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Originally posted by: ..SanzLicious..
I'm speechless. This was absolutely beautiful. I can imagine this happening - we have a long way to go before it actually can happen, of course - but the scene you wrote - it speaks to me.
I can see that you haven't lost their characterization and this is PaRud's kind of conversation. It's emotionally stirring and the hug, and the initial fear was felt.I am absolutely blown away by the way it was so emotionally evocative 😳Paro and Rudra And no matter what, he is her Rudra, in the very end.
This is FANTASTIC. 😳 I'm so gushing! 😆 But ... you're a PHENOMENAL writer based on this OS. It was realistic, beautiful, and soul-stirring!Hats off! And your DP 😳 Deepika is flawless too! :P 😳
Oh my goodness, that was so beautiful! I almost teared up, touched my heart. The emotion, *fans herself* WHEW! 😃
While reading through I thought Rudra was going to be dead and that sort of killed my desire to read but I couldn't stop, I was so good. And how he said Paro should have a record for how many times she faints was ADORABLE! I loved it, great job!👏⭐️ You should write more stories you have HUGE talent!
Originally posted by: PrithviSanyo1
Beautiful os
loved itloved how u beautifully described paro's tensionfirst the suspense create then how u united themloved their interactionn rudra's description about paro so beautiful sereneloved it
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