Ashlok FF:The Question of choice: Ch 29 pg 84 - Page 25

Originally posted by: First_Light

Beautifully done. I'm still reeling from the after effects. I was waiting eagerly for u'r update in the morning. After reading it stayed with me all day. You could almost hear the shattering of the glass. Nice touch, by the way! A gal has got to get some satisfaction! I want to break a few more things including Shlok's and Niranjan's heads😡. I'll wait for tomorrow to see u'r next. Thank you for writing so well. Take a bow, take it now!😃

Originally posted by: Aishaa3

Oh my😳 hr reactn ws much intense than expctd! Glad she askd fr huge alimony ..bt so sad Shlok denied feelng anythng evrytim they wr togethr😭 Its goin to b tough to patch them up c.s! Btw me phirst😎

Originally posted by: rbb1

nice update, go Astha she is strong and getting him to pay

Originally posted by: Pveenat

Awesome story and really enjoying reading your fiction, update soon😃

Originally posted by: swathin

too good
awesome
atlast she raised her voice
waiting 4 his reaction

Originally posted by: pranud

yey astha, you are so strong!

great update dear👏

Originally posted by: ruhakhan

i love dis astha 

shlok realised dat she can see through him 

wat will be shlok answer to dis 

waiting to know 

do update soon