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Arnav controls himself when Khushi is all over HIM!!!!!!!!!!!!!
She now dresses in his favourite colour and he gets carried away...
What next??????????
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Arnav controls himself when Khushi is all over HIM!!!!!!!!!!!!!
She now dresses in his favourite colour and he gets carried away...
What next??????????


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Chapter 4

Khushi's black silky locks were open & some loose strands fell over her cheeks & swayed with the gust of wind coming through the window.Arnav had not diverted his gaze away from her for even a second.He raised his arm & shrugged the cloud of her hair off her beautiful face with his palm.She closed her eyes in anticipation.The red color on her was having inexplicable effect on him.He seemed to have lost control over himself.His other hand rose as if having brain of itself & he brushed his thumb right next to her lips.He cupped his face with his strong big palms & Khushi shuddered.Arnav gulped down visible when he saw her trembling lips & closed eyes.Incidents from last night flashed in front of his vision & the torture she has caused him unknowingly.


Arnav bent down towards her lips slowly as if in trance.He felt like there was no control over whatever he was doing.His lips were centimeters apart from her.His gaze was fixed on her trembling lips.It was point of no return.Khushi felt as if her whole existence was dependent on him.Her knees were giving away.She was literally burning with untamed & newly introduced desires.She had never felt something like this before.She was beyond thinking of right or wrong.She just surrendered herself in the flow of moment.There was no logical justification to her behavior.


Arnav's condition wasn't different either.His senses were shut down completely.His eyes were concentrated on Khushi's parted inviting lips.He stopped just couple of centimeters away from her lips & looked at her face for any sign of protest.He saw her flushed cheeks,closed eyes & trembling lips.He felt the strong vibes of desire & anticipation.He decided to give in to the need of current situation.He inhaled her intoxicating smell deeply & filled the distance between their lips to seal it in to a kiss.Both felt like they had touched some barb live wire.The kiss was gentle when it started & turned wild & demanding by each passing second.Arnav did all that to show her how badly he wanted that kiss.Khushi showed her eagerness & her need in her own fierce way.She wanted to show her dominance in the intense game of making out.They challenged & teased each other to win the battle through that one kiss & check mate each other.Neither was ready to give up.Neither was ready to accept defeat.They both discovered secrets of each other out of their first kiss.Tenderness,intensity,wildness.There was everything in it.A much needed kiss for him & a new found desirous one for her.


Finally after 10 minutes they parted & left each other when their lungs gave up in the need of Oxygen.They were breathless,shocked & surprised.Arnav looked down at Khushi.She was feisty & was absolutely perfect match to him.She didn't back down at any step while they were kissing senselessly.Instead she matched his each advance & move.It turned out much better than his imagination.Khushi was shocked on her own response to him.First he held her captive with those molten pools of chocolate orbs & then made her surrender to him by his assault on her senses with that hot kiss.He was terrifically awesome kisser in her opinion.He might turn out an amazing lover too.Her eyes shot wide open in shock due to her own wayward thoughts & she scolded herself mentally for thinking that & loosing control over herself.

He had evoked something undeniable in her.She didn't know before about the existence of all these emotions which she was experiencing right now.It was all new to her yet she was liking it.She observed Arnav & found him devilishly handsome,hot & irresistible.There was something magnetic about him.She felt a rush of weird hormones in herself which were inactive all these days.


Arnav's tension from last night had released a little bit after that kiss but her felt like having her more & further.Last night she was intoxicated & right now he was feeling intoxicated after he seeped in her aroma & her sweetness through her lips.He felt light headed as if being drugged by her beauty.He even feared that she might turn into his addiction.She was Innocent.She was Intriguing.She was Intoxicating.She had the power to make him go on his knees.Her eyes possessed the power to drown him in them.He kept looking in to her clear doe eyes.She reciprocated him with unblinking eyes.Khushi diverted her gaze after some time when she felt it difficult to keep it up with his burning gaze.All this was too heavy duty for her.Her cheeks burnt due to extreme blush & she ran past him& out of the room due to shyness.Arnav slowly turned after left & there was a devilish lopsided smile on his face.


