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Posted: 11 years ago
Wow.what a great update. U just made my day. The whole story is so interesting. Coming to the part..the replying gesture was super sweet and sanyukta's dressing part and all those flashbacks were quite interesting and sanyukta in drunk mode was funny. Waiting eagerly for the next part. Want to know what randhir will do. Update soon...
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Posted: 11 years ago

Yep I am back! Hope everyone is doing great at their end 😃

Happy Readings guys! It will have some errors, as I have written this in about an hr 🤓... this has to be my record... Three updates in two days 😆

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Part 8!

The morning rays of the sun hit Sanyukta's face through the velvet curtains, making her softly moan in her sleep... Sanyukta had the most innocent little smile on her face; she had not slept so peacefully in such a long time! She felt relaxed and satisfied! Like all her problems had just magically dissolved in to thin air!


Itni sacchi sleep aa rahi thi! Why does it have to be morning sooo quickly? A few more minutes... Thought Sanyukta as she tossed around in the soft bed, trying to find some shade on her face... Randhir had just come out of the shower and had seen Sanyukta tossing and turning in his bed, trying to escape the morning rays...


Randhir smiled at her innocent actions and went up to close the curtains fully... Just as he was about to leave, Sanyukta opened her eyes and still in her sleep, gave Randhir a small smile and said Good Morning'


Just as she was about to turn to her side, Sanyukta froze as she saw a shirtless Randhir standing over her and her sleeping in an unknown bed... Suddenly, her head was feeling a whole lot heavier.


Fire burning in her eyes and blood, Sanyukta got up and just looked at Randhir with despise... She loathed his site! She knew that Randhir had always wanted to satisfy his ego, but she never knew he could fall this low! Why am I even surprised at his cheap act?


"What do you think of yourself Randhir! That you can just have your way with me?!?! I had just come to that stupid dinner for the sake of our business deal! And look what you have done!?!? What did you mix in my food, Randhir? What have you done this time?!?! What have I done to you, to deserve this animalistic behaviour from you!!?" bellowed Sanyukta, spiting rage from her eyes!


Before Randhir could clarify himself, Sanyukta continued with her accusations... "You know I used to think you were just an egoistic, male chauvinist! But when we were together, I had convinced myself that my first impression of you was completely wrong... I thought you are a still a sensitive human being underneath that entire facade... How wrong was I?? You are one of the most f*cking despicable people I have ever met in my life... You left me stranded on our wedding day ten years ago and now this!!! How could you even do this?! Are you not even human?"


"Have you not had enough fun tormenting with my life that you are back again to play games with me!!" shouted Sanyukta, while pushing Randhir with all her might... Today, she just wanted to give Randhir a piece of her mind! She has had enough with him... Her tears were long gone and now she knew that he wasn't worth shedding her precious tears...


Just as Sanyukta was about to continue her rant, Randhir stopped her by pushing and trapping her between the wall and himself... He had had enough of her constant allegations and now it was time to clear the air... Does she think that low of me? Questioned Randhir...


"Enough is enough Sanyukta! I know I have wronged you in the past, but I not here to play any more games with you! I am here to pacify you! I am here to right my wrongs! I know I have hurt you immensely in the past, but trust me I would never force myself on to you!"


"I know it is hard for you to even listen to me, let alone trust me... But please try to! I would never ever force myself on anyone and deep down even you know that!" said a surprisingly sincere and calm Randhir...


He is innocent Sanyukta... Even though he has not had the best record with you, his moistened eyes tell you the truth... Maybe I have pushed the thin line a little too far this time around...


Calming down at Randhir's confession, Sanyukta asked him why he brought her here and then it hit her and she exclaimed out aloud, "That Pina Colada!"


She slapped her head and closed her eyes, realising that her screaming had not helped her heavy head at all and she slumped on the bed...


Knowing that this would have happened, Randhir had already kept some Panadol with a glass of water on his bed-side and quickly offered it to Sanyukta, who just took it without any acknowledgment.


Watching Sanyukta drink her glass of water and then another, Randhir had gone to change his clothes in the adjacent room, by then Sanyukta had already left...


Don't think this incident will mellow me Randhir! You are still that same as*hole that wrecked my life at one stage... thought Sanyukta as she grabbed her purse and phone and rushed out of his illustrious hotel...


As Randhir came out, he searched for Sanyukta and was not surprised that she had fled without a sign... He just smirked and went to have his breakfast...


As Sanyukta reached home, she had a long shower to calm herself down following the events that had occurred today... And then she remembered he had said that he was here to "right his wrongs"... Now that Sanyukta knew Randhir's ulterior motive for being in Australia, she knew what she exactly had to do...


