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Posted: 10 years ago
Hello guyzzz!!!! i m new in indian forums. This is my very first poem...hope u will like it.                                                                                                                                                                                                        Looking through a picture                                         
Scrutinizing the details                                              
 Remembering the old gone days                             
  Makes you speechless for a moment                                                                                                             A faint smile lit up your face     
 Searching the past with happiness     
 That no longer exists in this        
  Selfish and hypocrite world     

People are around you
Here there and everywhere
Like your knight in shining armour
Pretending to be your saviour

But when the time will come
When you will be surrounded by darkness
You will find no one lighting
The candle to escape you.

i hope u guyzz like it...pleazzz comment...                        
                 
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Posted: 9 years ago
beautiful poem...

keep writing...

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Posted: 9 years ago
Hi dear,
   Beautifully  expressed your feelings about the World.Keep writing .😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
thank u so much guys for giving such wonderful comments...😊