Awarded OS : Making Khushi: Vandana Sagar's Birthday OS - Page 3

Words fail me...what does one say about 'Making Khushi' - it completely overwhelmed me with its perfection.

Arnav couldn't have got a better redemption...hats off!!!👏

You are a fantastic writer and you must therefore write more often....... give wings to your creativity!

this was so beautiful and poignant

Amazing!!

Fantastic update, very well written and loved the fact you wrote it on occasion of Vandy's birthday 😃 Superb work, awesome!! 

Boootiphool!👏

 If you don't continue this, I am going to do bhook hartal outside your house. Kahe deti hoon!😆

Smita

that was a beautiful one - lovely one -

Awesome os!

Rs








Edited by Barun_Gf - 10 years ago

This is by far one of the most beautiful piece of writing that I have read since my two years on this forum


No writing has captured the emotions of our tortured couple post marriage so well...


No writing has been able to capture the million emotions each went through on a daily basis...


No writing has ever shown that how difficult it is to maintain a facade before the family - to be something you are not, to be something you want to be...


No writing has ever questioned this beautifully why he forced her to marry her and why she agreed...


No writing has ever shown how much despite of his 'hate' for her he loved her so much and despite of giving her every reason to hate him, she still loved him...


No writing has this comprehensively captured all the logics of the whys hows and whats of that fateful night...


No writing has shown why Arnav is doomed in love and why Khushi is doomed in love too...


No writing has ever been this encompassing to show that muqdai laakh bura chahe toh kya hota hai, wahi hota hai joh manzoore Khuda hota hai...


Except for this one... :-)


Rabba mere kya hai teri marzi...


Arnav and Khushi - Hamesha...


I don't know how long this OS was but if I had to sit and highlight my favourite parts, it would easily sum up to 90% :-D


Thank you for this (I guess you have written something after a very long time)


Vandana, tu roz paida ho :-D Meri jaan Happy Birthday <3Edited by lazyleaves - 10 years ago

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