Very nice os...
thanks fr d pm...
do write more
Thanks for the wonderful comment.. VJ... π kisi ki kahani abhi to nhi h.. bt in future ho sakti h.. π π Holi ko enjoy kare bina koi nhi reh sakta h.. π Thanks once again for liking it.. & itne bade comment ke liye bhi.. π πOriginally posted by: vironikajain
Mee first
Kya timing hi meri.. π
Welcome back with ur write up after so long.. π
Super cute OS Sagar..
Very colorful..perfectly going with holi... π
Yeh toh kisi ki kahani lag rahi thi Sagar ki zubani.. π π jis ki bhi thi very nicely narated by u π
Pehli holi toh mazze lene mein or ego mein nikal gayi but acha hai baad mein dono ne enjoy kiya..they enjoyed their first holi together is main thing.. π
Bichara Ram fas gaya...hitler gussa ho gayi π nice one thande pani ki bucket Ram ke upar.. π
Happy Holi Jaan..kya baat hai.. π π
Loved it..very sweet nd beautifull OS..
Happy Holi to u too Sagar..
Naseem vo likha hua update mjhse delete ho gaya tha yaar... πr
maine jo update karne ko kaha wo nhi kiya ab tak, ab bolungi bhi nhi ππ‘..kattiπbut dusra toh likha wo acchi baatππ
First r second tm dono decide kar lo.. π Jo optn tha vo de diya.. π π Yep.. finally enjiy kiya.. π thanks for wonderful comment.. πVJ se pehle maine padha toh mai first huyiππ
tumne kaha k accha laga toh like karo but dusra option nhi diyaπ€£i mean if k liye then bhi hona chaiye naπbtw, mujhe accha laga toh maine like kiyaπpehli holi zid mai celebrate nhi kiπbut finally end mai toh celebrate kiya naπas always loved itπp.s. special person ka naam bhi mention karna chahiye tha naπ
Hi Di.. Thank u for tge winderful comment.. π π I knw Hindi apki strong nhi h.. bt mere write up ka grace Hindi se aata h.. π thanks once again for commenting on it... πOriginally posted by: luvsakshi
<div align="center"><font color="#0000FF">Hii sagar
welcome back
super good OS
sorry took so much time
as you know hindi mai thoda week hai
awesome narration
loved the HAPPY HOLI JAAN π
</font><font color="#0000FF">πHappy holi to you and your family .. </font>
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Thanks for wonderful comment.. π Love ne change kar diya Priya ko bhi.. π will try to write more... πOriginally posted by: aanchaltulshan
Love they way ram was describing his priya and her fear for holi but because of his love she is now changed and love to play holi with ram
Continue soon with another lovable Os on raya thanx for the pm
thank u.. π
No problm.. raya bhi yahi h r mera update bhi.. π πArre Guru ji mere se miss hogaya yaar padhne mein aaj padhungi ..ek aur din holi raya ke saath aur aapki kahani aur khoobsurat lafz k saathπ
Thank u for liking it... π U R welcome... πOriginally posted by: BALHLOVER
after a longg gap u r here nice to read ur write up again
loved itthank u for ur pm
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