ArHi OS: Of Snow and Stars [Thank you note Pg 7 & 8]

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@guggu

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Posted: 11 years ago

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vandana.sagar

@vandana.sagar

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Posted: 11 years ago

Swati...my guggly woogly whoosh...

I am touched and so humbled but this gesture...I cannot thank you enough...but I hope what I am going to post as my comment not only does justice to your writing but makes you feel as happy as I did, while reading this OS!

The snow and breeze spoke so silently

Expressing their emotions with clarity

He always loved his Khushi very dearly

Like did she him absolutely selflessly

Their childhood & so many memories

Games played together affectionately

A friendship that grew strong steadily

A bond forever written almost destiny

His driving force she was constantly

To watch him grow she left him freely

To accomplish his dreams entirely

And to her return someday maybe

Her brother, he was her only family

Death separated them prematurely

Pride she felt in her heart lovingly

Although it left her alone and lonely

Her grief she buried & her tragedy

Hiding behind work successfully

In awe was he, of his brave Khushi

And in his arms she slept peacefully

Solace with her he felt immediately

In his heart she lived completely

He missed her and her company

Regretting his absence undeniably

He knew with her he wanted to be

Love for her he felt wholeheartedly

Holding on to each other longingly

A moment they froze for eternity

A light Zephyr blowing so gently

Their stars shining above brightly

Promises of love with simplicity

Hope filling their lives beautifully

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anupama

@ak_maggi

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Posted: 11 years ago

Now tht was soothing n emotional OS... !! Old frnds forced to leave each other in search of their dreams... d same dreams comin in their way...

But eventually all u want in life is for dat person to be wid u when u realize those dreams...isn't it?

I loved their friendship...So child like... n hence so unconditional...

When they meet after a gap too... tht longing trust love doesn't change...It takes just few natural moments to cover tht gap...n somehow when some ppl come along.. they bring wid them solace too...!!😃

Lovely OS choti...😊

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reshmimohan

@reshmimohan

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Posted: 11 years ago

Lovely.

Thanks for the pm.😊

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Arjuhisis

@Arjuhisis

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Posted: 11 years ago

wow - another dedication to vandana - that's great

nice OS - loved reading it

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avika_ShArMa

@avika_ShArMa

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Posted: 11 years ago

Aww! That was the sweetest OS I read in a long time. 😊

Arnav returning back to his childhood friend-cum-sweetheart, consoling her over her heartbreak from Rishi's death. Khushi had dealt with so much grief, that Arnav returning back was the best thing that happened at that time. Then them planning out the course of their life together from now onwards since noone wants to live apart anymore. So, altogether I enjoyed reading it. Infact, loved it. 😃

And the end was just perfect. A lovely childhood memory! 😳

PS ~ A belated Happy Birthday Vandana di. ❤️

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YaSha0512

@YaSha0512

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

Awesome os
Arnavs concern for khushi was so touching
N the fact no matter how long they were apart their feelings for each other never died just lay dormant
So Arnav plans to stay with her but when he has to go back does he plan to take her with ???
Thanks for pm
Hope more comin

Wishing u a happy new yr and all the best for 2014

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chavvi16

@chavvi16

Stunner

Posted: 11 years ago

that was beautiful
how they managed to find a middle way for them both
ahhh she lost her only family
and he wasnt there for her which still gets to him
but he is there now
and guess thats all she wants