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This one made for a delightful read (and I'm not saying this because it had Rudra in it😳). It was interesting from the start itself. You gave some life to Aman, and subsequently gave the 24/7 right hand man of Arnav a realistic touch. I have always believed that no person can be this available for his boss😆
Back to the two MIBs. I haven't read Labyrinth, yet the way you depicted Vishwa is enough to decipher him as a very intriguing personality. As for Rudra, bang on is the word. Subtly (or not so), you showcased him so well that I was left grinning throughout the OS. All I can say on his inclusion is that I'm flattered😊
However, the surprise element of course would be in the form of the two of them being imaginary. Also Khushi's entry, Arnav's reactions to the same and the swift realizations all made up for a wonderful read. To make use of two characters from stories of different writers and infuse them so effortlessly in a OS is a big feat in itself👏
That said, I must apologise for not reading you earlier. Time is a constraint and there are many stories still left pending, whcih will take some time for me to finish. but I assure you I'll come back and read all that you've written; this one OS is enough to say for what you have in store in your other works.
P.S. It would be helpful if you could make an index of your stories; you have written quite a handful of them; it would be easy to get to them if you compile them and link them to your signature.
Once again, I loved this one!
Seher Hone Ko Hai
Mannat Har Khushi Paane Ki
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