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Posted: 9 years ago

Poem || My Little Kid ||


I listen to the screeching engines

I listen to the deafening horns.

But neither do I care nor

do I share, my life has never been fair!

 

I sit there quietly all along the day

And I know none had ever asked me to stay

I feel him on my motherly lap,

Snoring so cutely during his nap.

 

Some of the people stare at me

As if I would be better as a tree

I keep him safely in my arms

The mad ones tell me they all are dreams

 

They quietly tell me He's gone.'

And I glare at them like a stone

I can see his cheeky smile

And I know I am never fragile

 

Some stare at me with pity eyes

Some throw me food with their kindest hearts

I eat and breathe, for my kid

Without him, I like to be dead.

 

A pit was dug, for they called it a grave

It was the last thing he could ever have

I cried and mourned and wailed for a while

And there he was to make me smile

 

I kiss him on his creamy cheeks

Love is all I see in his eyes

The mad ones still whisper at me

And I cuddle him more close to me

 

Neither do I care nor

Do I share, my life has never been fair!

~*~*~*~*~*~

A/N


Hey everyone! I am new in this forum and this is my first post. I have written many poems but this is special cuase this is the first rhyming poem I have written. I am so proud of myself. πŸ˜†

Feel free to criticise and point out my mistakes. I would love anything you would leave as a comment. 

Loads of Love.

Linaya



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wayward thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
Beautiful Poem !! Keep Writing More !!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
wow...It's so beautiful...πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘...the words that u used to describe the feelings of the mother's pain for her son is just amazing...πŸ₯³...loved it very much...❀️❀️❀️...thanks 4 sharing it with us...😊...pls make more poems...😳😳...love to read it...thank u 4 pm...πŸ˜ƒ...
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Posted: 9 years ago
Linaya.. My God!
Its so damn lovely! Like it touched me somewhere inside, I love it so much! πŸ˜³

I'm eagerly waiting for more of your beautiful poems to come... 
Edited by ...Ashley - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Linaya, you have beautifully penned down a mother's love, yet her deep sorrow, it is a touchingly sad poem/
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Posted: 9 years ago
Wonderful Linaya!! πŸ‘ But painful too.. You have described a mother's pain, her love for her child beautifully.. Superb!! Do write more.. Thanks for the pm.. Take care 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
Such a beautiful poem dear!!!πŸ‘
The feelings were well portrayed!!! And very well written too!!

Thank you for sharing with us!!!πŸ€—
Do write more!!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
very beautiful yaar 
loved it 
great work 
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Posted: 9 years ago
beautiful poem Linaya!!!! loved it keep writing!!!!!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hey beautiful poem Linaya!!! 😳And you SHOULD be proud of urself!
Why don't you write more frequently??πŸ˜‰