Kisha & Rahi FF *who's there?*part-4 pg11 - Page 3

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: MyLifeMyRulz

Stavan 😲 😲
how can u handle 3 FF? Hats off 👏 ⭐️
and waiting eagerly
after reading the cs and introduction
loved the concept
plz continue soon

thanks a lot
i will try my best to handle all 3 ff thanks
i am glad u liked the concept
i will cont soon
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: KDreamer

Wow stavan...

Kya character sketch hai...
The diva...
The mastermind...
The cute n bubbly girl...
The rockstar...
Awesome hai...
Aise ideas aate kaha se hai ...
U r a fab writer...
U hav ideas ka pitara...
Waiting for d update...

thanks a lot shatz
i am glad u like cs
thanks for appreciating
kya karun vacation ka aide effects aise ideas😆
will update soon
 
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: luv_u_Bharti

Yippie 1 more ff...
Amazing Character Sketch yaar... & d backdrop too 😉
Plzzz Continue Soon

thanks a lot khushi
i am glad u like cs and prologue
will cont soon😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
I just loved the character sketch!
It was so true!
Uh portrayed it beautifully!
Keep writing ! 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
PART-1
 
(SOME PRIVATE ISLAND ,MALDIVES)
There was a big resort with royal interior. The suites were as if it is some king's room . The lobby was carpeted and it is pesian carpet . There were big antic lights in resort . The office of the owner of resort is also huge and royal . There was darkness in his office . He was with his assistant . He started projecter and it showed several pics of Kisha and Rahi .
the owner: yeh kiddos humara next target hain . You know what to do to get them here . Right??
assistant: yes sir . Don't worry . I just need a month .
the owner : okay . Get back to work .
 
(IN MUMBAI)
There is a small apartment . It onebedroom ,bathroom .There is one bed in bedroom and in living room there is sofa cum bed . The girls were sleeping in bedroom and guys in living room . The alarm was ringing from past 45 min . Kd woke up and saw the time it was 8 .
Kd(with sleepy eyes): okay abhi toh sirf 8 baje hain . Let me get some more sleep .
As he was about to lie down he realized something and spoke loudly: what 8 bajgaye . We are so damn late once again .
Kd(shouted): guys wake up we are late for clg .
Rv(with closed eyes): abey Kd so ja aaj Sunday hain . Sleep and let others sleep.
From bedroom kiya shouted : Kd stop making noise .
Panchi: kiya its okay chal so ja ..
Both went to sleep .
Kd: sorry everyone (murmured) ab mujhe toh neend ane se rahi aur yeh teeno kumbhkaran uthenge nahi . Aur kiya ko galti se bhi uthaya na toh omlete ki jagah mujhe toast ke sath kha jayegi my chicklet .
As he was thinking this he heard Ranveer's snooring .
Kd(thaught): is Ranveer ko itni jaldi neend kaise aa jati hain .
Kd went to kitchen and started making breakfast for everyone . Kd is good cook among them or can say the only one who can cook something edible . It was now 9:30 and Kd decided to wake up every one. He went to bedroom
Kd: panchi ,kiya breakfast is ready wake up ..
Panchi woke up and said : good morning kd
Kd: good morning .
saying this panchi went in washroom for brushing ..
But kiya she just pulled blanket over her head . Kd saw that and pulled blanket and said : kiya wake up ..
Kiya again pulled blanket and murmured: Kd go na sone do mujhe .
Kd went near her ear and murmured : good morning shona . And kissed her cheek . Kiya gave a sweet smile and opened her eyes . Than she woke up and Kd gave peck on other cheek. Panchi at that time only came out of washroom and saw that .
she whistled and said : guys subah subah hi shuru ho gaye dono . Hearing this kd and kiya got away .
Kd: shut up panchi kuch bhi. Acha ab main tumhare nonu ko uthata hun .
Kiya threw pillow at panchi . And in sometime both started pillow fighting . Kd seeing all these murmured : yeh dono toh bohot zyaada violent hain . Shaadi ke baad definetly mujhe aur Ranveer par domestic violence hone wala hain ..
Panchi and kiya : kd kya kaha tumne ..
Kd: kuch nahi kuch bhi toh nahi . U continue ..
He escaped from there and started most difficult task that is to wake up Ranveer .
Ranveer suddenly cathched Kd 's hand and started caresaing it and said with closed eyes: moti good morning . I luv u ..
he was about to kiss kd's hand . Kd jerked his hand away and hit Ranveer and said : abey saale main kd hun idiot . Get up.
Hearing this Ranveer got up with jerk and said : sorry dude. Par tu kya mujh par chance maar raha tha .
Kd : oye kiya meri gf hain aur main uske sath bihot khush hun .itne bhi bure din nahi aye mere ki tujh par chance maru .
Kiyan saw all these and were laughing . They said : u guys are cheating on us ..
Kd and Rv got away from eachother and said : wat no ways ..
Than finally all four if them got ready and had breakfast .
 
so guys here is part-1 . I hope thik ho. So plzz tell me hows dis??
 
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: tinaswea

I just loved the character sketch!

It was so true!
Uh portrayed it beautifully!
Keep writing ! 😊

thanks a lot tina
i am glad u like cs
thanks for appreciating😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
Stavan mere bhai...isko dhik nahi...awesome bolte hai...
Perfect balance of romance ,comedy,friendship,suspense...
It was in one wrd "PERFECT"
Loved it...
Loved.it...
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Posted: 10 years ago
Another wonderful OS from ew !
Loved it! 😊
Uh are an amazing writer! I am short of words! It was just perfect! 
Keep writing and entertaining us!😛
Tina
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Posted: 10 years ago
Stavan brilliant start...
M still laughing trust me..
All the buddies together sharing a room wow...
N Panchi Kiya leg pulling Nonu Kd...fun read...
KD n RV were soo cute...aweee
Loved it yaa...
 
Waiting anxiously for the next
Thanks for this...
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Posted: 10 years ago
STAVAN I AM GOING CRAZY

BlockBuster dhamakedar FF  entry...mujhe words nahi mil rahe hai...kya FF hai yaar...

I wish Rahi aur Kisha ka ek New serial aaye bilkul is FF ki tarah, we should mail it to CV's...itne zyada TRP milenge na...ki CV's pagal ho jayenge...

i loved every bit of it - Kisha morning romance 😳 dying to see that in real
Ransh per domestic violence shadi ke baad was hilarious🤣 
Ransh - Bromance
Kiyan - Bond

Loved it yaar stavan, sachi aaj dil Khush ho gaya mera...