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Posted: 10 years ago
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wow interesting precap di...seems very interesting ...loved the k told meera to wash the dishes 😆 update soon 😳
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Originally posted by: Renu111

wow interesting precap di...seems very interesting ...loved the k told meera to wash the dishes 😆 update soon 😳



   Thanks renu 😃 
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very nice part di...nd precap seems intresting ...pls update soon.
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Lovely precap Dhanya👏

Looks like Sajan is going to dislike P more, just by his reaction to what Gayatri said.

K seems worried about P sneezing, love this caring K.

This Meera she is going to make trouble for P because of her jealousy😡.  

Poor P more heartbreak ahead for her.😭 

Hope K finds out the truth soon.👍🏼

Waiting for the update😛
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Originally posted by: lovelyarja

very nice part di...nd precap seems intresting ...pls update soon.

 
 coming soon😃
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Lovely precap Dhanya👏

Looks like Sajan is going to dislike P more, just by his reaction to what Gayatri said.

K seems worried about P sneezing, love this caring K.

This Meera she is going to make trouble for P because of her jealousy😡.  

Poor P more heartbreak ahead for her.😭 

Hope K finds out the truth soon.👍🏼

Waiting for the update😛


  thanks rekha... 😃 

   pretty soon ... u could say around the corner 😉
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part2 
Decided to keep this chapter too romantic as from next chapter onwards things r going to get serious 😳 


                                                                                 Krishna sat down , eying her with a smile as he watched her open the lids in enthusiasm n a bit apprehension ...  She sat down next to him , arranging his thaal , her face full of unmistakable love... for him!... he felt his heart being banged against stone as he took in her red eyes n streaks of tears along her cheek ...he felt that same feeling when he had watched her cry when he asked her to dance...that he will do anything...any bloody thing to make her smile...make her happy...n here , as always, he was the reason she had tears in her beautiful eyes ...no!... He touched her right palm , which was pouring daal into a small bowl n she looked up , tensed ... she thought he was stopping her... he pulled her to him in one swift motion n she gasped softly , her hands clutching along his shoulders , her eyes locked to his in apprehension , their faces inches from each other, their knees touching ... his eyes searched her innocent , confused eyes n he brought his right hand to her face , gently caressing away the residue of her tears along her cheeks n from under her eyes, his eyes apologetic n loving ... her eyes filled up again as happiness brimmed in her heart n he clicked his tongue , cupping her cheeks...' I am not going to eat if u insists on feeding me with ur eyes like a hose pipe...'  ... pratigya giggled through her tears n cupped his palms along her cheek ... she loved his mood swings! Who would believe it's the same man who was cold n aloof only a moment ago! ... 


                                                        'here...' she dabbed her eyes with her pallu, smiling up at him, automatically taking a piece off the roti n offering it to him...at the moment she didn't care if the whole world collapsed around her as he had opened his mouth automatically , licking her fingers too into his mouth, their eyes locked in a smile... it was like so natural for them, like breathing... It was as if they both knew she is going to feed him n he was going to open his mouth, just on cue... 'hmm...' he groaned softly, closing his eyes n sucking her fingers once , laying back to much the roti... his face explained to her everything she wanted to know whether he liked the taste ... She only had time to smile in happiness n blush at the way his tongue swirled over her fingers when he pulled her to him to his lap, his left hand securing her around her waist, his mouth claiming hers in a soft, tender kiss , his other hand caressing her along her cheek n jaw n neck... her eyes closed in joy , her wet hair falling over his face as her hands coiled around in his wet hair, melting into his arms n kiss, molding into his frame... she felt him suck gently at her sore lowerlip n she moaned , kissing him back shyly ...he didn't enter her mouth as he seemed to be content in worshipping every inch of her lips , although his fingers danced slowly over her neck n jaw , making her go feverish all over again... She moved her lips against his hard ones , shyly n happily , relishing the feel... both not knowing how long they continued with soft n gentle caress along each other napes n neck n jaw with their wandering fingers until the piercing ring of the phone disturbed them again... 



                                                                   Pratigya broke the kiss with a startled gasp , an unknown fear n pain returning to claw at her heart... what if he goes back? No!... he hadn't even eaten properly! ...krishna gritted his teeth against her trembling lips n he made her stay put on his lap as she made to get down , fishing out his phone from his pocket ... it was sajjan... his jaw worked as he looked up at her n saw her looking hopefully at him, but turning her face as pain crept in ... he cut the phone n switched it off n threw it over the other side of the couch ...


