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Posted: 11 years ago

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Originally posted by: oshinchaudhary

K then I'll update it on Friday

Yay, i'll wait 😃

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harshita singh

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Posted: 11 years ago

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HEY EVERYONE M BACK WITH ANOTHER UPDATE HOPE U ALL WILL LIKE IT...
I WANT TO DEDICATE THIS CHAPTER TO RISHBALA3018 N JASKARAN KAUR...ENJOY!!!!

Chapter 11

OLD BUILDING OF St Xavier's Collage

Jalal picked up the paper which fell from above right in front of him. he looked here n there n then looked upward to see if someone is searching for these papers bt he could not find anyone . After searching for some more time he thought to see what those paper r about or maybe he can get the name of the person it belong to.

thinking this he opened it on first page name of some collage was written on it nhe felt as if he had heard the name of this collage some were. he turned that page n was about to read when he heard jodha's voice he hurridely put all those papers in his bag n moved toward the direction from where sound was coming from.

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JODHA'S POV

"Salima!!!! moti!!!" icalled there name for third time now bt still there was no trace of them. " oh god kaha hai yeh dono muje yaha bulake khud gayab hai..." n i was really angry as i dont ilke to waitn where r they "phele itna beg kar rhe the mujhe yaha bulane keliye aur ab dekho jab mein aagayi tho errr i swear agar yeh in dono ka koi prank hai toh i'll kill them for sure" i muttured to my selfel.

after waiting for for more i decide to go from there n in hurry i failed to notice the water spilled on the floor n sliped..i shouted in anticipation n closed my eyes waiting for ground to hit me. Bt instead of ground floor a strong bt warm hands took me in his embrance.

slowly i opened my eyes to see the person who saved me . As i opened my eyes the first thing i saw was thoes brow orbs ,n can see the care n the worry in them for me n pain too. i didnt know y bt i just kept on looking at his eyes as he has done some kind of magic spell on me which is not letting me move. i kept on looking in his eyes n i could hv kept looking at he doesnt hv spoiled it by speaking.
I hv known whohe was even before opening my eyes after all he is the sole resone to all pain n problem in my life. He again asked meif m alright that when all those things which he said to me in the attrium came back to me n i jerked him away from.

END OF POV

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Jodha jerk jalal away from her n without even uttering a single word she start moving away from that palce only to get stopp[ed by him.
jalal stops her by holding her wrist " jodha wait ..i ..i want to talk to u" bt she didnt replied forget replying she didnt even turned back .
she started twisting n turning her hand in order to free herself bt to know use he was way too strong for her. he again said" just listen to me once n theni'll let u go" n jodha anger knew no bound she turned... her eyes were full of anger nhater for him. he was taken a back seeing hatered in her eyes were love exsisted once .

jodha " what u want to talk huh??? is there still left somthing to tlk between us... after all that u said to me in the attrium u still hv guts to come n talk to me!!!!! stop beaving like m a puppet of ur ki tum jab bologe jo bolege meinwahi karungi understand...so just back off...n leave alone" with this jodha freed her hand from his grip which has lossen by nnow n left from there. leaven a shocked jalal behind her.

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collage canteen

surya was siting in the canteen n was having his favourit sandwch when abdul came n sits infront of him by pulling a chair.
abdul " so?"
surya "(eating his sandwch) so ?"
abdul " hv u done wat i asked u to do?"
surya "ya bhai i hv...after all u asked me to it " then he smiled evily in his mind thinking about what he actually did with thsose papers.
abdul " (giving a very big smie to him) thanks yaar tujhe nhipata ki tune aaj meri kitni helpki hai"
surya "bhai mein yah sirf aap hi ke liye aya hun rite...appke liye mein jo kar sakta hun woh jarur karunga" abdul gave him a side hug n gets up to leave
abdul " chal see u later"
surya "bhai kaha ja rahe hoo??"
abdul "jodha aur jalal ke bich yeh misunderstanting kaise aayi aur kisne kiya pata lagne" n with that abdul left from there.
surya puts his half eaten sanwch back in the plate "bhai aap chae kitna bhitry karlo mein apko jodha aur jalal ko kbhi pass nhi lane dunga kyuki i know wat jodha mean to u"

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JALAL'S HOUSE

Jalal was in his bathroom taking shower n thinking about his meeting with jodha toady. He know thta after what he did with her he only desserve only hater n ignorance from her bt still he is able to take it . Bcoz in reality this hater of n ignorance o hers is kill him from inside.he can take n see any thing bt hater for him in her eyes...

he closes his eyes in frustration n starts remembering every event that took place. He remember how he lied to salima n moti so that they can help him in making jodha come to him ...then hw impatient he was while waiting for her...n then those papers.. suddenly heopens his eyes as he remember about those paper.

