OS- That Darned Rat! (PaRud OS) - Page 2

Sofna

@Sofna

IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 10 years ago

Very nice n funny...do write more

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SherryGS

@SherryGS

Goldie

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Posted: 10 years ago

Wow!!! Thank you for the comments and likes!!!! I am so shocked. Really appreciate it... And I agree, the rat will have to live. Poor Paro! 😃

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liya96

@liya96

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Posted: 10 years ago

your writing style! Superb! :) you should write more often... A treat for us :D

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custodian75

@custodian75

IF-Rockerz

Posted: 10 years ago

Love to see that happening in the serial.

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685122

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Posted: 10 years ago

he'll never get rid of that rat now XD

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Hakuna_Matata11

@Hakuna_Matata11

IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 10 years ago

Lovedd rat...
awesome OS.

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saira

@sezo

Goldie

Posted: 10 years ago

Hi.

That's was beautifully written. Evan though no hindi was geat. Didn't miss hindi. Just couldn't stop smiling reading this one. So funny yet so true. Woukd like to see something similar in show

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741866

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

i hope the cv's use your story would be hilarious

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981917

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

How romantic.Never in my wildest dreams did I think having a rat in the room could cause such sensual scenes😉. Great imagination. Keep it up.⭐️⭐️⭐️

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SherryGS

@SherryGS

Goldie

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: memario
Intelligent rat and rudra :p

Thank you!!! This was my first thing I ever posted and you were the first person to ever comment! 😃 It really meant a lot to me!

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