Originally posted by: exhalelove.
You are a brilliant writer!
Originally posted by: ARandKJFan
I don't know whether I can say this but I'm so proud of you maasi for writing this one shot, I really am.Thank you so much niece Writing anything on death is tough, no doubt and especially pain of that of a child, a stranger is tough and you've done it extremely well. I guess :/
I wouldn't say this made me cry of that this made me really upset or sad. I don't really know why. I felt bad for the guy for sure but somehow, I couldn't connect, in that way. I did have goosebumps and cringed at some parts but couldn't feel the pity for that child and I'm in now way trying to affect you Maasi. :3 Finally😆 I got someone to find out flaws in the story. I really can't tell you how much I love you niece. Even I knew that I lack something in the OS for even I couldn't connect to it but then I didn't knew whats missing😕 Love you so much, now tell me where to improve too😆I will say one thing, you've used language brilliantly. I can only imagine how the kid sat through it. The parts with the nails and blood is a definite favorite. <3 That was only thing that I imagined 😛This somehow felt like death though. Maybe that's why I was unaffected. I've never feared death, maybe that's why it didn't affect me much. Haina? Even I never feared death, hell I am in awe with it. I take death as something glorious😆But definitely, it is amazingly executed Maasi, it truly is. You've done your part very well. :)I know you'll probably be pissed but I'm hoping I can be honest with you. :3 Anytime baccha🤗
Originally posted by: akankshaArsha
adi whats this...plz tu kya kya sun ke aati hai nd itna painful likhti hai fir...
this was depressing...7 year old nd such painful death...the way u wrote his feelings..his helplessness...goddd...its so painful...no words to explain how perfectly u wrote this...
i dnt know wat to say...its amazing...
Originally posted by: sumimita
aditi this is not fair What do I do?😲
it is really very painful...ab mind acha banane k liye ek happy wala os likho... I will give it a try, when I don't know myself😆with lots of lovemoumita
Originally posted by: neha_bbsr2005
He was only seven and had to die like this 😭 Its really sad and depressing..
But brilliantly written.. My heart went out to him.. 😭
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