He came out of shower dried himself put on his boxers n without waisting any time he took out those papers fromhisbag n starts reading it.

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JODHA'S HOUSE

Jodha was siting in her balcony with her gittar n was playing some tune on it bt her mind was not concentrating on the music instead she was thinking about what happened in past one week n today. She remember jalal's guilty eyes asking for her forgiveness n hw she ignored it...then hw he made those stupid excuses to tlk to her...n then today...did she do right by saying those hatefull words to him...
jodha"offcourse i did the right thing he deserve all this n iwill never forgive him for wat he did n said to me no matter what"n with this determination she goes inside her room

A/N:- dont forget to hit like n comment...next update is tomorrow itself...luv u alll

Edited by oshinchaudhary - 11 years ago

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Posted: 11 years ago

#353

HEY MBACK AGAIN WITH NEW UPDATE . I KNOW THAT U ALL REQUESTED ME TO GIVE A LONG UPDATE BT HERE I WITH ANOTHER SHORT ONE...BUT AFTER THIS UPDATE MY EVERY UPDATE WILL BE LONG ...I PROMISE...N U ALL KNOW THAT I DO KEEP MY PROMISES...I HOPE U ALL WILL LIKE IT N DONT FORGET TO LIKE N COMMENT...LUV U ALL...N I WANT TO DEDICATE THIS CHAPTER TO dremygatz FOR ALL HER COMMENTS N SUGGESTION LIKES N REVIEWS JUST THANK U...

CHAPTER 12

it has been two days since jalall read those papers . only his allah knows hw he passed these two days after knowing the truth...b still was nt able to believe it...i mean hw can i do such a big mistake...no..no..it was not mistake jalal dont give your sin name of mistake nmake it small...how..how cn i do this??? that to with my jo...no i hv lost the right to call her ...her mine..tears were running down his eyes ...n due to continues crying it had all becum puffy n red...there are darkcircles under his eyes wch was the proof of his sleepless nights from past two days...his hairs all messy...there were strain of blood on the floor ...wch came there when he punched the wall in anger or guilt...

he was just siting in hat position from god only knows hw much time...rite nw all he wanted to was to just go to jodha n ask her to punish him all he did ...to let her know that why he did all this to her...n the most impotant thing he wanted to know if she'll ever be able forgive him n cn accept him again in her life.

he did wanted to do all these things bt he was ble gather that much courage to in front of her n see in her eyes which pleaded himto trust her...to not leave her..which showed hw much it pained her when he betrayed her...which showed hw much she loved him...bt he didnt even gave a damm...

he curse himself for not going deeper finding out if she was the one whom his brother loved??? why did he just belived wat he saw??? why didnt he asked her himself????

n will she ever forgive him??hell even couldnt forgive himself hw did he just accept her to forgive him??? he was not able to understand whether he should be happy aftere knowing that she was not the person who he thought she was or he should cry on his fate for playing such prank on him...

he stood up fromhis place "no i cant we week at this point of time i hv alredy wasted so much of time bt not anymore i'll stright away go to jo n ask her for her forgiveness ...n if will not forgive me then i'll work even more hard for forgiveness bt i just cant let go of my love so easily..."

he was to leave when ruqu entered his room.

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jodha was siting in her garden n was adoring the nature...then her eyes fell on the roses in her garden n it brought memory of with him back

flashback

jodha was in her room studying when her cell phone starts blowing up she runs to her bed n sees the number it wa flashing which brings smile on her face ..she looks in the mirror how she looks though see knows he cant see her through bt still she just being a girl madly in love with her boyfriend. n if ur boyfriend is someone as handsome as jalal then u do hv to do an extra effort to look good rite??

