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Firstly I would like thank the two lovely people who managed to send in their entries.The voting is very simple , since there are only two entries, choose for your favourite entry and post it HERE in the format
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Entry 1
The CID bureau receives a call about someone's death (who had a gun shot in his head) in a isolated river. Pankaj and Abhijeet are sent to the crime spot to investigate.
*Abhijeet and Pankaj rush in the car to reach the spot*
Abhijeet: Jaldi chalo Pankaj. Hume wahan jald se jald paunch kar khooni ka pata lagana hain.
Pankaj: Jee sir.
*They reach and a group of tourists tell them about how they saw a dead body in the river whilst they were enjoying their visit to the isolated jungle nearby*
Abhijeet: Okay thanks. Don't worry we will find out the criminal very soon. Thank you so much for informing us and helping us erase crime.
*The group of tourists leave*
Pankaj: Sir, body yahan pe toh kahin nahi dik rahi. Ab kaise doondhe ge?!
Abhijeet: Tum phikar mat karo, Pankaj. Main hoon na. Abhi iss pani meh chan marta hoon. Tumhe dar lagta hain toh tum yahin raho.
*Abhijeet is seen wearing a diving suit in the next scene*
Abhijeet: Hmmm...ab chalo body ko doondhte hain! *He calls the other divers to come with him*
Nikhil: Sir...dhyaan se please.
Pankaj: Eh Nikhil...yeh toh Abhijeet sir do minute mein kar sakte hain...expert jo hain!
Abhijeet: Ab tum dono bak bak band karo aur aas paas ka area chaan maro...zaroor koi masboot surag milega. Chalo jao!
Nikhik and Pankaj: Okay sir.
*In the next scene...Abhijeet is shown with other divers bringing the dead body out of the river and Nikil and Pankaj are seen investigating the dead body*
Abhijeet: Haan sir pe goli mari hain iss aadmi ko. Kuch mila? *looks at Nikhil and Pankaj*
They say: Nahi sir...kuch bhi nahi.
Abhijeet: Accha teekhe...iski photo saare newspapers aur news channels pe lag wao aur body ko forensic lab mein bhejwao.
*Information is found about the man and Purvi is enquiring at hospital about why he came there before his death
*Purvi: Kya?! Voh injured tha?!
*Calls Abhijeet and informs him*
*They find out that the criminal was the man Arnav's friend who is called Mihir after a lot of investigation*
*Criminal gets slapped and beaten up and confession happens and everyone is happy*
Purvi: Arre vah sir apne toh itne kam same mein khooni pakar liya!
Abhijeet: Haan ab kya karein itne acche juniors jo hain!
Purvi smiles along with everyone else hearing this and everyone clap as hear some funny things from the man opposite them at some fair*
The scene ends. :)
Entry 2
Purvi : Good morning sir...
Abhijeet : Kya hua Purvi, tum late aayi ho.
Purvi: Sir, Main aur Daya sir ek theme park gaye the.
Abhijeet: Theme park? 😕 Case kaunsa hai?
Pankaj: Kya sir...aapko yaad nahi case kaunsa hai??? Aapki yaadasht phirse???
Abhijeet: Pankaj!!! Maine tumse kuch poocha?
Pankaj: Nahi sir...main sirf ...
Abhijeet(cuts short): Toh chup raho! Purvi, tum bataao...ab kya Karen, hafte mein teen-teen naye cases aate hain...aur sab cases main handle nahi karta...isliye mujhe bataao kaunsa case hai.
Purvi: Sir...main us tri-Shakti case ke silsile mein Daya sir ke saath theme park gayi thi. Daya sir ka kehna hai ki wahan superheroes ke statues hain jo zinda ho rahe hain.
Abhijeet: Aise kaise ho sakta hai?
Pankaj: Ho sakta hai sir!!! Aapne Ra-One dekhi hai?
Abhijeet: Nahi..
Pankaj: Usme ek badhiya gaana hai sir...wanna be my chammak challo (starts dancing)
Abhijeet: PANKAJ!!! Kya ho raha hai!
Pankaj: Daya sir bhi isi tarah gaana gaakar ek film ke bare mein bataya tha...aur use case solve hua tha...main gaana gaaya toh aap daant rahe hain? 😒
Abhijeet: Acha theek hai. Kaam ki baat karo Pankaj!
Pankaj: Kuch nahi sir...us movie mein ek super hero hai Ra-one. Who zinda ho jaata hai...aur use maarne ke liye G-One zinda hota hai.
Purvi: Pankaj theek keh raha hai sir...maine bhi yeh movie dekhi hai. 😳
Abhijeet: Theek hai...toh?
Purvi: Daya sir ne kaha ki yeh tri-Shakti super heroes bhi isi tarah zinda hue honge.
Abhijeet: Achcha? Daya ne bhi yeh movie dekhi hai?
Purvi: Haan sir.
Abhijeet: Toh sirf main bacha hoon...🤔
Purvi: Sir...Daya sir us mall ke saare super heroes ke statues ko custody mein le liya...lekin ek statue bacha hai sir. Use pakadne ke liye aapki madad chahiye.
Abhijeet: Achcha? Yeh kaunsa super hero hai jise Daya custody mein nahi la saka?
Purvi: Sir...who swimming pool ke andar hai. Uska naam hai AQUAMAN! Aapko toh pata hai, Daya sir paani se darte hain...isliye unhone aapko bulaya hai.
Abhijeet: Theek hai...main aata hoon.
Abhijeet gets ready to capture the Aquaman in swimming suit.
Abhijeet: Nikhil, Daya kahan hai?
Nikhil: Sir..Daya sir baaki ke 9 superheroes ko control kar rahe hain.
Abhijeet: Nikhil... Yeh Aquaman toh bohot khatarnaak dikh raha hai...main akele kaise sambhaloonga ise? Tum bhi chalo mere saath!!!
Nikhil: NAHi sir!!! Jab Daya sir paani se darte hain, toh main kaise paani mein utar sakta hoon!!! Apne guru ke saath anyay nahi kar sakta.
Abhijeet: Pankaj...😳 Kum se kum tum toh chalo mere saath!!!
Pankaj: Nahi sir!!! Mujhe tairna nahi aata!!!
Abhijeet: Theek hai...main akele hi jaata hoon.
...and Abhijeet jumps into the water.
He captures the huge Aquaman and drags him out of the water.
He pulls of the mask of the Aquaman. The body of the Aquaman explodes and showers glitters and coloured papers all over Abhijeet singing 'happy birthday to you'.
Abhijeet: 😕 Yeh kya hai?
Freddie(comes out from hiding): Sir, hum aapko surprise dena chahte the! Kaisi lagi yeh surprise?
Abhijeet: 😆 yeh sab karne ki kya zaroorat thi...
Freddie: kuch naya karna chahte the sir. 😛
Abhijeet: Lekin Daya kahan hai?
Freddie: Daya sir, super heroes ke saath andar baithe hain.
Abhijeet: Achcha!!! 😲 Super hero wali baat mazaak nahi thi????
Freddie: Aapke birthday ke liye super hero theme wala party organize kiya hai sir...sab team members super heroes ke costume mein aayenge..
Yeh Aquaman darasal aapka costume hai. 😉 😛
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