Ne: mom jaane de kyun gussa kar rahi hai bichari pe. 

After saying good nite to the kids kritika left. 

Next few weeks went by fast nothing to special except they were almost normal with kriya except swayam, sharon, rey & taani. 

They seating in the canteen. Taani got kriya a sandwich 

Kr: thank u but no thank u taani mujhe bhook nahi hai 

Neha smelled something like mushrooms 

Ne: iss sandwich mein hai kya *angrily*

Aa: neha tum gussa types kyun ho rahi ho 

Ne: taani maine pucha iss sandwich mein hai kya 

Ta: normal sandwich hai neha 

Ne: mere samane jhoot mat bolo taani 

Kr: neha jaane dena 

Ne: arey ese kese jaa du

Sh: neha tum taani pe itna gussa kyun kar rahi ho 

Ne: kyunki iss mein mushrooms hai aur kriya ko mushrooms se bohat buri allergy hai 

Kr: neha usme uski galti hai usse thodi na pata hai ki mujhe mushrooms se allergy hai

Ne: wo janti hai maine use bola tha ki kriya ko mushroom se allergy hai use maat dena phir bhi wo de rahi jaan buchke YOU ARE DISGUSTING MISS. Taani Shekhawat. I feel bad for swayam ki wo tumhara bhai hai. 

Kr: neha chalo tum yaha se 

Re: ek toh taani ki insult karwati ho aur bolti ho ki chalo 

Kr: agar apni girlfriend itni hi fikaar hai toh use bolo ki mujhse dur rahe.
Kriya & neha left.

Aa: maine neha itna angry types kabhi nahi dekha 

Sw: wo kriya ke liye kafi protective hai 

Peon came & told them VP sir has called them in RH

they reached there saw neha & kriya already present with VP sir. 

Vp: well kriya se sune ke yeh acha laga ki tum logo apni personal problem ko chod ke uske sath cooperate kar rahe aur mai yeh bolne aaya tha ki mujhe kriya aur reyaansh ke performance annual day event mein chachiyeh.

Kr: lekin sir

Vp: kriya take it as a request from my side 

Kr: ok sir i dont have a problem.

Vp: rey u have to cooperate & work with kriya for this performance 

Re: yes sir

Kr: sir i have a request 

Vp: what is it kriya 

Kr: i hope you dont mind but can you make sure that no one comes in RH during my workshop as it wastes time & energy. *she said this while looking at taani*

Vp: sure kriya 

Kr: thank you so much sir 

Taani & VP leaves. They all start their rehearsals 

Kriya was helping vicky with a step but vicky refused 

Neha saw this.

Ne: wo tumhare betterment ke liye bol rahi hai so use attitude maat dikhao aur thik se shiko. 

Kr: neha rahene do wase bhi agar nahi learn karna hai toh use force kyun karna 

Kriya made them practice for 1 hour more. They left & reached canteen while kriya was still in the rehearsal hall. 

Ni: yaar yeh kriya samajhti kya hai apne aapko itni lambi practice. 

Ne: nil be thankful kyunki kriya continues 4 hours ki practice karati hai with only 10 mins break in between the 4 hours usse zayada nahi. So uss ke sath hum mess nahi kare toh acha hoga.

Vi: tumhe kya tum toh uski bestfriend ho so wo tumhe jane digi 

Kriya enter the canteen heard vicky's comment 

Kr: galat 

The gang turned towards her. 

Kr: koi mujhse related ho ya close ho iss ka matlab yeh nahi hai ki mai usse dusro se different aur special treatment dungi. Workshop ke time mere liye sab equal hai mujhse related hai ki nahi iss baat se koi pharak nahi padhta. 

Kr: aur ha kal subha jab college start hoga yani. 8 AM se direct 11 AM tak continues practice hogi aur warmup karna hai toh jaldi aaja na kyunki 8 am ke baad no warmup no nothing only practice. 

Ta: workshop isska matlab yeh nahi hai ki wo log subha ke sab lecture miss karnge 

Kr: tum naa hi mere workshop ka part ho nahi iss dance team ka so aapne kaam se kaam rakho 

Ta: iss college ki GS so mujhe iss sab ki information before time chachiyeh 

V: usse tumhe koi info dene ki zarurat nahi hai usse mujhe se permission already le li hai tumhari tara wo irresponsible nahi hai 

Ta: aap kon hai 

V: iss college ka principal Ravi Dixit 

Kr: welcome back sir

Ra: welcome back toh mujhe tumhe karna chahiyeh so how was ur learning experience 

Kr: it was amazing 

V: hoga kyun nahi after all woh apni birth country aur city wapas gayi 

Ga: karan sir 

Ka: hi guys. 

