Awarded OS : Making Khushi: Vandana Sagar's Birthday OS - Page 5

Originally posted by: faffy

Words fail me...what does one say about 'Making Khushi' - it completely overwhelmed me with its perfection.

Arnav couldn't have got a better redemption...hats off!!!👏

You are a fantastic writer and you must therefore write more often....... give wings to your creativity!

You humble me...

Originally posted by: lazyleaves

This is by far one of the most beautiful piece of writing that I have read since my two years on this forum


No writing has captured the emotions of our tortured couple post marriage so well...


No writing has been able to capture the million emotions each went through on a daily basis...


No writing has ever shown that how difficult it is to maintain a facade before the family - to be something you are not, to be something you want to be...


No writing has ever questioned this beautifully why he forced her to marry her and why she agreed...


No writing has ever shown how much despite of his 'hate' for her he loved her so much and despite of giving her every reason to hate him, she still loved him...


No writing has this comprehensively captured all the logics of the whys hows and whats of that fateful night...


No writing has shown why Arnav is doomed in love and why Khushi is doomed in love too...


No writing has ever been this encompassing to show that muqdai laakh bura chahe toh kya hota hai, wahi hota hai joh manzoore Khuda hota hai...


Except for this one... :-)


Rabba mere kya hai teri marzi...


Arnav and Khushi - Hamesha...


I don't know how long this OS was but if I had to sit and highlight my favourite parts, it would easily sum up to 90% :-D


Thank you for this (I guess you have written something after a very long time)


Vandana, tu roz paida ho :-D Meri jaan Happy Birthday <3

Originally posted by: smitar

Boootiphool!👏

If you don't continue this, I am going to do bhook hartal outside your house. Kahe deti hoon!😆

Smita

Smita, my darling...

Beautiful OS. Another beautiful approach to what could have become of IPKKND. Sigh.

Originally posted by: sun_shine_girl

Smita, my darling...

Please don't do a bhookh hartaal, please please please

Aapko hamare Arnavji ki kasam!

To likho!😆

I am going to tie you to the chair before the laptop. That is your punishment for writing so well.😆

Missed you.😭 Kahan gayab ho jaati ho?😃

Waiting to see more of Aashik Singh Raizada😳 & his Haridwar-trained brain.😆

Smita😃

So beautiful and amazing! I was rapt. Just like I was whenever I watched ARSHI scenes. That was amazing and I could picture every word! Loved it!!

Awesome part.. You are a gifted writer..
Pls do write more often..

Originally posted by: guggu

I am sorry for the late edit, was caught up in something. I hope you don't mind. 😃

Coming to the story, I am so happy that I read it, and even more happy that you dedicated it to Vandana Di. 😃

It was one of the best OS I have come across on this forum and it depicted the emotions of two hurting souls very beautifully. What struck me most that you weren't biased to either in your narration, and I liked it very much. The way you have used words- I am in awe. The narration flowed smoothly, never breaking flow in between. 👏 I could feel Khushi's hurt while reading about her misery, I could feel Arnav's agony and anguish.

Your OS once more put life into the show's tagline- Nafrat paas aane na de, mohabbat dur jaane na de.

Beautifully written. You're an amazing writer. Thanks for writing it. 😊

Originally posted by: MrDarcyfan

So beautiful and amazing! I was rapt. Just like I was whenever I watched ARSHI scenes. That was amazing and I could picture every word! Loved it!!