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If ur writing wasn't so fantastic i would've complained about u killing paro off and getting rudra and laila hitched. But this too good - well done ;) :)
omg this is what is called ...tables turned ! amazingly written ! reading this was important for me since it helped me sympathize with laila, something that had eroded with the way her characterization has turned out !
Nice! Paro is Laila and Laila is Paro as I understand it. The emotions come through very well
Originally posted by: angelzaib
do u kno u r fast becoming my most favorite person???
well done gal...great OS...parvati n laila's role reversal was a refreshing change...but tell me something...i am a bit confused...in da second last paragraph...u say khushi reached for da gun?did i mis something there? but as i said, great OS...thnx 4 pm
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