Ra: important announcement kriya Rohan mostly known as R.S. Will be joining you next with the workshop helping you i hope you are fine with it.

Kr: im perfectly fine with it sir *she said smiling wide*

Ni: I am very disappointed swayam i excepted your sister to be responsible like you but she is totally opposite to you.
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PART 3  
Kr: usse aur except kiya bhi kya jaa shakta hai *mumbled under her breath* 

Karan & ravi heard that suppressed their laugh. 

Kriya bites her tongue as she got that ravi & karan heard her. 

Kriya holds her one ear mouthed a sorry to 2 of them they just passed her a smile

Rey saw the silent interaction between the 3.

It was only the gang & 3 teacher in the college everyone else was gone as the college was over so they talked for a while then left. 
days passed annual happened the same in the show expect because of taani kriya fell down. 

After the performance rey takes kriya to the hospital. The doctor comes & a girl comes with him

Gi: kriya tum yaha kyun gayi mana kiya tha na tume 

Kr: wo bhabhi actually 

B: mai abhi rajveer ko call karti hu

Kr: bhabhi nahi bro. Ko nahi wase bhi wo mujhse already gussa hai agar iss bare mein pata chala toh fir toh mere murder hoga 

R: sahi kaha tune tu pitne toh wali hai mujhe 

Kr: b...b.. Bro wo.. actually.. baat.. Yeh hai ki 

R: baat kya hai kriya aur tumhari iss harkat ka mai kya matlab nikalu

Kriya just looked down upset as her brother for the first time called her by her first name without a word kriya let the doctor do his work it did pain but she still did not make a ahh sound because she knew her brother's anger. 
Ranvijay, Rey, swaron & taani were also here with them.

Kritika & neha came there. 

Kri: Kriya tumhe mana kiya tha na ki yaha se hilna maat phir tumne

Kriya looking upwards. 

Kr: universeji bro. Kya kum the ki aapne mumma ko bhi yaha bola liya*talking to herself*

Voice from back 

V: kyun daat rahe ho meri beti 

Kr: mom *screamed happily b'coz she knew her preeti mom would always be there to save her from her both of her mothers & brother's lecture.* 

Ranvijay was shocked to see kritika & preeti there. 

Preeti came sat next kriya hugging her 

Pr: kesa hai mera bacha 

Kr: mom this is not fair apne kaha tha ki aap aaj subha office nahi kane wale taki aap meri performance miss na karo aur aap ayeh bhi nahi *pout face*

Pr: kisne kaha ki maine tera performance nahi dekha. Tumse aake baat karti tumhara friend tumhe yaha le aya 

Kr: mujhe ghar jana hai 

Ra: esi harkat karne kisne bola tha agar esa nahi karti toh fir tujhe hospital se kab ki leave mil gayi hoti. 

Na: veer jane do na kyun daat rahe ho bechari ko

 doctor came in.

Pr: doctor hum kriya kab ghar le jate shakte hai 

Do: jab aap che mrs. Singhania bus make sure ki jayega ka ki yeh apna pair pe zayad dabao na dale
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PART 4
All the others were shocked except kriya's family & ranvijay

Pr: thank u doctor. Raj tum kriya aur uske friends ke sath aa jana

Sh: aunty actually mom dad ghar pe wait kar rahe honge so mujhe nikal na chahiyeh 

Pr: arey ese kese beta ek kam karo apne parents ko abhi humere ghar bula lo 

Sh: lekin aunty 

Kri: preeti sahi kahe rahi hai beta ranvijay tum chalo mere sath. 

Swayam & taani had left as their parents called sharon also left. 

In raj's car

Na: so kriya koi ladka 

Kr: bhabhi plz 

Ra: kya bhabhi plz i promise mai usko kuch nahi karunga 

Kr: koi nahi hai wase bhi aapse aaj tak baat koi chupi hai joh aaj chupaungi (she said bit upsetly) 

Raj understood that she was hurt b'coz of his behavior earlier.

