Originally posted by: mayurisb80
This is a beautiful os in so many ways...conversing love through silence and signs...
Originally posted by: mayurisb80
This is a beautiful os in so many ways...conversing love through silence and signs...
Originally posted by: farz_parachute
I'm so attached to that Asad. That I see this Asad as that.
By THAT I mean...Emma wala. Eh Zoya. Well all Asad is Zoya's! Your latest Asad!
You do that? Okay, if you like it that way. I see the one here as the same guy as 'Somewhere in Time' - showwala Asad. He was a lot more vulnerable and such a little boy at times.But, if you see him as Emma wala Asad, that's alright, too.π
In Heartbeat Warfare...he's a but different. Yet the same. But there's a difference. Hmm.
Yes, in HW he is different. All three are same but different.
Zoya is not from any. She's brand new here. Your brand new.
Is it? Hmmm...Zoya is someone I never get completely hang of. So, if you say, she is brand new, she is brand new.
Thank you for this.
I knew there was a Haya story coming from you. But I was expecting a love one. With Rahat.
Actually, I thought of only Haya and Asad. She reminds me of him. And, she and Rahat remind me of old QH. But, I never thought of a Haya & Rahat story.
I'm happily surprised.
But that doesn't mean you're off the hook. I shall wait for it. And when it does come...I shall be there commenting!No promises for that one. If further development in Haya-Rahat track inspires me, then maybe.
Originally posted by: notagain
Res π€
Mamu's are the best!!!Aur, Asad mamu the bestest! π
I never expected this, it was a complete surprise and yet not. This OS. Haya is just another woman in his life, just a little girl as of now. But yeah, this man is one who would love them all for exactly who they are. With all his fierceness and caring.
Khan villa and their family is my favorite part of QH. No doubt, Haya fits in seamlessly. She would be doted upon and yet be encouraged to be independent. Haya is a perfect blend in, the one who grows into the family with her silent fortitude and mamu's indulgence.Haya is a beautiful character inside out. She would have been a perfect fit in KV. And, I find it so fitting that she is the one who is in KV in the show.
Beautifully written Noe. Loved the relations that have persisted, strengthened and blossomed in this story. The little girl who has a mamu who converses with her in their own cocooned silences. The mami who compensates with her frazzled actions, a mom, who is learning with her to understand how it all works, and a nani who brings it all together.Blue - that is so beautifully put, especially about the mom who is learning. π I started this one with Asad and Haya in mind with others having a small role. But, when I reached Najma's part, then I realized that how much is there to her in context of Haya. She is a regular girl. Finished college, got married, had a child - regular, normal life. Kid was to grow up, go to school and so on. But, she got Haya. She is no Asad or Zoya or Dilshaad. It would have been such a shock to her. But, as you said she is learning with her daughter.She is blessed in so many ways. Lovely OS indeed. π€
Thank you π€
Originally posted by: khadupam
Wow it's lovely β€οΈ
How u write such a touching story
It's out of the words
It's just fantastic amazing wonderful lovely n cute too
It's just fabulous
I loved itWht a cute storyThank you π
Beautiful OSπ
just loved itπD way u showed Haya & Asad's bond was outstandingπI would just say wowawesome jobππΌ
Originally posted by: LoveOnlyAsYa
Noe that was one of the best os I have read on the forum. When I read the title I thought maybe its a typo with the names but as I started reading I realized it is what it is supposed to be.
The way you described Asad n Haya relationship was excellent. Loved the whole thing...every word you wrote... I loved it all.
Originally posted by: Mariam.2187
That was
SuperbLovelyMind blowingFabulousHeart touching..Love the bond Haya-Asad shared..Loved evry thing..Beautfully written..Thnx for this LOVELY OS..-Mariam-
Originally posted by: SurbhikiPankhi
WHY DO YOU WRITE SO BEAUTIFULLY?! π³ It is so emotionally beautiful <333333333
I wanted to see Asad with kids! π³ You make me cry with emotions :')
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