#2 ARIYA ff BTS (LOVE STORY CUM SUSPENSE)[CV MUST READ] COMPLETE - Page 18

Nice part
So arjun finally traced ria
Rias emotions r nicely described
Wow shree is really charecterised
His pain is nicely written
The thapad is acceptable after all choree gone through
Hope everyone forgives her
Plz update soon

Originally posted by: sonycs001

Nice part
So arjun finally traced ria
Rias emotions r nicely described
Wow shree is really charecterised
His pain is nicely written
The thapad is acceptable after all choree gone through
Hope everyone forgives her
Plz update soon

Arjun connected d dots n found Riya

shree's slap was fabulous...👏

loved it..😊

Sorry for late rply
superb update
feeling sorry for them
omg shree slapped her
continue soon

CHAP 16 B

... when they heard a voice "riya tu hai kya? Bhook lagi hai!"

Riya stood shakingly. Arjun was in front of her. She thought she will give this piece of news as a god news' but it again turned into a coincidence for them all - the victims of riya's secret plot. It turned into worst for her. The little hope she was having that by disclosing this news they may forgive her was also diminishing.

"bho ..bhoot ki awaaz.." karan whispered thankfully which was only heard by his simmi.

Arjun held her elbow.. gently though, but clearly indicating to look up and answer "ye... ye .. cho."

"chotu!!!" shree exclaimed happily and shocked equally

"chotu ki awaaz.." rathore exclaimed totally confused.

"bolo riya ye sab kya hai.. " arjun said loudly not able to b calm.

"chotu, liza, aisha sab oopar hai" riya answered all at once fearing some harm from arjun.

If 1 says that last few hours were shocking, it wud b a lie. Every shocks - sudden meeting with raree, some truths, news of riya being alive, some truth from her mouth - was nothing in front of this revelation. They would ve never imagined this! Neither in their wildest dream nor in their happiest 1! Coz it was almost impossible in dreams too!

Rathore : do they..

Riya: no they r not in the plan.

"ruko shree.." riya said to shree who was going upstairs to meet his friends.." u cant meet them now its dangerous for their health... u need to keep patience..."

Shree was going to retort back but again they heard the same pleasant to them, hungry voice.. "riya... jaldi aa"

"aayiii.."riya shouted.

"plz excuse me... " riya said and quickly went to kitchen to make podridge for her hungry friend. Definitely she was hell scared and karjunree were hell shocked. Sim was also dumbstruck. Pitying on ri, by watching her scared face, sim went to kitchen n decided to ask her all queries and later answer arjun and raree everything. May b this wud b a bit relieving for riya... momentarily.

"I .. m simran.. wo mein.." sim tried to strike a convo on her part . she also felt that to some extent, for riya's condition she is also a reason.. as she exposed her unintentionally, earlier than it should happen.

"I know .. u work with arjun sir...ask me whateva u want"riya said turning on the gas knob.

"they r alive , how?!"

"I knew each n everything. Its place, setting... Ok! Actually their hands weren't tied by normal rope.. it was hand cupped electronically, coz sik knew they r ETFians (her EYES twinkled with pride which sim noticed) n I did everything at fast rate... it was a game of few secs.. mm less than that... when arjun sir moved ahead to throw tha bomb... I quickly opened their hands and bodies by remote.. which I stole.. .i n the same time... oh did I forget to tell u that the whole area inside the circle were they were tied was a way to the basement... I was hiding there" riya bite her tongue naughtily.

"yeah .." sim replied.

"oh where I was?.. hmm... in the same time just with a click o remote they all were inside the basement with me n their very human like mannequin replaced them.. to make it look more real... the mode.ls were fitted with chip which repeated words like sir.. u go', arjun sir aap jaayiye.' N etc. n their mouth wud lip stink the same. The same moment the blast occurred. Unfortunately I wasn't too fast... n couldn't close the door of the basement on time... so they were injured... n fainted... aisha also got some burns in her hands. They were more serious than I thought. Kisi bhi tarah do lives maintain kar rahi thi... mauka dekh kar... inse milne, inka care karne aur inke treatement ke liye aa jaati thi.. chotu was unconscious for almost a week.. n liza was not allowed to speak for few days due to tha impact... ol of them were unconscious for 2 or 3 days at start.."

"did they know..."

"no. they don't know about all this... I said them that .. etf is on a mission.. so cudnt contact them... only I can contact them... it wud b hard to get through such a shock for them.. they were critical.. I also assured them on intervals that every1 is fine!

"y didn't u asked rathore sir, ur chief.. for any DIRECT help .. n hided all this.."

"coz he cares.."

"hun?"

"bcoz he cares for us more than himself.. he wud never risk their lives.. so I had to lie to him.. it was req.

"I ll inform thm ol this. U go on feed to chotu.."

"hmm.. khana bhi ready hai..."

Simmi told every1 in hal.. who were waiting for her on hall impatiently about their convo. For no fault of her she had to face some wrath while the discussion

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That was stupid!😳

I know!😳😳 Par mera chotu sa dimag ab jyada kam nahi kar sakta!😭

If some1 remebers😆.. I stated in prolouge once 🥱that gradually that some1 turns into _______

The blank is now filled with' many'. So what will b his reaction then- sorrow or happiness? If that some1 turns into many persons. Will the feeling of betrayal overpower his feeling of getting his lost ones back?

If u ve any doubts then ask me...

SINCE I DIDN'T PROOF READ.. SO THER MAY B GRAMATICAL OR LANGUAGE OR SPELL ERRORS.

baaki ka to aap jaante hi hai ki aapko ab kya karna hai.😉

So start.

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Wow
Awesome update
Love it
Cont soon
Thanks for pm

im once again sure that voice is of chotus ria will never kill chotu as she thinks him as her bestie

great update
Loved it
I am Sure Riya has a big reason behind hiding all this
whose voice was that?
interesting
waiting for the next part
continue soon