with these thoughts going in her mind she picked up his phone
jodha "hello"
jalal "hey love!! hwz u??? what were u doing ?" only she knows hw good she feels when he call her love she thought smiling widely...
jodha " m gud ...n wasnt doing anything much"
jalal "great can u just come down staires ?"
jodha "(confussed) bt y?? jalal r u at my place?do u even realize wat time it is ? its 12 o'clock jalal"
jalal "(smiling) yup n nw just hurry up n come down staires plz m waiting for u"
jodha "ok" n with that they hung up ...she again checked her self in the mirror n went out of her roomto go down stares as soon as she steps out of room the lights goes of
jodha "what the hell iss light ko bhi abhi jana tha kya" she uses her cell phone lights to downstairs .
as soon as she reach downstairs all the light come back she closes her eyes due too sudden light ...that she feel somthing soft falling of her she open her eye only to find shower of roses on her ...she was felling so happy she had always imagened how it must feel to get shower of roese on u whenever she thses things on tv or movies bt today she knows hw it feels...

then she look around her only to find bookey of roses all around her...there was more then hundred roses around her...there was big smile on her face she was looking all around her thats when she located him in one of the cornr looking that her with his famous smirk on his face..."jalal" jodha muttered

slowly he took steps toward her n she was waiting for him. He come close to her n as soon as he cum close enough jodha without wasteing any time further hughim very tightly."
jalal "do u like it?" he asked her very softly near her ears. jodha broke their hug n nw cupped his face n says "like??i loved it jalal...u know wat no one ever did somthing so special like this for me..thank u " he slides his hand around her waist n brings her near himself n says in a husky voice "n no one cn even dare to do this bcoz u r mine jo n then they share an eyelock
jalal "by the way i hv one more thing for u?"
jodha "(amused) u hv something more" jalal brings a box not too big n not too small in size n give to her n ask her to open it up...she open it up only to find a rose made of crystal in side it.."its beautiful" she whispered ..jalal leand down said in her ears" happy rose day my love" she looks up in his eyes. he lean down more n kiss on her lips n then she was in his warm n soft lips which were kissing were passionately..

END OF FLASHBACK

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PRSENT

jodha had tears in her eyes remembering those beautiful days of past with him...she still couldnt find out where they went wrong??? They were perfect couple madly in love with each other...they were going on dates ..watching movies together...helping each other when they need it ...spending days n night in each others arms n then just in one second it was all gone as if it never exsisted...

like it was just a dreaam of her which broke when she woke up..ohhh how she wished that some how one day a miracle will occure n she will open her eyes to find that it was all just a bad dream of hers...or he'll just come bck to her n say that he still loves her...

bt deep inside she do know that now everthing cant get back to what it was before all this...

precap:-
RUQU :- HE FOUND OUT THE TRUTH NOW U'LL HV TO
COME BACK OTHERWISE OUR PLAN WILL GET
FAIL..
PERSON:- DONT WORRY I WONT LET THAT HAPPEN SHE'LL
NEVER GET JALAL I PROMISE U...I'LL BE BACK AFTER
2 WEEKS TILL THEN U HANDLE THE SITUATION OVER
THERE...

plz do hit lke n omment...

Edited by oshinchaudhary - 11 years ago

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Posted: 11 years ago

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CHAPTER 13

JALAL'S HOUSE

Ruqu was very happy bcoz after so many days she is finally going to meet jalal. He blushed thinking about him. She remember hw they used to be together all the time studying, cracking jokes,dreaming about their future, hangging out till late in nights, going to movies, parting.

Bt it all changed when she enterd their life n spoiled everything. She stole her jalal from her. Jalal's love his care was dll of his thing which was supposed to be her jodha tried to stole it from her. Bt wat jodha didnt was that i m ruqu n no one gets away after taking wat was ment for her n only her.

So she triend to make her look down bt everytime she tried to spoil her image she rose above more brightly n beautifully. When she saw that none of her plans are working so she thought of seprating jalal n jodha bt their to the more she tried to seprate them the more they came close to each other. Day by day sec by sec they were getting jodha was getting more close to jalal n she..she was going away from him.

She had lost all her hope to seprate them bt people say na that if there is a will there is a way...that's exactly wat happened with her...n she was sucsefully in seprated them...she was happy that happy old days are back ...where their will be no jodha between jalal n her...

Thinking n smile over her victory she entered jalal's room. Bt was she saw there shocked her the whole room was a mess pillow were lying on the floor, flowers which was supposed to be in vase was on the floor, his study table was all empty n all of its things which was once were kept on it was now on floor, the favourite vase of jalal which he didnt even let anyone even touch it was now in pieces, she can see some paper half burned were on floor, some piece of glasses where also there with dried blood on it then there was some blood on the side wall too she gasped in fear seeing mark of blood.