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                                                                        Sajjan gaped at his phone in surprise ... that was the first time ever krishna had cut his call... he dialed his num again n heard that the phone was switched off... what? His eyes narrowed in apprehension n confusion... gayatri, who was sitting with the lawyers saw sajjan's face n guessed correctly that may be krishna wasn't coming back to haveli soon... She had learned from rakesh that chote thakur has called off all the guards around the grounds n the maids were gossiping how chote thakur seemed totally shameless to enjoy his wife out in open grounds ... she walked towards sajjan , trying to hide her anger n tension ... he seemed too much into that girl!!!... 'he cut ur phone?' she asked sajjan dramatically ...she watched in satisfaction as sajjan's mouth twisted in dislike ...'oh , I think he is kinda busy , sajjan... that girl is with him... come on sajjan! U know him!... let's not interrupt his fun!..' she continued laughingly , placing her hands over his shoulder ... Sajjan looked across the ranch , through the thick curtains of rain , his face full of dislike ...  he has never seen krishna like this! ... even after telling him that chandu might end up getting accused , krishna is least bothered ... he never looked twice at those things as he calls them , but now its more than 2 weeks n his 'fun' with that girl isn't even far from over... that girl! She bloody well haven't trapped him in her honey trap! Sajjan thought in anger , his teeth gritting...


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                                                       Pratigya looked at him in shock , even as her heart jumped in happiness ... he smirked at her, taking a liberal amount of roti n offering her...' u haven't eaten anything either ...here..' tears sprung in her eyes again as she looked at him n then the roti in happiness n disbelief, gaping at him ... she is not dreaming, is she? ...'u look cute ... like this...' he chuckled at her surprised face n her wide eyes as he stuffed her mouth with the piece of roti ... she giggled, munching slowly , their eyes locked ... she took another piece n a liberal amount of curd in it n offered it to him , sitting straighter in his lap... He ate it, after taking each of her fingers in his mouth n sucking off the curd... never have he enjoyed curd in his life... pratigya could feel her breath coming in short pants , her body blossoming yet again in goosebumps ...she gazed at him from under her lashes as he offered her the next piece of roti , a naughty glint in his eyes ... it was as if he was giving her a dare... She blushed crimson , her eyes twitching in shyness ... Surely not! ... he raised an eyebrow, an amused smile on his lips... she opened her mouth timidly, her trembling fingers closing around his palm n took the piece of roti into her mouth, tentatively lapping her tongue at the tip of his fingers , closing her eyes... his eyes hooded instantly as his thoughts went wild , naughty to the core... he involuntarily pushed his fore finger more into her welcoming mouth , the hand along her waist flying to coil around her damp hair , tilting her head slightly back... She gasped out innocently , twitching in his lap as instinct told her to continue licking even as she adjusted her legs involuntarily over his lap, feeling his arousal against her thigh...she wasn't sure when she will get used to that! She thought, her body trembling deliciously... their eyes locked n he gazed into her innocent wide eyes , suppressing a groan...she is so innocent...! her eyes were apprehensive n ridiculously , adorably shy...