Ra: sorry na kiddo maaf karde na plz 

Kr: its ok 

Ra: sachi mein sorry angel tumhe uss halat mein dekh ke aur gussa aagya iss liye sorry.

Kr: its ok bro.

Ra: waise bolna koi hai kya jisse tu pasand karti hai

Kr: bro. Aap jante ho na hoga toh aapko bina care kiye bata. Dungi. (She said while hugging him & seat from the back.)

Naina smiled seeing their bond. 

Rey was abit with surprised by brother & sister bond as he didnot have any sibling & kriya never told him about her brother. 

They reached kriya's house which was a big mansion

Kriya's family was quite fun loving made feel comfortable. He was surprised that their parents were college friends. 

They were sitting in television room. While their parents were in the garden. 
Its was only 2 of them as raj-naina were in their rooms. While neha was at her house with her brother. & preeti also left as she didnt want to face ranvijay.

Kriya looked abit uncomfortable. 

Re: tumne yeh baat kyun chupayi ki tumhare aur humare parents ek dusre ko kahi salo se jante hai. 

Kr: batane se kya pharaf padta wase bhi tum ko meri baat tak suni nahi thi. 

Kriya's phone kept beeping.

Kriya looked abit annoyed. But she didn't reply any of the message calls she was getting. 

She replied one message & her phone stop buzzing. 

Re: tum aur kya janti ho jo hum nahi jaante

Kr: tumhari mom ke bare mein but tum iss bare mein aapne dad se pucho toh acha hoga

Re: mom ke bare mein kesi hai woh thik toh hai woh mujhe unse milna hai

Kr: wo bikul thik hai tum already hospital mein mil chuke ho 

Re: you mean doctor ne mrs. singhania kaha woh meri mom hai

V: ha woh teri mom hai 

Rey turned saw his father there with kriya's mom 

Re: sach mein dad 

Ra: ha 

Re: lekin agar mai unhe pasand nahi aaya toh. 

Kr: woh tumse bohat pyaar karti hai 

Re: agar karti hai toh woh mujhe aur dad ko chod ke kyun gayi 

Ra: woh mein bata ta hu 

Re: dad

Ranvijay tells him how he and preeti had misunderstanding & he had asked preeti to 

leave. & she had left with rey's elder brother. When he realized his mistake it was too late 

to find preeti as she had already left the country. 

Ra: anyways tum dono baat karo mai jaa raha hu sone 

Kri: mai bhi jaa rahi hu sone kriya

Kr: so jaungi 12 baje se pehle dont worry 

Kritika left kissing her forehead. Ranvijay also  went to his room which kritika showed him

Re: tum meri mom ke bare mein kese pata aur tumne mujhe pehle kyun nahi bataya.

Kr: maine aapko iss liye nahi bataya kyun mai nahi janti thi ki aap mom ke bete hai mujhe bad mein pata chal ki aap mom ke bete ho mai aapko bata pati use pehle mujhe college chod na pada. Aur mai nahi chahati thi ki aap mera wait karo iss liye woh sab bola tha. Aur jese maine socha tha aap 2 months ke baad move on kar gaye. 
She said while looking down trying to hide her pain & hurt she felt when she got to know abt him moving on.

Rey could make out that she was hurt. But he could do nothing abt it.

Before he could reply a boy same age as them maybe even a or 2 older. 

B: monkey tujhe kya humesha monkey wali harkat karni hoti hai. 

Yup its was Rohan. 

Kriya got up on the sofa holding rohan shoulder and hugged him tight wrapping her legs around his waist. Quietly crying in crook of his neck. As she didnt want rey to know that she was crying b'coz of him. Rey was angry seeing her that close to someone.

I know many of guessed that Rohan, Neha & rey were siblings if not oh well dont think this is the only twist in the story there are more twist coming up &many secrets of rey's life will be revealed...
Love you guys 
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Kriya got up on the sofa holding rohan shoulder and hugged him tight wrapping her legs around his waist. Quietly crying in crook of his neck. As she didnt want rey to know that she was crying b'coz of him. Rey was angry seeing her that close to someone. 

Rohan kept on rubbing her back. 

Kr: i want to go back.

Ro: i promise we will go back after this ok bacha. Hmm

Kr: hmm.

