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Posted: 10 years ago
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Part 1

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Two cute girls running behind each other...

Didu pakdke dikhayo mujhe

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.

Aahh...

Didu

Aap thik toh ho na

Her didu laugh...

Didu apne cheating ki

Toh

Tum nhi krti cheating

Mein aapki chothi ho na

Mujhse

Chl ab nauntanki bnd kr

Maa aati hi hongi

Maa ke aane se phle tu ye khale

My favourite chocy

She hugged her didu...

Thank you didu

Jaldi kha le

Someone take chocolate from her hands...

Nitya ye mein tumhare liye laayi thi

Aur tum isse de rhi ho

Maa wo geetu ko pasand hai na

Badi Maa mujhe do na

Nhi

Jaake apna kaam kr

Maa please

Tu apni maa se bhs karengi

Jaake apne room me pd

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didu why you left me alone...

.

Tu abhi tak tyaar nhi hoyi

Geet : badi maa

Mujhe ye shaadi nhi krni

BM : tujhse humari khushi bardaast nhi hoti na

Geet : badi maa

Mein aap sbse bhut pyaar krti hu

Par mein kaise nitya didu ki jagh

BM : tu uski jagh kbhi nhi le sakti

Kbhi apne sapne mein bhi mt sochna

Tu uski jgh le sakti hai

Geet : nhi badi maa

Mein asa soch bhi nhi sakti

BM : yhi tere liye acha honga

Aur ab jaldi tyaar hoja

Maan bte apni family ke sath aate hi honge

Aur mein unke saamne koi tamasha nhi chahti

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Didu ye dekho meri report card

Mein class mein first aayi hu

Didu : my geetu is best

Geet : didu ab mera gift do

Didu : phle aankhe bnd kr

.

No cheating

Geet : didu aap mujhe kaha leke jaa rhe ho

Didu placed her hand on her eyes and taking her outside...

.

Didu : thoda sbr baba

Geet : didu

Didu : bs ek minute

Hum puch gye

Geet opened both eyes and see "cycle" standing in front of her...

Geet : didu ye kiski cycle hai

Didu : are budhu tere liye hai

Geet : didu meri

Didu : ha

Geet : par

Didu : par ve kuch nhi

Geet : par cycle toh aapke liye aane wali thi na

Didu : par maine papa se kaha

Mujhe cycle apni geetu ke liye chaiye

Geet : badi maa maan gyi

Didu : ha

Wo toh bhut khush huyi meri baat sunke

Geet : schi

Didu : didu ne kbhi geetu se jhooth kaha hai

Geet : na

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She wears her bridal attire and sited in front of mirror...

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Geet : didu you looking so beautiful

Nitya : jb teri shaadi hongi na

Tu mujhse bhi jyada khubsurat lagengi

Geet : didu mujhe shaadi nhi krni

.

Aap apni baat kro na

Aaj toh jiju aapko bs dikhte hi rh jaayenge

**********

Her phone buzzed...

Geet : abhi

She cut the call... her phone again buzzed...

Now she picks his call...

Abhi : geet

Tu mera call cut kyun kr rhi thi

Geet : abhi wo mein busy thi

Abhi : sb thik hai na waha

Geet : ha

Tu kb aa raha hai

Abhi : abhi one week lagenga

Geet : hmm

Abhi : ab tu naraaz mt ho

Pakka mein 7 din ke baad tere saamne honga

Geet : hmm

Abhi : geet mein tujhse baad mein baat krta hu

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Both sited in front of holy fire and fulfilling each rashm like machine ... physically both present here, but mentally both lost...

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Today, two people bound in one relation, now society known as husband & wife...

precap :-

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see this updates too :-

MG- KHAMOSHI-lakin kb tk - part 28 on page 9 (22 may) & part 29 on page 12 (24may)


Edited by priya_21 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#83
Me first. Update mil gaya finally.
Her family is bad, doesn't support her except her sister. Past were lovely. Her sister trying to give her happiness that no one gives her.
Nitya marriage but uske jagah Geet. Y????
Waiting for more
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Posted: 10 years ago
#84
Awesome update priyanka...
congrats on the new ff...
supreb prolouge...
and a great start...
looks like geet is very attached with her sis nitya...
but her family doesn't support her..
looks like her badimaa is a tough charecter..
loved the past of geet soo cute..
lekin geet ki shaddi aur geet saying nitya ki jagah nahi le sakthi...
Whr is nitya?who is abhi?
superb story...loved it very intresting..
eagerly waiting for the further story track...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#85
thanks for update
poor geet her bm is very bad
but her didu is very good
did maan is geet jiju
is nitya no more

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Posted: 10 years ago
#86
interesting starting...

loved it...

thank u very much fr d lovely update...

eagerly waiting fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#87
starting me hi suspense but i loved itπŸ‘πŸ‘
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Posted: 10 years ago
#88
geet past was awesome
loved it cont soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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hi thanks 4 da wonderful emotional update! Lovely banner! Past n present well incorporated! Geet's family is so terrible! Nitya ws supposed to get married bt nw Geet gt married! Who is Abhi? Seems like both bride n groom forced to get married! update soon! Well written
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: crazydream

Me first. Update mil gaya finally.
Her family is bad, doesn't support her except her sister. Past were lovely. Her sister trying to give her happiness that no one gives her.
Nitya marriage but uske jagah Geet. Y????
Waiting for more



dear u get all answer soon

thanks for comment
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