She looked all round the for one last tym n it seemed like a tornado had landed here. She was scaning the room with her fearfull n shocked when she noticed jalal sitting on the ground looking nowhere in particular bt she can see gilt, pain, anger in his eyes.

She was still in trance thinking wat excatly must hv happened to him that he did all this when she noticed him getting up .

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As jalal turned to go to jodha he found ruqu over their. He saw that she was abt to say somthing n he knew wat she would ask bt he was just not in the mood giving answers to anyone accept jodha. Do without saying a single word or listening to her he just moved out of the house. He did hear ruqu calling him from behind n asking ques bt he just dont to do further delay n besides ruqu face only remind him of his wat he did wid his love jodha.

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JODHA'S ROOM

Jodha was sleep when she felt someone's hand creasing her face. She opened her eyes n with a jerk sat on the bed. She was very scared her got wider when she saw the face of the person who was creasing her face "jalal!" She uttered "hmmm" he replied.

She quicly switched on the table light as it was night so she was nt able to see him properly. Jalal moved his hand toward jodha bt before he could touch her she jumed off bed n asked "wat r u doing at this tym in my room?? N hw dare u try to touch??aur..aur tum mere room meon kaise aye Haan" she was fuming in ager.

Jalal got up from the bed m came in front of her n said "woh tumhare balcony ka darwaza khula tha toh" jodha looked towards the door of the balcony which was indeed open she cursed herself for being so careless then again her eyes again moved towards him "balcony ka darwaza khula tha toh kya huh!! Tum mere room mein jaoge...bas bahut hogya mein abhi uncle ko bulati hun" she moved towards the gate of the room she opened the lach of the doorn opend the door to move out when jalal close the door with the push of his hand jodha took a deep breath and moved towards him now they came face to face.

"Ek baar meri baat sun lo phir tumhare mann mein jo aye woh karna" he said thin pleading tone. Jodha didnt want to hear wat he had to say bt even after making up her mind to say she ended up saying "m listening"

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JALAL'S ROOM

Ruqu was siting on jalal's bed thinking wat has happened that jalal is behaving like this. She frustrated thinking abt thr reasons bt not getting any answers.

She got up from bed started rooming in his room "akhir aesa kya ho gya ki jalal ne yeh sab kardiya...aur mere kahne par bhi nhi ruka?? Mein kuch dino ke liya bahar gyi aur in kuch dino mein aisa kya ho gaya
Jo .." she suddenly stopped her blabber as she saw that file n jodhas pic on it.

She straight away towards the side of the bed where that file n pic was kept she picked file n pick "yeh jodha ki pic yaha aur yeh file kasi hai" she opened that file n sarted reading it. Her eyes got wider in schoke when she read it. She gasped in fear n covered her mouth with her hand "is..iska matlab jalal ko sab pata ...pata chal gya
.par ..par hw the hell did it happened...aur yeh file jalal ke pass ke..kese" she was asking herself all sort this ques when another thought strike her which made fear ran down her spine "kahi ja..jalal ko ...mer...mere bare mein pata toh nhi chal gya?" That fall from her hand...n she starts running her fingers in her hairs "nhi aisa nhi ho sakta...use jodha ki saachai jarur pata chala hai par mere baar..baare meine nhi...kyuki agar aisa hota toh abhi mein yaha nhi hoti"

"Par ab...ab mein kya karun" she asked herself her one hand was on her hips n other on her forhead. "Now its tym ki woh yaha wapas aajaen" with that she picked her phone n dialed some number.
Person "haan bolo kyun ph kiya?" That person asked in irriated voice.
ruqu "jalal ko sab pata chal gya"ruqu replied in helpless voice.
person "(shocked) kya?? Kaise??"
ruqu " kisine use ek file behji hai jis mein adoption ke papers hai...jodha ke collage ka certificate hai jis mein uske mom dad ke naam mention hai...then kuch photos hai jodha aur uske parents ka"
person "(angrly) n who gave it to him??n do he also noe abt us?"
ruqu "i dont know who gave this to him..n i dont think ki he knows about us?"
Person "hmm"
ruqu "i think its time now that u come back otherwise humari sari mehnat bekar ho jayge"
person "dont worry ..I'll be there after two weeks..till then u take care of the situation."