                                                             the curd felt hot as she encountered his stormy eyes ...she clutched at his arm for dear life even as her lips n tongue trembled around his finger... instinct ruled her n she closed her eyes, gently starting to suck , remembering what he did to her moments ago...she heard him hiss n pull his finger out n opened her eyes wide, alarmed n confused...he didn't like it? ... no! exactly the opposite... she felt a tremor up her spine as she encountered his eyes... Krishna was finding it difficult to rein his primal instincts anymore ...she is going to be the death of him!...her breath hitched in her throat at his eyes n she averted her eyes in sheer shyness ...her eyes saw that his thump still had curd on it n smiled innocently before taking his palm closer to her mouth n sucking at the tip of his thumb, closing her eyes serenely...all she wanted was to live up to his challenge ...his manly groan made her hair rise up all over her body n she shuddered in his lap, instinct telling her that she is done for, ungluing her mouth from his thumb with a wild gasp... He was slightly panting , his eyes hooded , piercing into her soul...the way her luscious , swollen lips wrapped around his finger!... she is killing him! ...he struggled with the most primal urge of ravishing her as he tried to concentrate on her wide, innocent n shy eyes ...she is so damn innocent!...does she have the slightest idea what she is doing to him? .  Don't u dare give in, KST! ...yes! He closed his eyes n leaned back as if relaxing ...willing his body n heart to calm down... pratigya looked at him, confused ... 'u rn't hungry , krishna? she asked , running a caring hand along his forehead n left cheek, resting her hand against his jaw... She felt his jaw clench ... did she mean that as a double entendre ?  ... 'here... I have bought ur fav kheer...' pratigya continued , not knowing the kind of war waging inside him...' no! ...i ... feed me roti... That's enough...!' he croaked , gently pushing her down from his lap to the couch , not meeting her eyes...n his eyes feel over the very visible lovebite over her neck...damn!... he can't wait for the moment when he would be taking her as n when he wishes , without having to listen to this ridiculous voice in his head!!!... he pulled a cushion over his lap to hide his very obvious arousal, pretending to sit cozier...as if she doesn't know about ur pathetic condition already! ...chided his heart... Shut up! I am trying to concentrate not to make myself a complete fool here! His mind bellowed back at his chuckling heart...  



                                                             pratigya looked at him in happiness as she dipped the roti in curd more n offered it to him... he carefully avoided her fingers n saw her face wilt a bit... damn! She was expecting him to lick her! The next time he lapped at her fingers slightly, just enough to keep his insane desire at bay n to make her feel that he is not trying to ignore her n yet to satisfy his naughty heart... pratigya gazed n gazed at him, reveling in the feel of his hands around her, the feel of his naughty mouth teasing her fingers, the feel of him eating off her hands, the feel of seeing him eating to his heart's content... to her heart's content... She has never thought that watching someone eat will be making her so happy...  krishna munched on the roti , his eyes lost in hers ... He couldn't remember the last time he enjoyed eating ... it had been a mechanical process ... not from now onwards! ... She is going to feed me n I am going to enjoy it... Minutes later krishna was sucking her fingers only , both not noticing that the food was long finished ... but they had to be interrupted by a sneeze ... pratigya, damp all over , sneezed loudly , her body seizing up at the force , involuntarily pulling her hand off his to cover her nose n mouth... Krishna blinked ... she looked up at him apologetically but sneezed again in quick succession ...



                                                          ' pratigya?' he called her, alarm in his voice, his hand along her back , slowing rubbing down to ease her ... she felt her heart flutter at his voice ...'I ...I am...alright...i...' she began , but couldn't even complete the sentence as she sneezed again... u fool! KST! ... it was ur idea to get her over pavan n do whatever ur heart fancied n now look! She is not feeling well... 'pratigya?' he called again, looking around like a deranged man for some dry cloth...  He cursed , n pratigya looked up at him in surprised shock as he dived for his phone ...he turned it on , his jaw set, running his hand through his hair in impatience as she sneezed again... He dialed chandu's number ...


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                                                            'hey its krishna..' chandu exclaimed n the lawyers n sajjan n gayatri looked up, in the middle of discussing anticipatory bail option for chandu n others... sajjan sighed in satisfaction n relief ... ha! So krishna is not ignoring what needs to be done in his clueless idea of fun ... he was beginning to feel apprehensive that krishna seemed to get addicted to that girl n wasn't paying attention to anything else that's going on... n more than that he feared the kind of effect that girl is having on his son!... 'chandu !listen... bring us fresh clothes ...now! n some towels ...she ...we got caught in rain n is at the ranch ... Quick ! ... N yeah ... Call the doctor ... She is sneezing! ' krishna said... chandu stared at the opposite wall , his mouth slightly open ... 'er...yes..krishna...' he croaked but found that krishna has already cut the phone ... 'what did he say? Is he coming?' sajjan enquired, confused at chandu's expression... chandu blinked ...' er... no bauji... he ...' he cleared his throat ... The lawyers don't know what's going on... 'he got caught in rain n wants ...wants to bathe pavan ... n he wants fresh clothes for them... I mean him...' chandu said awkwardly n walked towards the kitchen corridor ... he almost rolled his eyes as he remembered the last part of what krishna said... Call doctor... she is sneezing ... seriously! Sneezing!... he chuckled as he called sumitra ...krishna's clothes he could take out , but pratigya's was in her suitcase n he thought may be maji could select one for her ... sumittra smiled n nodded ... she pulled down her pallu over her face n came to the hall... sajjan watched her climb up the stairs , his mouth drawn in a thin line ... this is getting serious! Not only krishna is coming to meet the guests , but he is refusing to leave behind that girl even for a sec ... n that woman! She is getting to enter his son's room much too often!


