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So read on...A Sneak Peak to Chapter 4.
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This one is for the lovely AashimaK.
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Mine no better.
Open Your Eyes, Remember Me
Chapter 4: SNEAK PEEK
4th April, 2014, 10:30 AM
Kareem Book Shop, Bhopal
"Aur kitna
time lagega?" Zain asked frustrated.
"Arey
Bhaijaan! Printer mein kuch gadbad ho gayi hai, technician dekh raha hai, 10
minute aur." Kareem, the shop owner said.
"10 minute hi
toh nahin hain mere paas." Zain muttered to himself.
"Jee kuch
kaha aapne?" Kareem asked.
"Nahin nahin.
Aap printer sahi karwaiye jaakar." Zain said.
Zain had a
very crystal clear plan in his head, he just prayed that everything would go
accordingly, no last minute crisis. The only problem was to somehow get Aaliya
out of the house and into the car. Till yesterday he was very sure he'd somehow
manage to trick Aaliya but after their last night's conversation, or should he
call it their outburst, he doubted Aaliya would even want to look at him.
Not that he
was very happy with her either. She kept repeating this one line Zeeshan mere hone waale shauhar which
made his blood boil and his thoughts go haywire.
Yet.
Yet he knew
it was irrational on his part to behave like that. Aaliya wasn't wrong, he
tried to tell himself. She belives that she's getting married and there's this
third person who's becoming a hurdle in between. She might be attracted to him
a little bit. Heck, she was attracted
to him more than a little bit. But
this is a girl of principles Ms. Aaliya Ghulam Haider we are talking about. She
wouldn't tolerate an inch of deviation from her well defined rules and
regulations of life. That's why she wouldn't tolerate Zain. He was a walking
and talking example of lawlessness. And that was the reason of her previous
outburst.
But then
again he was a human only.
A human with
a heart.
A heart which
had been shattered, shattered to the point that he was afraid he'd ever be able
to mend it back.
But he had
to, there was his Aaliya. A reason to live. He just hoped today's plan would be
successful and he could safely shift Aaliya to a better place.
What would
happen after that, he did not know.
Right now, he
had just one agenda and he hoped to do that right.
"Bhaijaan?"
Kareem prompted.
Zain broke
out of his train of thoughts. "Huh? Accha haan...kya hua?"
"Kitni der se
bula raha hoon aapko. Mein keh raha tha ki bataiye kya print karna hai? Printer
theek ho gaya."
"Accha. Mein
batata hoon." Zain said as he walked towards a spare computer and opened his
email.
"Yeh 4 air
tickets hain. Inhe jaldi se de dijiye." Zain told Kareem.
"Ji bas 1
minute lagega." Kareem said as he gave the Print' command.
"Yeh lijiye
bhaijaan ho gaya." Kareem said as he handed out the tickets to him.
Zain paid the
shop keeper and left for home.
***
The Ghulam Residence
"Hello? Aapki
bheji hui taxi abhi tak ghar nahin pahunchi hai!" Zain snapped into the phone. "Dekhiye
ab yeh sorry vorry band kijiye aur zara jaldi kariye please. I need a taxi
urgently! Kitni der aur lagegi?" Zain asked as he entered the house. "10
minute? Theek hai, lekin ek minute bhi zyada nahin. Okay? Cool." He said as he
cancelled the call.
"Phoops!
Kahaan hain aap?" Zain called out as he reached the living room.
"Allah! Ab ye
Phoops kahan chali gayi? Room mein hongi!" Zain made his way towards the
bedroom.
"Phoops aap
bhi na. Kahan kahan dhoond raha tha aapko. Accha aap aur Phoopa ready--" Zain
started as he opened the door.
But there was
no sign of Shabana.
Or Ghulam.
"Phoops?
Phoopha?" Zain said, his heartbeat increasing by each passing second.
Zain tried
the bathroom door, but it was unlocked, no one inside.
He ran
towards the living room again scanning the whole area. But there was no sign of
anyone.
"Phoops
Phoopa!! Kahan hain aap dono?" Zain cried as he ran towards the spare rooms.
"Phone karta
hoon." Zain thought as he dialed Shabana's number. He heard it ring and ran towards
the source of the sound.
But he was disappointed
as it led to their bedroom.
"Phoops!
Phoopa!" Zain called out, clutching at his hair. His head was pounding and his
heart threatened to come out of his ribcage. He had sorted out everything. Every last thing.
And what was
happening now?
He tried
Ghulam's number and he heard it ring. Except it was not from the bedroom but from
somewhere else.
He followed
the sound, his breathing shallow and a layer of sweat covering his forehead.
The sound was
coming from the kitchen he realized.
What was Phoopha doing in the kitchen? He thought.
The sound
grew louder as he reacher closer to the kitchen. Each step filled him with dread.
Dread of the
unknown.
Dread of the
unseen.
Zain entered
the kitchen.
And he
stopped dead in his tracks.
***
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