Aakhiyan Hari Darsan ko Pyaasi (PraJa OS) - Page 2

dnt u dare to say dat it was nt gd...u end it erly
it was fab...realy i ws havng fun in readng it
suprb want dat thng to happn...
wel lvd it n pm me wen u writ any story..ok
gd bless u dear..pm me plzz

awesome, beautiful, divine, serene OS 

Originally posted by: _GC-AK-Fan_

Thanx Celu for PM.

Wao Celu. .

Amazing Ajabde first morning in Chittor start wid Kanhaji Pooja. 

And Pratap helping her Wao. 

And US-JB imagine Ajab as their Bahu. 

Superb Celu.

I'm totally enjoying it while reading. 

Omg Celu hope cvs read that and show us like that.

Thank you khush.😃 Glad that you liked it.😃 Actually I forgot to mention that it was her first morning in Chittor😕. But anyways that is very obvious.😆 I really want something like this from the CVs.😉 We deserve an "Aakhiyaan hari darsan ko pyaasi" from our Ajab in Chittor😳. Really want to see JB and US's expression if they hear it.😳

Originally posted by: Anshul_CR7

I think that u r a gud writer.. 😉

Thank you for you compliment Anshul.😊

Originally posted by: roopshas1

Beautiful OS Celana😳

Thank you Roopsha. Really happy that you liked it.😃

Originally posted by: geetpagli

Very nicely written 😊god😳i had been thinking of such a scenario😛i wish cvs aisa hi kuch dekhade hume😛hey if possible pls pls continue😛😃😉

Thanks geet. Yes, all the PraJa ians really want this scene.

Can't praise it enough...in short, it's masmerizing. Great writing dear.

Very well written Celana!!!
Morning scene with Pratap helping Ajab.His concern towards her.
Mesmerising song Akhiyaan Hari Darshan Ko Pyaasi.
JS and US considering Ajab as their bahu and Pratap's wife was awesome.
I hope CVs show us in the same way.

Wow celena...OK its no wonder fr me if u write so beautiful OS..
U always write like dat...
Hope CV's also show this scene..( actually they can't they don't have this imagination 😆 )
U r simply awesome Celina.. 👏
Love u prAja ❤️

thnxx for PM 😊


Edited by Krupali - 9 years ago

superb Praja OS