Ro: now come on i will drop you in your room.

Rohan made kriya sleep & showed rey his room & left the house. 

In rey's bedroom 

R: akhir yeh tha kon jo kriya se itna close tha aur baatcutter use itna kyun chipak rahi thi. 

Little did he know that there were more secrets of his life than he thought there were...

Next morning...

Rey just came downstairs he saw rohan enter the house...

They both reached the dinner table at the same time.

Ro: gud morning mom. *he said kissing kritika's cheek*

K: gud morning kya baat hai aaj tujhe fursat mili apni mom se aake milne ki...

Ro: mom aap jante ho ki mein kaam mein busy tha. Anyways monkey kaha pe hai.

K: so rahi hogi acha ki so rahi hai warna fir niche aake tujhe parshan karti.. 

Ro: woh toh kal kar hi chuki hai...

K: tu raat ko aaya tha.

Ro: ha madam mujhe kacha chaba jaayr use pehle maine soch ki mil hi aata ho warna abhi tak kuch na kuch mere upar phake ti.

K: wase use utha ke le aa maine uska nashta ready kar diya hai.

Ro: ji mom

Ra: wase kriti 

K: ha

Ra: maine iske aur kriya ke kafi interviews dekh hai sath mein kafi talented damcers hai 
dono.

K: dono bachpan se sath mein bade huye hai so dono ko ek dusre ke sath uncomfortable feel nahi hota.

R: wase aunty isska naam kya hai 

Before kriti could answer they heard kriya

K: robert mujhe pehle kyun nahi bola

Ro: shant meri maa shant

He puts her down. 

Ro: phew... *acting as if he has sweat on his forehead wiping it* .. Kafi bhari ho gayi hai tu 

Kriya slapped his arm. Rohan just rubbed his arm. 

Kriti forced rey to stay with them as ranvijay would usually be on business trips.

Kriti forced rey to stay with them as ranvijay would usually be on business trips.

Preeti did visit kriya few times after ranvijay left. She made sure she didnt have to interact with rey. Rey still didnot know what kind relationship rohan kriya shared. Neither did he know about rohan & neha were his siblings. 

Kriya got better in 1 week but she was not allowed to dance for 1 more week. Rohan had informed RDX that he would join the workshop when kriya was alright as he had to finish some business meetings that preeti & rajveer could not attend. 

After college ended one day 

RDX, Nicole & Karan were with the gang & kriya in BB court.

Ni: wase kriya maine suna ki tumhare bhai ne shaadi karli tumhari bhabhi kese dekhti hai 

Ka: achi hi hogi after all wo kriya ki permission ke bina shadi thodi na karega. 

V: kon kiski permission ke bina shadi karega. 

Ka: tu teri shadi 
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PART 6

 

V: kon kiski permission ke bina shadi karega. 

Ka: tu teri shadi 

Yup it was Rajveer he was Ravi & karan's college buddy they went to same college as they know each other since a long time. 

Ra: kya 

Kr: aapki shaadi 

Ra: ohh 

R: usne bola toh tujhe ek bar mein hi samaj gaya 

Ra: saale tune toh shadi ki bhi itni jaldi mein. Aur meri shadi mein aya bhi nahi 
*he said while setting next to kriya* 

Kr: bro.. 

Ra: acha baba sorry wase tum dono ke liye mumma ka order hai ki tum dono ko ghar ana hai aaj so jo bhi kaam hai wo cancel kar dena warna pitoge 

R: wow kriya aaj tak koi ese sorry bulwa nahi paya tumne 2 secs mein boluwa diya. 

Vi: sir aap sab ek dusre jo jante ho.

Ka: ha woh actually hum ek dusre ko college time se jante hai. 

Rajveer, karan, ravi & nicole were talking gang was talking and making plan for the holiday coming before kriya & the new instructor would start the workshops next week. 

Kriya was getting bored she just rested her head on rajveer shoulder. Was playing with her phone after a while she fell asleep. Rey just looked around he notice kriya sleep on raj shoulder.

Nicole noticed kriya sleeping on raj shoulder. Nicole went tried to make her head straight 

Ra: nicole usse chuna 

Before he could finish Nicole already moved her head. Kriya slapped her hand away. Nicole was surprised by her act. 

Ra: iss liye bol raha tha ki usse chuna maat warna wo maaregi use koi sote wakat disturb kare use pasand nahi. 

