Awarded OS : Making Khushi: Vandana Sagar's Birthday OS - Page 4

Posted: 10 years ago
Amazing os
but nooo pls dont stop it here
pls cont
very well written
Posted: 10 years ago
Yes, please make it a SS or atleast a TS!! 
Posted: 10 years ago
one of the best pieces i've read in the recent past...fabulous job..do OM me if u pen something else...
Posted: 10 years ago
"played in Technicolor whenever he closed his eyes" seriously 🤣
Great OS, beautifully written, lovely...
Posted: 10 years ago
awww this is so beautiful!!
Posted: 10 years ago
This was painfully beautiful!
Painful because of everything khushi had to go through...what all she suffered because he didn't trust her...and what he went through while punishing her, torturing her...

Beautiful because of the way you have described their feelings...both souls doomed in love! No matter how much khushi hated him, she couldn't help but love him.
And him finally accepting his flaws, mistakes and everything, just to be with her...with his love...one and only khushi!

IPK personified!⭐️

P.S. Mommy, you are so lucky😉
Posted: 10 years ago
Oh wow this was sooo goood!
You have to write more
Posted: 10 years ago
Oh yes kushi was forever doomed to be in love with raakshas raizada...her dear arnavji 
Posted: 10 years ago
that was so good 👏 liked every bit of this OS . how beautifully you have summed up everything !
loved it . simply amazing 👏 it was really a treat to read .
ARNAV  and KHUSHI  were the real arnav and khushi of IPK .. just as  i love to read them
speechless .. this was reallly really very good !


VS .. yu know yu are awesome ...live  long 😃
Posted: 10 years ago
Originally posted by mints23


What a beautiful OS Basab!! IPK summed up in one OS... The characters of Arnav and Khushi... their emotions and attraction... their chemistry and need for each other... their past, their present and their future... everything encompassed into one part. I am in awe of how beautifully you write... and I had always heard Vandy tell me about it... I am thankful that its her birthday today... so I finally got to read a story of yours'. You seriously should write more girl!! Cause I for one am going to be a follower of it...
How I wish that the ASR in the show would have been as intelligent, and the creatives would have used their brains to not demean his intelligence... However... a wish came true today... about Arnav on his own, seeking the truth and more importantly trusting Khushi... her love and his too!! Come lets do a group hug and celebrate Vandy's birthday!! 🤗
Mints,🤗🤗🤗
Thank you so much for your kind words, they mean a lot...
I so wanted to see the much-hyped shatir dimag of the Harvard educated tycoon to make an entry into the show.
I would like to write more too, but don't get too many ideas these days.
 

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