With that they dissconnected their call. Ruqu looked around herself for one last time n then grabbing her thing she went out of jalal's room toward her house.

Precap:- jalal manofying jodha n some romanti moments between joja

Finished!!!! Nw start givinf comments n dont forget to hit the like button...n forgive me for any mistakes...luv u all

Edited by oshinchaudhary - 11 years ago

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harshita singh

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I want to dedicate this chapter tojaskaran kaur...without ur help this chapter was not possible at all..so thank u so much for wat u did...luv u

CHAPTER 14

FINALLY I HAVE UPDATED😛😛

Jodha was still standing near the door caged between jalal's arm looking in his eyes from past 5 min waiting for the answer of his sudden announcement in her room. On the other hand jalal was lost looking in her big brown eyes.

There was guilt, love n relief in his eyes bt he didn't find any emotion in her eyes for him which was killing him he was looking at her to just trying find a single glimpse of any emotion for him in her eyes. But he found none not even hate he felt like he more had any place in her heart or life.

He wanted to say so much bt her emotionless eyes were making him feel weak. At that point of time he felt like just take her in his embrace n cry his heart out. But he knows that he can't do that as it might offend her or hurt her n he can't afford to hurt her anymore.

He wanted to tell her that how difficult it was for him to hurt the person whom he loved with all his life, how difficult it was for him to make her cry for whom he asked for all the happiness in the world in his every prayer, how much pain he went through when he came to know that the love of his life his jodha was the one responsible for the death of his dearest brother.

Oh!! How he wished to tell her that even when he hated her for doing so bad with her brother he never stopped loving or caring for her. He wanted to tell her how sorry he was for not straight way coming to her n asked her about all the questions he had reading her identity bcoz if he had asked her than they both didn't hv to suffer so much. He curse that moment when he didn't listen to his heart which was screaming that his jodha can never do such a thing n believed the proves which he got against her.

He wanted to tell her that even when he left her to cry he was always their only the difference was that she was not able to see him. He wanted to tell her that this was not the first time when he enter her room through balcony to see how is she. He wanted her to know that , that past one month when she almost stopped living n stopped talking to anyone every night he use to come in her room to see if she is ok praying that she didn't do any thing stupid or hurt herself. He wanted her to know that in that whole 1 month she cryied in her dreams taking his name he wiped her tears. He only know hw much it hurted him seeing her in that state he felt like killing himself for what he did with her. But not even a singal word was coming out of his mouth.

On the other had jalal's silence was just irritating her. N after another 1 min she decided to break the ice before she goes mad. She waved her fingers in front of his eyes which broke his chain of thought "kya hua ab koi bahana yaad nhi aaraha?" she asked but still he didn't speak a word "I should hv know kit um yaha sirf mujhe irritate karne ayeho?" still no response form him "fine tum yahi kade raho mein abhi uncle ko bulati hun" with she shoved he hand away from door n moved towards to open it "I m sorry" she heard him saying.

At last he said it out loud he know that 1 sorry or even thousands of apologies r not going to make any difference bt he has start from somewhere right!! After hearing what those words she turned towards him n he can clearly see confusion n irritation in her beautiful brown eyes. Then he heard her saying "if u think that u'll just say a sorry for coming to my room like this n get away with it then u r highly mistken"

Jalal "no..no..no...no I m not saying sorry for coming to ur room like that" he saw her looking at him in anger when so he said "I mean I m sorry for this too.. bt..bt that soryy was not for this ...that sorry was for that..know u understand" now she was looking more confuse n shook her head in denial that she was not understanding anything. Jalal looked at her with puppy face "nhi samajh aaya?? (taking a breath) actually jo pahle meine sorry bola who sorry uske liye nhi that jo tumne socha balike uske liye that jo meine kiya tha...par jo bada wala sorry that who uske liye that jo tumne soch aur uske liye nhi jo meine kiya..ab tum samjhe na mein kya kah raha ki jo pahle wala sorry.."

Jodha "wait wait wait...yeh tum kya bol rahe ho jo sorry pahle baad mein...yum kahna kya chahte ho ?"

Jalal "(with clue less expression)pata nhi"

Jodha "what? Tum 11:30 raat mein mere room balcony se ander aate ho aur bolte ho tumhe kuch kahna hai aur jab mein tumse puchti hun ki kya kahna hai toh bolte ho pata nhi!!" she looks at him in disbelief with her hand on her waist.