Everyone became quite kriya woke up because of the silences. 
Kr: kya hua 

Ra: tune nicole ko maara

Kriya looked confused.

Kr: sorry wo nind mein maine 

Ni: its ok kriya 

Ra: tujhe nind kyun aarahi hai abhi 

Kr: aapke boring talk sunke 

Ra: acha bachu *he said while his arm around her neck* 

Kr: ha. 

Ra: chalo yaar yahi rehana hai kya 

Ka: chal mai tum dono ke sath chalta hu RDX aur nicole ko kaam hai so wo nahi aa payege 

R: dont worry raj mai aunty ko bol dunga 

Ra: thik teri merzi

Everyone left for their respective homes. Rey didnot go with raj & kriya he went to swayam's house he was going to stay for the night.

* in raj's car*

Ka: wase doll tujhe taani se itni problem kyun hai

Kr: bhai aap toh ese puch rahe ho jase aapko pata hi nahi. 

Ka: acha hai ki rohan tujhe join kar raha hai

Kr: bhai aap jesa soch rahe ho wasa kuch nahi hone wala so plz try maat ki jiyeh. 

Ka: ok baba tere liye srif.

Kr: thank u 

Ka: wase raj teri behan na world mein one & only piece hai 

Ra: yeh baat mujhe jab se yeh born tabse pata hai kuch naya bol 

Ka: nayi baat yeh hai ki meri pyari si doll na hum dono pe gayi hai teri jese sab mein best aur jese mere picche ladkiya bhagti hai wase iss picche sare ladke bhagte hai. 

Ra: yeh baat bhi mujhe pata hai 

Ka: yaar tujhe sab hai par yeh nahi pata ki mai ladki se pyaar karta hu aur wo mujhe gass tak nahi dalti thi ab dalti hai toh uske maa aur papa se baat karni hai

Rajveer applied breaks thank god it was a red signal while kriya almost jumped in the front.

Before rajveer could say anything the signal turned green.

Kr: what bhai you are joking right 

Kriya looked at karan's facial expressions 

Kr: yani ki aap sach mein 

Karan just helplessly nodded.

They reached home. 

Kri: kese ho karan beta *kritika said while hugging him*

Ka: mai thik hu maa aap kese ho 

Kri: thik thi ab prefect hu mere teeno bete jo mere sath hai 

Kr: haaww toh beti kuch nahi hai aapke liye

Pr: mere liye toh meri jaan hai

Kriya hugged preeti & showed her tongue to raj & karan.

Who just smiled at her. 

They were enjoying dinner.

When karan brought up abt his GF. He always considered preeti & kritika his mother.

I know most of you are like how is karan kriti's 3rd son well she consider rohan as her 2nd son.
Edited by Himu_arsha - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Apne saare cmnts yaha repost kar dungi 

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part 1 to 4
Himu ki bachi tune kya ye story twist se bhari.hui hai
Waise maza aa gya awesome update yaar
Rohan preeti ka son hai jise wo lekar chali gyi thi 
And Neha Rohan. Ki sis hai toh Neha preeti ki beti hai.
Par ye kab hua
Kahi tune ismai bhi twist toh nhi dala
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part 5
Awsm update himu 
Jaise kaha tune Waise hi kiya 
Shabash mere sher sorry Sherri
Acha hai rey ko Rohan and Kriya k beech kaisa relation hai.pta nhi.chala 
N thank god ye bhi pta nhi.chala wo.uska bhai warna bhaichare ki jagha jealousy janam lelete
leleti
Kuch aur Rohan Kriya scenes add kar.jise chupke chupke rey dekhe
Btw rv ko bhi nhi pta Rohan uska bda beta hai
Ye kiski shaddi ki baat ho.rhi.hai
Ye professors gang ko pta nhi.kya Kriya k bhai.ki shaddi ho.chuki hai
And I.think pg Kriya ki family ko.Pehle se.janti.hai.kaise ye clear kar
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part 6
Again awesome update himu
Dekh mai shi thi ye karan hi hai but ye toh Dusra beta hua 3sra kaha hai
Btw karan real son nhj hai he just considered preeti kritika as his mother

update soon

ps send kar na tabhi toh cmnts ayenge
Edited by Devil_kriti - 9 years ago