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                                                           Pratigya gazed up at him dreamily as krishna fussed on her , taking her shivering , damp body in his arms as they stood next to the couch ... 'so stupid of me... N u too...' He bristled , rubbing her back n forehead n cheek , in an effort to keep her warm... why didn't u realize u were all wet n will catch cold? he reprimanded , trying to dry her hair using her pallu ... pratigya just sighed , snuggling closer to him , her heart in a buzz, her hand around n along his lower back...  Not even god can now try to waver her conviction that he cares for her ... n may be loves her! ...its not working! He thought as he pushed her back slightly n started unbuttoning his wet shirt ...her innocent eyes went wide n her cheeks flamed red even as she dropped her eyes to the floor , suddenly tensed ...krishna wasn't noticing...all his concentration was how to keep her warm...he threw away his shirt n pulled her to him , without much ado... She gasped out , blushing crimson on coming to contact with his bare chest n abdomen for the first time...her hands trembled along his muscular shoulders where she feathery touched him for sheer support ... her body blossomed in Goosebumps the moment it came to contact with his n he felt the change ...he inhaled sharply, finally realizing what's he doing...his body heated up like anything , just as the realization dawned on him... uhoh! Ok! KST! Focus! ...but it was getting worse... her erratic breathing was fanning his chest hair n her nose n lips trembled inches from his chest n pulse point...n her fingers! ... damn! ...may be this wasn't a good idea...



                                                            pratigya was feeling the heat from his body n she could feel an increasing difficulty in breathing ...n his scent! Alluring! R men supposed to smell this good!...may be its bec its him!...her eyes fixed on his adams apple n she could tell that he was struggling with himself... A girly giggle threatened to broke her lips but she pursed her lips , not daring to move even an inch... she heard him curse n raised her a bit to see him dial chandu again 'where the hell r u, chandu... I told u to come now!...' he snapped into the phone, trying to channel the flames of desire cursing through his veins into anger...' I am coming ... I am coming..' chandu chuckled, not bothering to keep the tease n amusement out of his voice...  krishna's jaw twitched as he heard the underlying tease ...'I am waiting...' he snarled into the phone in a cold whisper n pratigya felt the hair on her nape stand ... he gets angry just like that! ...she looked down abruptly n felt him secure her more against his chest n she closed her eyes , cuddling her cheek more to his chest, listening to his heartbeat , basking in the glory, a slow sigh escaping her lips as finally her skin came to contact with his...she felt his hands flex around her in unmistakable effort to keep standing idle... ...this is heave n hell , all at the same time, he mused , running his hand idly along her wet hair... 



                                                             chandu had gaped at the phone for a few secs as he neared the ranch ... He is angry bec she is sneezing!!!... well, his brother is going to be one hell of a possessive n fussy husband! He chuckled as he asked the servants to take out the fresh clothes from the car ... krishna didn't generally allow vehicles over the grounds but now he didn't seem to care as the wheels of the tire destroyed his carefully  kept  grass lawn in the stable area... Krishna heard the car arrive even through the rain n released pratigya , indicating to stay put, half relieved n half disappointed...she was feeling disappointed too as the warmth moved away n she chewed her lower lip unmindful of it already swollen state as her shy eyes raked his broad back n shoulders... He came out of the lawn to see the servants placing the clothes n towels over the hall of the stables n nodded at chandu , who pursed his lips deliberately as he saw his naked torso ...' tell the lawyers to go away n come back in the morning... its going to be midnight already ... n I don't want her to stay here the rest of the night... she needs a good rest n sleep...' Krishna said , dismissing the servants , who went outside immediately ... 'well, the lawyers r in the hall... she will be sleeping in your room no? why do u...' began chandu but he closed his mouth as krishna shot him an angry n irritated look... 'do as I say... n I mean it! I don't want anybody , any body in the hall when I bring her there...' he said , his tone making it final... chandu shrugged 'right' before turning away n rolling his eyes ...'n I saw that!' snapped krishna , grabbing the clothes n towels ... 'send us a car here...' he continued , going inside the lawn...chandu hid his smile as he walked outside...



