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arsneh

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Posted: 11 years ago

#831

Originally posted by: LOLWAsAalu
Missed VS!!😒

where is she?

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arsneh

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Posted: 11 years ago

#832

Originally posted by: Viji79
Good morning

very good morning 🤗

Edited by arsneh - 11 years ago

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aquagal

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Posted: 11 years ago

#833

Originally posted by: vandana.sagar

For Lolwa

A new beginning they were starting slowly
Celebrating the rituals & all the ceremonies
But with a twist he suggested so teasingly
Making her anxious and nervous obviously
Starting with a suhaag raat he smirked slyly
In reverse they would complete their shaadi
Arrangements with care he made personally
Decorations, her clothes he planned secretly
An ambience he created for her romantically
His bride she was apprehensive and uneasy

Delaying tactics she adopted very naturally
To consummate the wedding & the morality
And circumstances that had led to their unity
Causing her uncertainty in her heart intensely
Sensitive to her, he wanted her willing to be
And I imagine stopped himself with difficulty
Her thoughts she expressed to him verbally
Shocked & hurt and feeling betrayed slightly
They were a couple & their marriage a reality
He had accepted her but she had not clearly

Frustrated, he took a decision so aggressively
Anger & fury contributed to his actions hasty
Around the fire, circles they would take finally
Rituals more important than emotions really ?
Her protests & advice he ignored intentionally
In his life as his wife he just wanted her to be
And to put an end to this drama arrived Dadi
A witness to their conversation unfortunately
Incomplete again leaving the wedding abruptly
And an iconic moment left us content & happy

An 'I love you dammit' we heard unexpectedly
Shocking not only us but also a smiling khushi
Leaving her with these words echoing, lonely
The next morning gathered the entire family
Dadi had even invited an unsuspecting buaji
Revealing the details and truth very spitefully
Insulting poor Khushi calling her names dirty
Khushi listening to all the accusations silently
Buaji feeling shame raised her hand angrily
To be suddenly stopped & on time thankfully

By Arnav who caught her hand so forcefully
Permission to touch her he had given nobody
Saying this he tried to explain to everybody
Khushi was not to be blamed and not guilty
The marriage was real he said with authority
This time Di & nani opposed him vehemently
Customs & rituals couldn't be ignored blatantly
And Khushi must leave him & go immediately
Panic struck Arnav decided they would remarry
In his love and him she trusted unconditionally

He would make everything work out perfectly
But till they wed they had to live separately
He would come & claim her this time properly
For her hand he would request in matrimony
Smiling were both at his solution contentedly
Humbhi apse I love you dammit she said coyly
Leaving him smiling with love & much 'khushi'
And preparations started the family excitedly
Shagun and gifts for the blushing bride to be
In all of this one person stood aside unhappy

Her plan unsuccessful had failed miserably
Cementing their love forever & permanently
Instead of the humiliation she planned evilly
But she was would not give up, not so easily
& to create trouble she went alone, cunningly
Harsh words she lashed out at her accusingly
And insulted the entire Gupta family wrongly
Leaving them with no other choice literally
But to call of this entire marriage with dignity
The Raizada's house full of joy and positivity

Unaware of this development was the family
Her wicked intentions taking shape gradually
Changing the air in both houses simultaneously
Leaving confused and wondering everybody
A loyal Khushi defending her love, her Arnav ji
In him and in them she had faith undoubtedly
An irate Garima could no longer hide her fury
This whole relationship bothered her suddenly
The presence of dadi brought back memories
Keys to her forgotten past possessed this lady

If revealed would destroy them automatically
Annoyed with herself and with her fear mostly
She raised her hands on her Khushi helplessly
To her room banished her crying desperately
And felt regret & remorse almost immediately
When to the house strode in Arnav forcefully
Demanding to meet his wife not asking really
Leaving standing a shocked Garima and buaji
His intent evident by the language of his body
To the room he went to see his bride to be

Running into his arms embracing him tightly
Seeing him she was comforted reassuringly
On her face a redness he spied suspiciously
So from his gaze she turned away abruptly
The telltale marks suddenly caused her worry
He was outraged & furious at this indignity
Rituals taking prominence & driving all crazy
His temper flared & would show no mercy
The culprit he demanded to know insistently
Seeing his Khushi suffer silent and unjustly
For his actions she now was paying innocently

Repenting & causing her pain he felt very sorry
His eyes reflected his guilt with utmost sincerity
With love wrapped her in his arms possessively
Promising to himself to keep her safe protectively
No harm to her whether physically or emotionally
Her safety he would make his top most priority
To protect her to confront Amma he was ready
But was stopped, a daughter dutiful was she
As a mother had the right she expressed loyally
Causing Arnav for her sacrifice to get angry

& leave before he lost his temper completely
Warning them for the ceremony to be ready
For the Raizada clan would arrive punctually
With Shagun and carry out the first ceremony
Leaving them silenced with his tone & certainty
A wedding she deserved with respect entirely
To have her back he was indeed in a big hurry
And this time they would stay united till eternity
Every obstacle he would cross & do so willingly
They would be together ...it was their destiny

Take a bow my AKV and a tight jhappi !!!! 🤗
This is so beautiful. From that suhagraat to him leaving her in Gupta house - everything in a perfect sequence and perfect emotions. You have expressed it so deeply and clearly; I could remember it scene by scene, emotion by emotion. That's why I tell you that you can create your own version of poetic IPKKND, you're too good at it. Muaahh!!!!