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Posted: 9 years ago
#11
Good topic. A separation but not a full separation. The thread still links them...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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The last part : "I love u too!! " Just love it !! OmG i cant believe, there r so many wonderful OS on this forum ! So many prospective Writter ! What u do with those words is just amazing ! How u drop down ur imagination with coherence and those words just fit in their place ! Amazing people u r ! :') keep it up ! Such a pleasure to read ur beautiful OS ! 
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Both parts are very good Vikas. Nice premise of a mini-separation and Raman angry at his family. Please do continue !
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Posted: 9 years ago
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I live it ...
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reaalyy awesum n amazinggg!!! plss continueee... plsss PM me also.. thnkuuu so much in advance!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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loved it.. plz continue soon.. 
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Posted: 9 years ago
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read both parts n loved it.Plz yaar aab milne do unhe.No more seperation.
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Scene starts with some one knocking Ishita's car .Ishita gets tensed but  thought some one trying to help and opens window and is shocked to see the person.

Ishita "Raman ,Aaap yahan kyaa kar rahen han?"

Raman "Yeh sawaal mujhey karnaa chahiye thaa.Beech raathey mey ,gaadi khadi karkar bearish mey kya kar rahen hon."

Ishita "Main aapko pickup karnay aa rahee thee aur gaadi kharaab ho gayee."

Raman "Tum mujhey pickup karnaey aye thee .Halaath dekho mujhey tumhey pickup karnaa pad rahan hain."

Raman "Gadi lock karo aur merey gaadi mey chalon."

Ishita does as instructed .Both Ishita and Raman get into Raman's car.

They are on way back to home.

Raman "Dilip kaisey hon thum bahuth din huen milkar.Sab kuch theek hain ?"

Driver "Han theek hain sir.Aap itney dinon baadh waapas Delhi aarahen hain."

Raman "Han yaar teen mahiney hogayen."

Ishita was trying to speak to Raman but he was busy conversing with driver.He felt annoyed at his ignorance but thought to get him back.

They reach home and everyone welcomes him no one tried to rise topic over that case and this three months so that atleast they can reduce Raman's wrath which they are assuming to existing.Ruhi was happiest sole in that house .The moment he saw Raman she went and hugged him and Raman took her in his arms.Then she challenged Shravan over her favourite topic "My Dad".Everyone is happy.

Raman goes to his room taking luggage.It is four times the luggage with which he went.

Ruhi was excited for gifts which she asked and Ishita was ready to tackle that situation.

Ishita "Ruhi Papa ney aapkey saarey gifts layen hain lekin main sabh abhee naheen doongi.Aapko gift key liyen kuch karnaa hoga special tabhee aapko eke k gift mileega."

Ruhi thinks for little time and goes and kisses Raman and says "Papa abh ek gift milega naa.Main aapkey liyen special hun naa."

Raman and Ishita both laughs at Ruhi and Ramani signs Ishita to give something to Ruhi .Ishita takes the list and asks which one she wants and after little argument she gives it to her.

Ruhi's attention goes to two big bags beside her gift's bag .She was about to open it.

Raman stops her.

Ruhi "Papa iss mey kyaan hain."It catches Ishita's attention.

Raman"papa's secret".

Ruhi "Aap mujhey naheen bathaongey."

Raman "Aapney mujhey bathaya aapkey aur Ishima kee secrets main bhee nahee bathaonga."

Ruhi becomes sad and Raman takes her near and whishpers something in her ears.

Ruhi "Papa do bags full.Mujhey sirf ek bag."

Ishita dosen't understand what Ruhi meant.

Ruhi thenstarts unpacking Raman's bag in search if Raman brought anything for her surprise.

She sees gifts which Raman brought for Bhalla's  and she goes and delivers them to everyone and she has fixed springs in her little legs today.

After delivering to everyone then she notices that Raman din't brought anything for Ishita.

Ruhi "Papa aapney Ishima key liyen naheen layaa."

Raman looks strangely at Ruhi as if he was surprised.

Ruhi smirks giving him sign to act.

Raman "Han khareedha thaa.Lagtha hain packing mey bhool gayan."

Ishita "Bhool gayen."

Then Mrs  Bhalla calls Raman outside and Raman leaves .

Few staff members came to meet him and even Bala's mom came there and she started speaking to Ishita.

Bala's mom asks "Ishita mainey suna hain kee Tum aur Raman divorce ley rahen hain aur tumhaarey sasural waley tumhaarey liyen ladkaa dhoondh rahen hain."

Ishita was shocked listening this no where truth statement but bigger came when she saw Raman also heard that.Ishita quickly told that it was a lie .She saw Raman going inside room and she follows him to tell that it was a lie.

Raman was busy in phone avoiding her and then Ishita gets a call from clinic for some emergency.

She leaves in Mr Bhalla's car.

Raman after few minutes of phone call comes outside in search of Ishita and finds she went alone to clinic.

Raman "Aapney Akeley kaisey jaaney diyan who bhee itney raath ko .Main bhee jaa rahan hoon."

Raman leaves in his  car and on raching clinic he observes there was no patient .Ishita was sitting silently on her chair lost in deep thoughts.

 

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Posted: 9 years ago
#19
Nice 👍🏼

Bala's mom
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#20
Oh ! Then ! :O superb os ! Next part plz ! :)