Oh what a tortured soul! Loved how you portrayed his misery and how he remembered each and every single time,he hurt her and how she stayed with him throughout it all. I don't feel good with the ending of the chapter as I hope this foolish foolish man has learned his lesson and will stop making decision for her. Hope he talks to Kushi, explains everything to her and together decide what they want to do. She deserves as much!
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No! He shouldn't leave! She needs him now more than ever! Even if he does leave will Khushi go after him now that he went after her in part 1? I can't wait to read more!
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