Arnav went downstairs after some time to look for Khushi but couldn't find her.He searched all the rooms in panic but there was no sign of her.Then he heard some sounds coming out of kitchen & went there.Khushi was mixing something in a big vessel with spatula & muttering inaudible things to herself.Arnav halted at the door of kitchen & leaned against it with amused expressions on his face.He wanted to know what she was going to do but also didn't want to disturb her.Khushi on the other hand was preparing batter for Jalebis,her favorite sweet.Which she used to make every now & then when she was nervous or confused.Her self banter was all about whatever happened from last night till her kiss with Arnav.She was scolding herself for a lot of things & asking for answers from her beloved deity Devi Maiyya.She was also wondering about her suddenly increased heart beats & was worried too.What if there was some heart problem.But she was too young to be a heart patient & then she thought that there was no restriction of age for diseases nowadays & her worry increased further.She was completely oblivious to Arnav's presence when she started making Jalebis.khushi carved a Jalebi in to boiling oil in pan while muttering to herself.

Arnav stood right behind Khushi without letting her know.Her rambling & Jalebi making was going on simultaneously & that was the reason she didn't notice him so close to her.He looked in to pan from above her shoulder & smirked when he saw Jalebi in it.Khushi got startled when she sensed someone behind her.Arnav bent towards her & raised his index finger & pointed it towards frying pan.Khushi looked in to pan & a surprised gasp escaped her lips.There was a Jalebi out of Arnav's name in pan's boiling oil.She hurriedly took it out of oil & dipped it in to sugar syrup & kept a lid on it as if hiding it from Arnav.She refused to look at him.Her heart beat sky rocketed again due to his close proximity.His masculine fragrance started making her dizzy.

"Were you thinking about me?" Arnav asked her teasingly.

"Hum...Nahi toh.Why would I think about you?" She mumbled & looked here & there nervously.

"Toh phir mere naam ki Jalebi kyun banayi?"

"Wo...hum...wo...I think I should go.My family would be waiting for me.Thank you for whatever you did for me last night." Khushi said hurriedly without looking at him while fidgeting with the Pallu of red saree she was wearing.

"You didn't answer my question." Arnav said in his husky voice ignoring what she said just now.

"I don't know Okay." Khushi said in frustration.First she was nervous & second his closeness wasn't helping her much. "I don't know why I did that.I don't know the reason behind my raised heartbeats.I don't know why I'm having all those weird feeling.I don't know what type of emotions are these.I don't know why I felt like home & found solace when you held me in your arms & kissed me like that was the most natural thing in world.Happy now?Ab aap khush hain or do you want me to explain further?" She blurted out in frustration & looked at him.He stood staring back at her with disbelief in his eyes.He actually didn't expected it from her.He had intended to just tease her & in response she confessed that she was affected too as much he was.

"Khushi...I...I didn't mean to..." Arnav Singh Raizada & stammering.Impossible & awkward much but he couldn't find right words at that moment.

"Forget it Mr. Arnav Singh Raizada.Waise bhi aapko kya farak padta hai ki hum kya sochte hain." Khushi said with hurt in her voice.

"Farak padta hai dammit kyunki..." And Arnav couldn't complete his sentence because he was confused himself.What exactly could he name his feelings for her when he himself was not sure of them.Besides just a few hours ago he didn't even know her.It was too fast.He hated relationships other than his family.He loathed commitment in such relations.He had nothing to give in return to her feelings for him.

"Kyun farak padta hai?Tell me." Khushi insisted on answer.

"Tumhare har sawal ka jawab dena main zaroori nahi samajhta." Arnav put his hard demeanor back & said as coldly as he could.Not letting away even a single glimpse of the turmoil erupted inside him.His eyes were cold & unreadable.

"Fine.Very well.Then good bye Mr. ASR" Khushi said bitterly & walked out of kitchen.

"Wait.I'll drop you to your house."

"No thank you.Don't bother.I'm capable of doing that myself." Khushi turned & snapped at him & made her way upstairs to collect her belongings.

Arnav kept looking at her retreating back & wondered when & how things went wrong.He realized soon enough that it was his stupidity but there was no use of thinking back.The moment was there & he had already lost it because of his stubbornness.She had opened her heart in front of him & he couldn't even cherish that feeling for long.She was leaving & he stood helplessly on the spot.Her images from last night flashed in front of his vision & Arnav decided something & went out of the kitchen with determination written all over his face.

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As you can see this didn't end here.There will be one more chapter to it.
I had wrote this story 4 months ago & now as I read it & updated it,I felt like amending it's end.
So we will have it as 5 shot now.Last chapter needs to be written.
Till then I read & love all the comments by you lovely guys.

Rabba Ve.☺️

Ignore typos & mistakes please.😳

Edited by _BarunS_Addict_ - 11 years ago
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Amazing. Looking forward to last part.

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