"Mr Shekwat, be ready for your first ever failure in life!" said Sanyukta while gritting her teeth... Just then her phone rang... It was Parth and he told her that dinner was at their place... Just before Sanyukta could argue, Parth had already cut the call...


Yeh Parth bhi nah! Let me just get ready... I will help Vidhushi out for dinner... thought Sanyukta as she busied herself with some chores before heading out to Parth's...


Little did Sanyukta know she was falling in to a trap that was flawlessly laid out by the trio: Randhir, Parth and Vidhushi!


Precap: Dinner with a surprise... but from who? 😉

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Okay guys! There you go... I know that some of you guys want me to reveal the truth about the past and also about Aryan... But all shall be revealed at the right time 😃.. Also, this update is probably really bad... But I need (hmm) connectivity (?!) from each part to the next 😳... That made sense yeah?!

So, please leave those amazing comments of yours... Bcos I love reading them 😳


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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: anyania

Wow.what a great update. U just made my day. The whole story is so interesting. Coming to the part..the replying gesture was super sweet and sanyukta's dressing part and all those flashbacks were quite interesting and sanyukta in drunk mode was funny. Waiting eagerly for the next part. Want to know what randhir will do. Update soon...



Naaaw! Your comment is just tooo sweet hun🤗.. Thank You for taking some time out to read and comment❤️

Thank You very much... And I guess you are in luck 😆... ^^ next part above😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
RES!!! :D
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Edited! First comment! :D

Surprise? Yayy! :D
When Sanyu was sleeping, Randhir shirtlessly drew the curtains for her?! :')
Then she saw him shirtless! Bwahahahaa! :D *hoot hoot*

That scene between them! Sanyu in her tigress avatar, Randhir listening at first and then clearing the air! Awesome! :D

Dinner and all! Waiting! :D

As always, fantastic update, Pari! Is your name Pari or is it a nickname?

Edited by PrussianBlue - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: PrussianBlue

RES!!

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Edited!
A double trouble wala update? Awesome!! :D

In the first one, the entire texting part was hilarious!! "K" played its assigned role SO well! :D In fact, I hate when people say "K", especially with a full stop! Ruins the entire point of the conversation! And "kkk" is the MOST annoying!

In the second one, you remembered everything from the episode and made it sweeter! She dressed up so well? *_*

She got drunk?! Bwahahaaa! Thank god her drunkenness at least voiced a little bit of what she was feeling in her heart (apart from coke and ice-cream and cheesecake, of course xP)!

Let's see what Randhir's got for us!

Fab updateS, Pari! Waiting for more! :D


I hate it tooo! That 'K' is just sooo irritating!!!! Gujju minds think alike sometimes... Lool😆 (bad joke, my bads😃)

Well, I watched that episode and I was like, "Sweet, this is perfect timing..." So I actually had to write down the dialogues for me to include them...

Actually I was starving while I was writing that part, so my inner cravings for all that junk just came out 😆

Thank You Aru for your lovely comment ❤️

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Posted: 11 years ago
I am too excited about the idea of the trio trapping Sanyukta😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
Another awesome update. Sanyukta is raging with fire. OMG! And a suprise dinner from whom! Eagerly want to know, update soon and thank you for your sweet gesture..waiting.
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Posted: 11 years ago
😔 post nxt part soon na...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Heyyya pari!!!
Ooops...isss baar toh m verry late...mere comment res. Karne se pehle 4 people commented???? Hawww...next time I shall be the first one (hope so).
Ummm...update was good. (I alwayz expect more more...dis one was chhota)
Sanyukta's accusations seemed really hillarious to me...I know it wasn't so funny but I was giggling continuously while imagining that. Lol
Randhir left Sanyukta stranded on their wedding day??? *jaw drop* kyu???
Hayyyee...dis mystery!!!! When will you reveal the past scene?????mystery???
Awww loved d way you penned Randhir's confession and Sanyukta's realization.
Sanyukta's sorta revenge on Randhir...hmmm...interestingg..
Sanyukta falling into trap...veryy interestingg..
Will be waiting for "Surprise dinner" update..
*Vardhan ishtyle..interesting...very interesting* lol
I understand yaar to maintain the flow of story you have to make the base strongg..
So take your time...I know you will reveal everything at the right time...
Update the next part ASAP
LOVE YA
SAMAIRA
PS- Why can't we have double updates every day??? *winks* Hahahaha!!!! I noe noe ..m being greeedyyy..
Edited by iraa_parsh - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
It was amazing... Well watching ranthir shirtless must be a treat for her eyes... Lol... But seriously ur writing skills are amazing just simply luved it ... Keep updating... Will be waiting for ur next update...
And ya thanxx fr d Pm...

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