Jalal "nhi nhi mujhe sach mein kuch kahna hai.." before he can finish she comes near him n starts sniffing "are u drunk?" she asked him "NO!" he answered her

Jodha "don't lie to me" she looked at him with suspicious eyes.

Jalal "stop looking at me like that u know that I don't drink"

Jodha "ohh really!! Use tarah jaise mein yeh janti thi kit um mujhe kabhi nhi kar sakte bolo" she said with the pain in her voice

Jalal "nhi..jo..." she cut him "tum kyun aye ho yaha ab jalal? Yeh dekhne ki ab kaise wapse se mujhe rulo..?" he came towards her n tried to hold her hand bt she moved toward her bedding . "or came here to see if m suffering or not bolo?" jalal moved his face to see her face bt her back was toward him "nhi mein..toh.." she again cutted him "tum toh kabhi mera chra hii nhi dekhna chate the na toh phir kyun ayeho yaha??" "haan par tab mujhe.." before he can complete she turned n came near him "aur waise bhi mein toh aise ladki hoon jo ladko ke saath raatein.." "BAAS! BAHUT BOL CHUKI AB EK DAM CHUP" he said this with a dangerous voice mix with anger . bt even dat didn't made jodha to stop "kyun? Kyun? Chup rahun mein akhir tumhi toh the who jisne yeh sab kaha tha toh aaja kya ho gya? Ohh now I know pahle tum jo bolte the mein chupchap suleti thi aur aaj jab mein tumhe ulta jwab de rhi hun toh tumhara male ego hurt ho raha hai huh"

Jalal's ager was raising with her every word but he was trying to control it but her last sentence broke all his tolerance level. He put his hand on her mouth ,grabbed her from her waist n caged her between him n wall.

She looked angrily in his eyes n saw hurt, pain n guilt in his eyes she can also see something sparkling in the corner of eyes n thought was he crying?

"mein na yaha tumhe rulane ayah un na hi tumhe hurt karne ayah un jodha...mein...mein toh sirf yaha tumse maffi mangene aya hun...maffi meri jodha ke aakho se nikle un har aason ke liye jo uske jalal ne dye hai...maffi meri jodha ko dard den eke liye...maffi meri jodha se kiye wado ko todne ke liye...maffi tumse dur jane ke bare mein soch ke liye..jodha...mujhe..mujhe pata hai ki mein chahey kitni bhi mafi manng lun who kam hii padenge kyuki jo meine kiya who mafi ke kabil nhi hai ... (removing his hand from her mouth) par mein tab tak who har ek cheez karunga jab tak tumhara dil mujhe maaf karne ko tyaara na ho jaye...mein tab tak koshish karta rahunga..."

Jodha can see the determination in his eyes n she can see that he was telling the truth bt her wounds were still green they are filled not even a bit she can still remember how mercilessly he broke her n her heart in million of piece not just for once bt for every single time in these past 3 monts.

Jodha "kyun?? All of sudden tumhe mujhe par itne mahrban kyun ho gye jalal ...ab kya irada hai tumhara???...ab kya meri jaan le kar hii manoge tum meri??"

Jalal "shh..mein tumpe koi mehrbani nhi kar raha...apni kiye hue gunaha ka pachtava kar raha hun ...kyuki mujhe samjh aagya hai ki jodha ke bgair jalal ki koi duniya hii nhi...jodha hai toh jalal hai...tum mera pyaar hii nhi ruh bhi hoo"

Jodha knew what he'll say next but she was not ready to hear it n she cant forgive him not now not ever so she freed herself from his grip n n tried to move away bt again he caught her hand n pulled her near him "I LOVE U JODHA" n here he said it .

Jodha's heart skiped a bit as she heard it n there was just for a sec that same love in her eyes for him which jalal did noticed. Till now jalal was not sure if she'll ever forgive him or not bt after seeing love in her eyes even if it was for just a sec he was sure that soon enough they will be together again all he has to do was to wait n make amends.

