OS: All I Want Is You|| (Removed)

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Edited by cheesemad - 8 years ago

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Damn

Cheeni

Tu best hai nd u prove it day by day

D os is 👏

I loved d cncpt.. It was beautiful lovely emotional damnit khushi showed a lot of patience nd trust. ..

He was unconcious for whole one year yet she took care if him

I loved how she chatted nonstop without bothering whether he is listening he wil wake up or wil he remember any of dose still she kept on going

I really feel sad for her smtym.. Bt somewere it was her love ..

D love wich seemed to happen while taking care

Nd he woke up for her for voice.. Three days she wasnt dere nd he impatient 😆 Dats y he woke up

I loved d way he flirted wid her.. Nd she kept rejecting proposal

D last part was hilarious

Wen he was warning her den proposed nd he cnfssd he remember her every single chat

Meri cheeni best hai 😈

Loved it ❤️Edited by Barun_Gf - 10 years ago

Wow Cheeni...
This was incredibly beautiful and magical OS...
I have not read something soo incredible before...

Hatts off to ur writing Cheeni... 👏  👏  👏  👏  👏  👏  ⭐️

I was crying from the 1st line...Arnav met with an accident and then the entire description...
It was hard for me to read it...I wonder how u had written it...

And then later I had tears in eyes and smile on my face...

I will not quote any line of this OS coz every line was beautiful...This OS has not only touched my heart but it will stay in my heart... ❤️

Khushi was simply mind blowing and I am saying this for the 1st time...I loved this Khushi...
Her love was as pure and beautiful as a child's smile...
And Hatts off to Khushi's faith...
1yr and 10 months... She actually showed what true love is...

And what to say about Arnav...I love him always...But I dont want him to be in such a condition again...

And I love u the most Cheeni...A big wali jhaphi for u for writing this OS...  🤗

For me now u r the best writer on IF and this is the best piece of work...
I wonder from where do u get such amazing and different concepts...

Keep writing Cheeni...
Edited by avni_barun - 10 years ago

what the!!!😲😲😲


Edited by ArshiAms - 10 years ago

Hayee what a lovely dovely OS..i loved it so so much

U dedicated this OS to me..how sweet yaar..u r such a pyaari sis of mine.

I m so lucky to have u in my life

Now coming to the OS..i love each and every bit of it. How gracefully you wrote yaar. I m in love with your marvelous writing..muah baby

Khushi loves arnav so much she just know his name and nothing else still she share everything to him and chatter everyday with him.
Arnav get up and after some days go away from her. Its so heartbroken for her and came back after 6 month
Payal told her to move on and marry someone but she always reject the proposal
Love the confession scene. Its more lovey that previous one..its nice u change it

Love the filmy scene of arnav to get her back..gauwalo suicide suicide

Love u dear for the awesome os and don't u dare to stop writing os

i want another one from u understand..keep writing

Me waiting for next one


Edited by Nickysweet - 10 years ago

Fantastic 👏 Edited by Javeria3991 - 10 years ago

So cute komal! So damn cute!!
I have to say you are getting better n better with your stories!
I absolutely loved it!!
It was so good and wonderful! I love when i see this giving and beautiful side of love! Where one person's unconditional love becomes other's reason to live! This life giving side! It simply teaches us to hope and never give up!
N that moment he comes bk to her and says" bahot kuch"! Bas that moment was the moment for me!!
Cheeni keep writing such beautiful OSs!!
Loved it!
Edited by Nandz - 10 years ago

aww, it's such a sweet OS .. loved itEdited by farha_ipkknd - 10 years ago

simply amazing
loved itc

DONT SAY SORRY FOR WRITING AN OS 😊
Edited by Aisha1996 - 10 years ago