Two Months More || A Kriyaansh One Shot. - Page 2

no wrds can descibe dis os...kt ws too too awsum..u r such a fab writer..

awsum OS mannu..

beautiful written 

beautiful os
kriyansh romance in swaron's marriage
kriya ke hath mein rey ka naam sabse ghra...too cute
Kriyansh imagining demselves n der reaction!!!
N d last dialogues...two more months!!!!

super awesome OS

I am loving your writings...and this one too...

wow 

Beautiful! It's such a beautiful OS.. Each and every scene..each and every moment was so wonderful.. Rey's missing u msg to kriYansh's 2 mnths mre vala assurnce..All in their perfct plce.. The mehandi romance..the way he held her..the way he dscrbd her to be hs wife..WOW! Kriya's husbnd's name on her mehandi nd the way he kssd hs name on her mehndi ws so romantic.. 😳 i lvd the wedding ritual part nd the expressns and reactns on kriyansh's face! And obviously d ending.. Just so perfect.. 😊 😊

Wow...Mahnaz u r growing as a writer girl...

dis was sooo beautiful...

firstly whn u described her wearing her lehenga n dose jwellery I thot its KriYaanshs marriage...

buh alas...!! It was SwaRons marriage...

shaadi bhale hi SwaRon ki thi buh romance toh humare KriYaansh kar rahe the...

lovd the start d way he txted her dat he was missing her n getting bored with these guys...

n d way Kriya blushed seeing his message...awww...

Mehendi scene was sooo cute...

every one teasing Sharon n dn Kriya...

n Kriya running away from the scene to avoid the teasing session...

n dn dat message...mast tha...poor girl shocked to see her fiance der...

n dn d blissfull intimate moment...

Rey trying to kiss her n she ran away...

the way he ordered her to write his name on her hand as if he owned her...beautiful moment...

n dn the mehendi drawing scene n Reys entry...

Rey trying to tease her by winking...badmash Singhania...

d bst part was whn she was thinking Rey never leaves a chance to jump on Kriya Ghais window...n he corrects her as Kriya Reyaansh Singhania...suprb moment...

n dn deir imtimate moment on d bed along with the fight...lovd it..

the way he said keh dena k practice kar rahe the by seeing the mark on her neck...haha...sach main badmash hai MR. Singhania...

n lastly...KriYaansh imagining deir marriage on seeing SwaRons ceremony...best of all...

last linr padh ke I remembered that Vivah (one of my favs) movie of Shahid n Amrita usme ka song "Humari shaadi main baki hai hafte char..."

Dey had 4weeks buh here KriYaansh has 2 months...

beautiful OS...lovd it...

Title: Meant to be together...(My take)

PS: Itna lamba comment kafi hai... :)Edited by reyaditi - 9 years ago

Wwwooowww Ameeezzziiinnnggg Lovely seriously Awesome the whole part was Awwwiiieee Mahanazzz so Amezing writer u r dr love u plz iska 2nd part bhi chahiye mujhe pllzzz