                                                 Pratigya watched in eager shyness as he brought in the fresh clothes n towels... He put on a fresh kurta , indicating her to take her clothes ... She stared at him , suddenly wide eyed in a delicious panic... What? Surely not! ... he is not expecting her to change here!! Is he? ... 'what r u waiting for?' he snapped at her in a good fussy manner as he grabbed her n pulled her to him, toweling her head... 'i...I am fine...no need to change.'  she stuttered , loving his attention all the same... 'what?' he stopped attacking her hair n gazed into her eyes, his arms holding her upper arms... the towel sat like a pallu over her head n she looked beyond cute, not to mention erotic with a few damp strands of her hair over her face ... she was breathless with apprehension n shyness ...'i...we could go to haveli n then...' She began but sneezed loudly ...' I don't want to hear a thing! Go n change now!' krishna bristled , thrusting her clothes in her hands n indicating the adjacent stable... all he could think was getting her comfortable n put a stop to her sneezes... what if she catches fever? ...'no..i ...I don't want to change...its just a sneeze...' She tried to reason , her heart going overdrive ...he clicked his tongue , trying to pull at her pallu along her shoulder , with an exasperated n yet amused look on his face ... 'no! I ... I will go now...' she squeaked, jumping back n clutching at her pallu along her chest as if it were her life line, her eyes panicky n shy, red all over... he looked at her strangely... What's her problem? She will catch fever!!!... he looked at her beet red face n shivering frame as she stumbled towards the next rank... 


                                                                        she seems to have made a pact with herself to disobey whatever he told her! He thought irritably as he began to change his jeans n boxers, his body reflexively turning away from the direction she went ... his naughty mind urged him to finish faster lest she came back n saw ...! He inhaled , desire uncoiling inside him ...f**k! that was the reason! just as he was wondering if she saw him naked, although he don't mind at all , was she wondering about him seeing her naked or in the middle of changing or whatever! ... His throat went dry ... He stiffened , running a frustrated hand through his hair , almost pulling it out... there , only a few paces n a wooden wall apart , she might be changing ... naked ...no ! don't think about it! He sunk his hands into the couch as he sat down , gritting his teeth to stay put where he was n ignored the feral call of his body n heart to just close those few steps n ...just see...what's in store for him... how beautiful she is...how will her milky white skin look like ... how her hair would look like , lying all over her naked back n ...NO! get a grip KST! ... as if u haven't seen naked things ! ...no! she is not like those! She is ...different ...she is ...she ! a real ...woman ...! In flesh n blood! ... she is ... mine! His woman! ... he panted , standing up, his eyes turning red in the effort to stay calm ... Why just watch! Take her! No need to prolong ur agony to tmw KST! ...Now! ... 


                                                    he licked his lips in undiluted desire as he made to sprint towards her when he heard her sneeze again , the sound echoing weirdly , coming from the other rank...  His heart halted his body's progress ... She is not well ! u moron KST! Can't u just be patient ! ...its just sneezing ! he heard his mind counter ... She is not well! Period! Now turn around n ...distract urself ...from the kind of dirty thoughts u r conjuring up! Now!... he closed his eyes n took a deep breath , fisting his hands ... he walked towards pavan's stable... he must endure the torture tonight n tmw too... from tmw night onwards she is his! Anyway what's the fun in knowing about his gift beforehand ! once he is sure of her love , he will be unwrapping her himself ...touching , caressing , tasting every nook n cranny ...but for now, don't forget that the bait u gave her is still open... first unravel her heart ! find the deepest secret in it! whether it truly belongs to u or not! Then find out about her body! Yes! Once u r sure u own her heart, owning her body will be even more pleasurable...yes! he smirked at the mental image of his reflection in her innocent wide eyes ... Pavan whined in excitement as he approached him n krishna turned on the hope pipe , unnecessarily bathing a surprised pavan...



