RangRasiya OS -ALONE - Page 2

Originally posted by: mrsp

Lovely descriptive language.The piece flowed beautifully and I felt Paros anguish.Hope we see a scene like this in RR because Paro really is alone.She has been torn from her small loving family into a malstrome of deception and hate.These people she is with she hardly knows and the man she is forced to marry is her husbands murderer albeit she now has begun to grudgingly trust him with her life.Even if we are not that village girl we can empathise with her fear of the future.Please write some more.

MRSP,

TQ HunnyBunny , Custodian and Shantu.  Appreciate your words.

Aiyyo, ddc-sa so much angst!! 😭

I need heartsong part 2 full of passion and love now bass..

Our poor bai sa.wen wil dey make her smile 😡

Originally posted by: shree10

Aiyyo, ddc-sa so much angst!! 😭

I need heartsong part 2 full of passion and love now bass..

Shree Baisa

Thank you all for your fb. Edited by DDC1 - 10 years ago

I wanted to bump this up since the OS suits Paro's current anguish and loneliness.

Originally posted by: _Ms.Foxy.Angel_

Heart wrenching.

TQ Foxy Angel for your consistent FBs.

Hi there
Im new on here
Reading thru the fiction im noticing.

Just wish to Iv really enjoyed ur work
Its beautiful and flowing.

All the fiction iv read is fantastic.

I hope u continue to share!


Sorry!
Missed a word
Meant i wish to sayEdited by LivesInHope - 10 years ago

that was really sad 😭 beautiful writing.