Jodha got hold of her emotions n pushed him away "BUT I DON'T LOVE U ANYMORE N NOR I'LL THE SAME MISTAKE OF FALLING IN LOVE WITH A MONSTER LIKE U DO U GET THAT?" she almost shouted those words to which he smiled n moved towards her "lier.." he said n took another step toward her n again came in front of her n said "u r lying" jodha looked into at him n said "I don't lie about my emotions like u" she taunted him. His smile widen "bt this time u r lying jo" saying that he leaned onto her "tum abhi mujhse naraz ho bt u still love me I cn see it ur eyes"

Jodha puch him away with a jerk "then get ur eyes checked...nw just leave"

Jalal "tum bhi janti ho jodha ki sach kya hai aur ek din tum maan bhi jaogi.." he winked at her n turned to leave whe suddenly something came in his mind . jodha sighed as he turned to leave bt suddenly he turns back came near her n gave a kiss on her cheeks n said "gud night love" . It happened so fast that she was not able to even react at first n when finally when she came back to reality he was long gone.

Precap :- collage trip...

DONT FORGET TO LIKE AND COMMENT😉

Edited by oshinchaudhary - 11 years ago

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Gayatri

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Posted: 11 years ago

#356

unres!

edit!

comment for chap 11, 12 n 13!

heya!

first of all a big wala sorry for being this late 😭 maafi dedo meko! 😒

then a big wala *jhappi* n thank u for dedicationg chappy 12 to me! 🤗 ❤️

and the biggg *jhapppi* for making Jalal know truth!

am so relived! 😊

and the pain of Jalal 😭 u wrote it so beautifully! ❤️ i could feel and visualise it 👏

and this surya, ruqqu n her helper 😡 who is this unknown guy.. show him on light soon! and now wat r they planning to do! hope all their plans fail and jalal comes to know about ruqu 😡

pls bring in a heronie for abdul..pls pls plsss kepp him goood itself n for such a good person dont take away his love! bring a new lady love for him..who he will feel is made for him 😉

and wer is this cousin of jo who is reason behind mirza's death? 😡 poor mirza 😭 this cousin needs to get confronted with jallu! he will give her black n blue 😈

i will point out a typing error? nothing to criticise in ua work so thot of pointing this out 😆

"He blushed thinking about him" this is 'she' na? 😛

beautiful updates!!!

update chap 14 sooon!! am waiting! 😉

and i will be on time to comment! 😛

Edited by ..dreamygatz.. - 11 years ago

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harshita singh

@oshinchaudhary

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Posted: 11 years ago

#357

HI EVERYONE FINALLY UR WAIT IS OVER...
I WANT TO DEDICATE THIS CHAPTER TO ANUSHKA THANK U SO MUCH DEAR FOR UR HELP

Chapter 15

As the sun rose up making the mark of a new day n journey delhiites got busy with their usual work n chores. There was lots of noise on the road of horns as all the people were on their way to office, school or college n they all r in rush with no zero level of tolerance. Then there was all rush in the metros too. Near Janakpri west an auto driver was arguing with a lady who is not ready to give 20 buck for her ride from uttam nagar east to janakpuri west. Then near the jhandewala metro station a crowd has gather n was looking at the scenario of the road accident which took place sometime before some were calling for ambulance n dialing no 100 to get help. Then as we go ahead n enter CP n as red light appears n car ,buses ,autos ,bikes stops some people with poor faces came running towards the vehicle some were selling roses, some were selling toys, some had lemon n chilly poured in a thread n asking to it in their cars to protect their car from accident n buri nazar. Then there were small childrens n handicapped people asking for money in the name of god.

There was so much going in the city of dilwaale but there is a person who rite now didn't care about anything in the world except her last few min of her precious morning sleep. She was half awake bt she showed no interest in waking up. She has no mood of going to college, she didn't want to leave her cool n comfortable room n go out in fire spitting hot summer of Delhi. She missed the cool n chilled environment of her shimla.

She was again drifting to sleep slowly when her alarm went on "arrrh...stupid alarm" she cursed it n moved to the other side of the bed to n closed it. N again went back to sleep when her phone started ringing surely luck was not on her side today. She tried to ignore it bt it doesn't seem to stop ringing much to her irritation. With jerk she sat on her bed n started looking for her phone muttering "why on earth everyone is so keen to disturb her sweet sleep" finally she found her phone n picked it up without looking at the no.

"hello"

Caller "jo ur voice is sounding like u r still sleeping?"

Jodha "becoz I m salima n u r not letting me enjoy my sleep" saying this she again lied back on her bed

Salima "what the hell jo ...tum bhul gyi ki aaj cultural team ki meeting hai vice principal ke saath befor collage start?" listenting to this jodha shot back n sat on her bed.