                                                          Inside the other rank, pratigya was a nervous wreck... she checked n double checked the stacks of hose saddles she had pushed up against the partition door ... her heart thundered like anything... Come on pratigya! U know he wants u like...mad!... N u know that u can't stop him, don't want to stop him either!... u r his in every way , every way except may be the most primal way as it happens between a man n a woman! N that too will be fulfilled pretty soon, going by what happened earlier! ... But...but that doesn't mean that I could go carefree n start behaving as if I am perfectly fine in ...in ..she gulped in tension as she placed her wet sari over a stack of hey with trembling hands ... she can't even finish the thought! ... She hissed slightly n sneezed as her finger scratched at her neck over the lovebite n she almost grabbed the fresh saari in her hands , bundling it up against her chest n looked at the direction of the other room like a petrified dear... What if he comes? ... well ... u can't stop him ! ...why waste time in worrying about it? ... she tried to take deep clam breathes as she replaced the saari n began to undress completely , shivering like anything ... she is going to embarrass herself infront of him she knew it! ... she can't even handle his passion for her for 5 solid minutes n she is having death strokes at the thought of him seeing her semi naked even...  she will be fainting in his arms in shyness at the very thought of his eyes on her...no! don't think about it! ... she took several deep breathes as she fastened the dori of her underskirt n felt a slight searing feeling over her thigh as she bent to pick up her fresh saari... 


                                                               she pulled up the skirt tentatively n ran a cautious hand along her thigh...the skin there felt sore ...she blushed scarlet , a shiver running up her spine n she immediately pulled down her skirt above her ankle , her hands hugging herself to try n make her heart stay put in her chest as it was creating havoc against her ribs ... his finger n nail marks were all over  her side thigh , just near to her knee cap... she remembered his palm almost fisting around her thigh in need n she felt that curious wet feeling between her legs , as she bit her lips to stem a strange moan escaping her lips... what's happening to her? What is he doing to her? ...  don't u dare waste ur time pratigya in silly thoughts... He may come checking what's the delay ...she grabbed the sari , quickly draping it around her... she carefully bundled up the wet clothes n came to the lawn sneezing again ... She saw him emerge from the otherside, in a white shirt n lose black leather pants , toweling his hair, not looking at her ...he could tell that she was wearing pink n he gritted his teeth , trying not to imagine her without it... 'get in the car, quick..  leave them here...' he said , indicating the clothes in her hand, not making eye contact ... Which was fine by pratigya as she wasn't sure if she would survive his gaze ...'yes' she mumbled softly n walked towards the table to pick up the empty plates ...'leave them... I will sent a maid to pick them up... u r not feeling well, pratigya!' he said , his voice exasperated as he opened the door of the car...


                                                   she knotted n un knotted her fingers , looking down as she climbed in... the ride was silent , both of them aware of the other n the kind of thoughts swirling along their minds... the air was thick with raw sexual tension n Krishna almost groaned out his relief as they reached the haveli ...  she slipped slightly over the marbles his hand came around her to secure her ... It was then he noticed that she wasn't wearing any slippers ...what? She is adamant to get herself a fever in this weather , isn't she? ... without any preamble he picked her up bridal style n she gasped softly , looking up at him , a ridiculously beautiful blush in her cheeks ...  focus! He told himself as he climbed the steps , relieved that chandu had indeed managed to keep the hall clear ... Even the guards at the door were absent! Good! ... Wait!... some maid seems to be lurking near a vase at the bottom of the stairs ... he was about to blew up when he remembered the dirty plates n clothes ... 'hey u! go n pick up the dirty plates n clothes from the stable'  he snapped at the maid , climbing up the stairs ...meera gulped down in jealousy n panic ,  bowing down... pratigya , who had eyes only for Krishna kept gazing at him , her cheeks a permanent red ...meera watched in anger n loathing at her flushed face , fisting the duster in her hand ... this one more night, u bitch! Tmw..! u will be dead! Meera thought, gritting her teeth ...

 

                                     Hope u liked it 😳  


  

 

Edited by dhakarn - 10 years ago
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Wonderful Update Dhanya👏😳

Kriya love each other so much and both a little scared that the other is going to hurt them


Love this caring K how much he is affected by P being sick😳

Dreading the Misunderstanding K will be under about P  soon hope it won't last long and she won't have to deal with his cruelty for long period of time.  I have feeling Meera is going to be behind this.  Poor P😭

Looking forward to the next update. 😊


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Posted: 10 years ago
#29
wonderful update di...
kriya is in love ..just waiting for their confession bt i know its not soon...what will k do next to test pratigya...update soon... 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
#30
very well written
superb kriya scene 😳
now they are going back home trouble awaits  i hope its mu doesn't last too long
update soon  ❤️