Spru yuvi bacha nahi hai jo use pata nahi chalega...😉waise i guess mene yuvreen and daal ko kaafi famous kar diya hai😆
Originally posted by: sujairohit
Liked the story,very different from the show.
Waiting to read the next part.
Originally posted by: Shivinian
OMG AMAZING! I'm sure its gna be interestng. U have sumthng in store fr us.
PS: Ab to YuvReen Ki Daal Brand hona chahiye. 😆
Oh god😲😲
Yuvi and Naro!!..i hope there is some twist
Yuvreen anniversary got spoilt poor Suvi😭
great part di..u r amazing writer👍🏼
cont soon..
Originally posted by: Anam Ali
OMG😲😲😲 What is this? Yuvi and Naro no ways
I hope there is some twist.. Yuvreen anniversary got spoiltNaro and Manu are best... why you brought Yuvi between them.. Poor Suvi her anger is justified... dumb Yuvi😡Great Part with lots of suspenseCont soon
Originally posted by: Anam Ali
OMG😲😲😲 What is this? Yuvi and Naro no ways
I hope there is some twist.. Yuvreen anniversary got spoiltNaro and Manu are best... why you brought Yuvi between them.. Poor Suvi her anger is justified... dumb Yuvi😡Great Part with lots of suspenseCont soon
Originally posted by: SahasYuvreenian
Well I am not very very surprised...because the time you said that you got an jhakkas idea and you keep warning us its too emotional from that time only I got it that definitely that's a very painful story!So I was prepared for it as you know na di ki I'm more attached with emotional stories.But definitely its a big shock for the readers!
Arre hamesha meri Suvi hi kyun!In my SS-Opposite Attracts she lost her parents...in SS-Ray of hope also she suffers...I guess we love same type of stories :P
Fantastic start.I am sure its going to be super se upar walla TS.Some or the other misunderstanding is there I'm sure.But anyway you wont make Yuvreen go away from each other...will you?
Do continue soon.I will be waiting.Thanks for the pm :)
Originally posted by: indradhanushs
haan baccha nahi hai magar gadha toh hai jarur , itna innocent hai ki koi bhi uska faida utha leta hai , my poor yuvi ,
aur haan , daal me kala hai yah dal kali hai . aage pata chal hi jayega
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indradhanushs, minu_G, Anam Ali, sujairohit, JustMySelf, Shivinian, SahasYuvreenian,Thank You Everyone for liking this story so far.
I know all of you are in a shock 😲
How can Yuvi ditch her Topper
Many of you already said its a misunderstanding...
Ok guyz the wait is over and here i am back with next update where the truth is revealed out.
Plz scroll down.
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