Jodha "hell"

Salima "yes hell...meeting is around 8 o'clock n its 7 now...so hurry up"

Jodha "ya ya byee see u later luv u" with that she got up from her bed throwing her phone on bed. All her sleep n laziness was long gone. Grabbing her towel she straight away went toward the bathroom.

"yeh sab use jalal ki wajhse hua hai na who kal raat aata aur na who saari baatein bolta aur na mein uske bare mein sochti rhti puri raat aur na subh late uthti" she said n cursed jalal for making her late.

After some time she came out of the bathroom in her bathing robe n went straight towards her wardrobe n looked from one dress to another "god!!ek toh mein already late hun aur ab yeh dress ki tension...hmmm wat should I wear" she was looking from up to down left to right to find the right dress for today when her eyes caught the white dress she took it n changed into it. Then she moved in front of mirror combed her hair made puff n tied rest of the hair in high pony tail..wore a watch in her wrist...pink lipglose..a khol..n there she was all ready. She looked at the time it was 7:40 now so she grabbed her bag n phone from the bed an ran outside.

As she came down she saw her uncle sameer siting on the dining table n having his breakfast she ran towards him hugged him from back "good morning uncle"

Mr sameer "gud morning my princess.come hv breakfast" he said

Jodha "no uncle there is meeting of cultural team with the VP m already late so m going I'll something to eat on my way to college" she protested mr sameer was about to say something when the guy sitting beside him spoke

Guy "ohh its only 7:43 jo n collage is only 15 min away from ur home n besides meeting timings has been changed from 8 to 8:30 so u hv time" jodha was shocked to see the guy who was none other then JALAL. She looked at him in confusion n he looked toward him with a smirk.

Jodha "TUM?? What r u doing here?" she asked much loudly then she intended to "matabl itni subh subh tum yaha kya kar rahe ho J A L A L?"

Jalal "woh I was to collage n ur home come in between so thought to pick u up? Aur even uncle ko bhi koi problem nhi hai ...(looking towards mr sameer) kyun uncle?"

Mr sameer "why would I hv any problem in it "

Jalal "see" n he winked at her .

Jodha "NOWAY M NOT GOING ANYWHERE WIH U" she almost shouted

Mr sameer "kya hua a beta koi problem hai kya?" he asked with confusion

Jodha "no uncle ...I meant ki (smiling looking toward jalal) mere khud collage ja sakti hun"

Mr sameer "I know beta par jab jalal tuhe lene aa hi gya hai toh it would be rude to not go with him rite!! " jalal gave 100 watt smile to her listening to her uncle

Jodha "(thinking)jitna hasna hai abhi haslo ..tumhe toh mein baad mein dekhti hun..(to mr sameer) as u say uncle"

Jalal "great!!"

They started their breakfast jodha was giving death glares to jalal n he was just enjoying everything. Soon they finished their breakfast.

Jalal "(geeting up) I m waiting for u in my car so hurry up k...(turning towards mr sameer) ok see u soon uncle n thank u for the breakfast"

Mr sameer "oh don't be formal isse apna hii ghar samjho"

Jalal "(thinking) who toh mein samjhta hi hun akhir mera future in laws ka ghar hai..(to mr sameer)ji uncle" with that hii went out. As he went out jodha sighed n took a glass of water n sarted drinking it when mr sameer said

Mr sameer "I think he likes u jodha..." jodha almost threw the water

Jodha "its ..its..nothing like tha..that"

Mr sameer "oh common bhai hum bhi kisi zabane mein jawan hote the...aur aapki chahi ke ghar unhi unhe pick or drop karne ke bahne unhe dekhne jate the ...aur aaj sochte hai ki kun jate hai"

Jodha laughed hearing that n mr sameer also joined her in her laughter.

Jodha "uncle app bhi na"

Mr sameer "waise mujhe toh yeh ladka bahut pasand hai..tumhara kya khayal hai?" he asked taking a sip from his glass. Suddenly jodha faced turned all red due to embarrassment.

Jodha "who...mein..woh.." she didn't know what exactly she should say she was fumbling with words when she heard sound of horn she thanked god for jalal's timing "who mujhe der ho rahi hai aur jalal bhi wait kar raha hai toh mein jati hun bye.."

Saying that she literally ran out of the house. Mr sameer laughed seeing her rxn .

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Ch 16 - https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/jodha-akbar/3979327/ss-betrayed-ch-1-21-thread-closed?pn=77

Edited by oshinchaudhary - 10 years ago