Very interesting chapter Faiqa. And it was nice and long so lots of story development.
The flashbacks were my favourite.. teri meri dance in a new setting.. his eyes on her. smooth stylish predatory flirty Arnav increasing her dhak dhaks.. The office entry was also great. I really liked how you phrased Khushi's dialogues. Sounded exactly like Khushi from the show.Thnx Rhea😊 I am so happy you are enjoying it.I love Khushi's dialogue in IPK and her spunky style.Arnav loves that too and giving her dhak is always his speciality😆...He always knew the effect he has on her .His anger never effected her .She is te only one who could dare to be in front of him matching his eyes...and he was his true admirer for that...Khushi Kumari Gupta ..how dare she talk to me like that...kal tak main uski baaton se pareshaan tha to aaj mujhe kya ho gaya hai...he always loved her sanak...Sneha is her cousin.. hmm I usually get confused when new characters which are not from the show get added to the stories, but you have made it full of suspense so I do want to know why she is important.She is because she is the witness of Arnav's parents's and her own parents death and the person who caused it.Their contract is a secret and they had to enact the parts in front of everyone. But Arnav was very much in love with Khushi..and she went away.. now three years later the same voice.. who called her then and now? ooh where is this story going? am very excited to know what unfolds next.This contact part will be unfold [some of it] in coming update...Happy to see your anticipationThanks for the scrap regarding the reply I would have missed it otherwise.
awesum update khushi has reason to marry asr but wat reason he has ?? n who is this fone person n y 3 yrs contract ooppsss soo many questions lol eagerly waiting to read more thx for pm
Emotional update so sad khushi had to marry asr loved the flash back both are missing each other and both understanding each other thought and silence awesome update thanks for the pm.
Originally posted by: ArshiHamesha
Thnx Mehr 😊Love your thoughts over this marriage and separation.my comments are in between
Originally posted by: ArshiHamesha
Roop👏Brilliant clue point.Bravo girl , me like the way you are behind all the clues since from the beginning...Thnx
Originally posted by: thiyamappy
thanks for the pm...have missed the first two chapters since this is the first update I recd frm u. will be reading the first chapter ...the story seems very emotional and wld love to read it 😊
Originally posted by: AdiGallia
Super dupper👏
Very nicely you have captured a lot of confused cells in our bones.⭐️😃My eye is settling to the fact that he didn't marry her for three years even your teaser is reflecting that, he just complied with the fact what she provided because she's been asked to marry him so it means she put this contract or terms of it not him , he is in it with full heart.He is so attractive towards her and knows she feels for him strongly and he is not using it either .He just introduced his world to her that how much she means to him.Their intimate scene, his scream , his call for Ma and getting soothed by Khushi's hallucination, is written so well that you really feel the agony.Now Khushi is not in less pain either and same person called her again or is it Arnav?
amazing update...
so someone threatened khushi to marry arnav...arnav searching khushi like hell...khushi is now is in deep love with arnav...update soon...
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