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Edited by panchaali - 9 years ago

Nice work,  Panchaali.  I somehow read  to the point  where Karna saves Panchaali  from the fall, and then it became interesting.

 A time travelling Dwapar Yug Kshatriya! Nice!

Nice panchu ..interesting time travel...:)

Originally posted by: .Vrish.

Nice work,  Panchaali.  I somehow read  to the point  where Karna saves Panchaali  from the fall, and then it became interesting.

So  Panchaali  didn't tell him that the war is over,  that he is actually dead, blah blah blah?

Originally posted by: Arijit007

nice story.

Originally posted by: riti4u

Nice panchu ..interesting time travel...:)

Originally posted by: thearcher

 A time travelling Dwapar Yug Kshatriya! Nice!

Brilliant and interesting story...I was completely engrossed 😊

Originally posted by: -Shani-

Brilliant and interesting story...I was completely engrossed 😊