SanDhir OS: When I Look Into Your Eyes

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hey fellas , brace yourselves for a pathetic OS from me again because I am super depressed right now! So...whatever is it , if you wanna read it , you can! 🤔


"You're my man Randhir Singh Shekhwat and I know if I fall back , you'll catch me"


"I am sorry Mr. Shekhawat but she is in the last stage of Brain Tumor"


"Promise me you'll fall in love again after I leave"


"Mr. Shekhawat , she is drifting off to sleep"


"Randhir , promise me"


"Mr. Shekhawat we are losing her"


"Randhir promise me"


"Her pulse is dropping"


"Randhir come on"


"It's dropping..."


"Randh..."


Silence.



"PIYAAALLLIII" he yelled on top of his voice.


It has been a week since she left him , left this world leaving his life vacant. He felt lifeless , clueless and a pain he never felt before. It was too much for him. He couldn't take it anymore. He felt like killing himself too. He couldn't survive in this world without his 'Piyali' beside him. It had started raining a few minutes back. He was drenched but all he could see Piyali smiling at him and teasing him.


"Randhir , you are such a buddhu!" she laughed.


He looked around but found no one.


"I miss you!" he whispered before losing conscience.


2 Hours Later:


"Sir?" he heard. He tried to open his eyes but it felt too heavy.


"Sir?" he heard again and this time , he was successful to open his eyes. He saw the doctor smiling at him. The same Doctor who was treating his fiancee Piyali Bharadwaj.


"Sir how are you feeling?" he asked.


"I am fine Doctor but what am I doing here?" Randhir asked as he touched his forehead. It was bandaged.


"Sir you hurt yourself and some of the people here spotted you and brought you here!" he smiled. But Randhir wanted to get away from here. He got out from the pocket and was about to leave when the Doctor stopped him. "Sir , you remember Piyali wanted to donate her eyes to a needy if she died-" he paused and looked at Randhir who had an indifferent expression as usual. He huffed and continued , "Well Sir , they have been donated to a girl named Sanyukta Agar-" "I am least bothered!" he heard Randhir.


"But Sir she wants to meet you!" the Doctor followed Randhir outside. He could easily make out from Randhir's body language that he was very weak but he never really listens to anybody.


"Sir..." Randhir stood there and looked in to the room. He saw a girl's bandage being opened up from her eyes. He could see how uncomfortable and scared she was. He stood there , intrigued about the whole thing. He unconsciously entered the room. The doctor followed him and reached the room. "Sir , this is the patient!" he whispered but it fell in to deaf years. Randhir looked on as the bandages were peeled off the patient's pale skin. Her lips had a beautiful shade of deep pink and she was flushed. But here eyes?


The doctors finally peeled off all the bandages and she sat there , her eyes closed.


"Sanyukta you can open your eyes now!" the doctor said.


"Umm...will I be able to see?" she asked.


Something struck Randhir's heart when he heard her voice. It felt magical. He came and stood in front of her , excited to know whether she'll be able to see again.


"Only you can tell that!" the doctors chuckled.

"I just hope I won't see a ghost! That's definitely something I wouldn't like to see!" Sanyukta smiled. The doctors knew that she was back to her original self. She was the heart of the hospital. She would crack jokes and make everyone laugh. She was blind yet she had a bubbly and vibrant nature and most of all , she was way too lovable and adorable.


"Sanyukta , don't he scared okay? We all are here! Don't put much pressure on your eyes!" the doctor smiled and patted her back.


"Okay , here goes nothing!" she exclaimed.


Her heart was beating frantically and she didn't put much efforts to open them. First she peered and then gently opened them up. Upon opening them , she was mesmerized by what she saw. A guy in white shirt and blue jeans , eyes swollen and red , messed up hair and beautiful black eyes looking at her or rather , staring at her. She felt bliss. She wasn't only happy because she could see but also because she witnessed such a beauty in front of her. She flushed.



Randhir was horrified. In fact he was scared. The same eyes , hazel orbs staring back at him whom he thought he would never see. Those hazel orbs which stole his heart in the first place. He started to walk back.


"No..." he whispered before running away.


Sanyukta was confused. "Who was that? And what happened to him? Why did he run away all of a sudden?" she asked the doctor.


"Sanyukta , he the fiance of the person who donated her eyes to you! I think he got upset as he might be remembering his dead fiancee!" he sighed.


