Parud SS: The Heirloom - Page 3

Fabulous start. Can't wait to read the rest. 

Beautifully written! Looking forward to the other chapters :)

Have updated Part 2 on the first page. Sorry that it is so horribly long. Promise to make the next part better :)
Edited by asmanichatri - 10 years ago

Not at all 'horribly long'. In fact, a very nicely done and satisfying update :)

Good stories are never too long. Really enjoyed this chapter. Wonder why Paro shot him?

Part 2 was wonderfully written. Definitely not too long. Wish you had continued with it actually. Can't wait to read what happens next. Laila seemed to calm for my liking but hopefully this may be a dignified exit for her. Paro shooting him in the leg was unexpected. I wonder if the fact that all charges on him have now been dropped is the reason she did it. Roll on Tuesday 😊

Very heartwrenching. She sacrificed herself in the end.

You have me intrigued with this story. Looking forward to more!

OMG i just read all 3 parts!! this IS AMAZING!! In one fell swoop she saved everybody except herself!!😲

That was beautiful please continue soon! <3