"What's his name?" he asked.


"Randhir Singh Shekhawat!" the doctor said.


"I want to go to him! I want to thank him for this!" she smiled weakly. They somehow took her to Randhir , who was sitting in the waiting room , or rather crying.


"I'll leave you two here!" the doctor whispered and went away.


She was still weak but managed to walk up to him and sit beside him.


"Hey , you okay?" she asked. Randhir looked up at her and was dazed. He felt nauseous and got up to go but she held his wrist. "Umm , I want to talk to you!" her voice trembled.


"I don't want to see you!" he said.

Sanyukta wasn't surprised. The anger she had seen in his eyes before confirmed that he was punishing himself for reasons unknown to her. She pulled him back with the little energy she had in her and made him sit down beside her.


"What the? How dare you-" he stopped when he saw her laughing. She looked ethereal.


"Why are you laughing?" he asked , irked by her audacity.


"I'll tell you provided you tell me why you are mad at me?" she grinned.


"Who the hell do you think you are?" he yelled at her. She flinched but didn't stop smiling. It surprised him to no extent. No one , not even his piyali would smile when he yelled at her.


"Can you stop grinning like an idiot?" he gritted his teeth.


"Fine , stop being angry with yourself!" she smiled.


"Why are you after me?" he scowled at her.


"He looks so cute!" she thought. "I am following you because I wanted to thank you for this-" pointing towards her newly fond eyes "It really means a lot!" she smiled.


"Yeah whatever! Now can I leave?" he scoffed.


"Arre? ek toh maine aapko 'thank you' bola aur aap..." she stopped and stood up with such a speed that she felt light headed. She was about to fall when she felt a hand snaking around her petite waist and preventing her from falling.


She looked in to his eyes. For fraction of second , she could see fear in his eyes. But for what? Why was he scared in the first place?


He gently let her go , looked at her again and walked away , leaving her confused , baffled and flushed at the same time.


She felt a strange pain in her heart. She felt as if , his pain had been transferred to her. She felt weak but she knew she had to find him.



yayaayyy! Itna faltu OS parke you all will definitely puke! 🤣
Depression ke maare kya haal ho gayi hai meri!
Oh I'll continue , if I am not lazy and sleepy!😆

*Sees the tomato *
*runs away 😲*

P.S. PM's Later! Don't ask , Imma depressed!😭
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shalini_shakti thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Res
~~UNRES~~
Me first to comment...!!!!
Zoya,
Awesome awesome awesome...!!!!
This one touched my heart..!!
Seriously from where do you get such brilliant ideas...??
Truly a beautiful one..!!
I loved it so very much..!!
Keep writing more...
Love,
Shalini:D
Edited by shalini_shakti - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Add me in pm list i think u have seen dil ne jiseh apna kaha but anyways its more interesting than the film ...lovely and piyali oh gad you reminded me of pkyek
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Zooks! This one is so different...So...Beautiful. I am sad now. It touched my heart.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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It was not at all faltoo zoya.. it was such a brilliant OS.. I m really surprised how you got such lovely ideas for your OS.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Helooohybye

Add me in pm list i think u have seen dil ne jiseh apna kaha but anyways its more interesting than the film ...lovely and piyali oh gad you reminded me of pkyek



i haven't watched the film! 😆
Frankly I don't know which film you're talking about since I am not much into Bollywood!😆
But I am glad you liked it!😛
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: arshifan2012



i haven't watched the film! 😆
Frankly I don't know which film you're talking about since I am not much into Bollywood!😆
But I am glad you liked it!😛

I am sorry 😳Actaully that films story and ur stry is ditto so i thought but even though this one is more interesting
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Helooohybye

I am sorry 😳Actaully that films story and ur stry is ditto so i thought but even though this one is more interesting


its okay! I just don't watch Bolly at all! Gives me a headache so I was a bit confused about the film you talked about!😆
thanks again!😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Oh my God, it reminded me of Dil Ne Jise Apna Kaha. You write so well yaar. Can you not turn this into an ff (pretty please)? Would love to see the love blossoming. Thank you so much for writing such a great piece of fiction. Keep writing. Lots of love xxx

*bookmarked*
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Posted: 11 years ago
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You are depressed but i think it brought out the best in you..lovely os yaa.. The concept is beautiful !!!

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