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Posted: 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Helloo Ishaqzaadeyians ..!! I'm back ...and firstly a big SORRY ...i know im a bit late this time ...i was stuck between my tests ..and after that i fell ill 🤢 ...so cudn't manage to come...
thank you all for commenting and liking😳 keep loving the same way ...keep giving longgg comments
Hit the like button ...silent readers HIT like plsss ...😊 leave your opinions very very precious ..❤️
COMMENT ...or else *Evil Laugh*

The Virman FF: Ishaqzaadey <3

Part 26
*Pehel jaake like karo * 😆

Maanvi's room (6:00)
Virat enters the room after getting ready for the day ...and he sees maanvi sleeping ...he places the glass of water and the tablet aside. He caresses maanvi's forehead and she opens her eyes with this ...virat smiles

V : chalo get up ..bahar jaana hai na...with in mins bhabi aur bhai uth jayenge ..!! uske pehle uthoo and (giving her glass of water and a tablet) have the tablet ..fever hai tumhe ..tablet logi toh thodi der mai kam ho jayega...phir bhabi ko pata nahi chalega..
And possibly for the first time maanvi had the tablets with out any nakhras ...she had the tablets and virat left the room saying her to get ready for the day...

Maanvi got ready and as she moved out of her room she dashed virat who was coming inside her room..!!

V : fever kam hua ??

M :(looking down)pta nahi ..!! the awkwardness had erupted endlessly betwn them

V : (checking her temperature by placing his hand on her forehead) perfect ...(smile)bhukaar utar gaya..!! and btw maanvi woh (hesitating..) woh actually mujhe tumse kuch kehna tha...

M : hmm (looking down) V : woh maanvi im sorry ...

M : (looks straight in his eyes...eye lock) thank you!!

V : thank you ?? M : for saving my life ...! (looking down)

V : (smile) arrey no ..you dnt have to...!! Agar tumhare jagah koi bhi hota toh mai yahi karta...!! (maanvi looks at him with a shock) (bites his toungue) mera matlab uski help karne ki koshish karta..!! (scratching his head) ( LOL ...may be maanvi got jealous tht he would do the same for anyone else :P )

M : hmmm... V : maanvi im sorry even (looking down ...)

M : no virat you don't have to be...!! (smile)

J : good morning lovelies...!! Areyy mannu tu uth gayi ..?? (descending from the stairs..)

M : hmm di hw are you..?? (smile)

J : first class ..par tu kyu suddenly puch rahi hai ??
maanvi looks in direction of virat with a special glint in her eyes and

V : woh puch isilye rahi hai kyunki ...kal raat jyada thand thi na...heater ki jarurat padi bhi ya nahi ??

Vi : (hitting virat's head) kuch toh sharam kar ..apni bhabi se baat kar raha hai (jeevika blushing hard)

M : areyy aap ussey kyu maar rahe ho jiju ?? waisey aap batayiye...kya hua ..??!!

Vi : kuch bhi titli ...tu bhi iske saath mil jaa...faltugiri karo tum dono milkar...!! (dragging jeevika out ) chalo car mai aa jao ..phokat ka dimaag chalatey ho tum dono...!!
Virika go from there and Virman burst into laughter...and they hi-5 each other ...and they see in each others eyes...and quickly take their hands back ..and virat signals maanvi to go first and maanvi moves first and virat follows her...enacting a "yesss"..!!

They sit in the car and start their journey...virat and maanvi sit behind ...and the temple was up the hill about 75 km far ..and maanvi found only one option playing Temple run..!! and virat was also doing the same...and there started a world war 3...tht who wud make a high score and they started pushing each other and shaking each others mobile so tht one can win ..!! full on war ws going on in the back seat...and viren ws looking at them through the mirror and jeevika ws almost sitting ulta to look at them...

J : ohhh janwar kahi ki ...stop it..!!! kyu ladd rahe ho dono ..?? (irritated..)

V : bhabi yeh ladd rahi hai ..!! M : (jumping in shock) hawww..mai ladd rahi hu ?? and they again start fighting ...!! Jeevika getting fed up by them sits straight and keeps on ignoring the noise they wer making..and viren also chose to do the same..! and possibly that was the best thing that they did!!! Virman keep on arguing for mins and then ...

M : hawww mai cheating kar rahi thi ...?? Viraaat I will kill you for sure ...!! Cheaterrr..! (and she pounces on him ...and jeevika..)

J : maaanviii ..choddd naaa ussey ...kyu uske piche padi hai...!! (irritated..)

Vi : sahi kaha ..!! chodd ussey titli ...bichara mar jayega tuney uspe attack kia toh..!! (giggling)

M : heheheeheh .. (she burst into fits of laughter...and seeing her virat also gets a biggg smile on his lips..and he also starts laughing) hearing virens line jeevika said

J : dnt under estimate my devar...!!

Vi : areyy tumhari behen ko hi compliment de raha tha yaar..!!
...it ws almost one hour but they still had a long way to go ...!! (Kuch toh hua hai - Singham Returns)

Raaton ko apni palkon se
Khwaab sajane do
Phir khwaabon ko aankhon se
Neend churana do
Maanvi didn't sleep for much hrs in the night ...she doozed off ...ovio on virat's shoulders but this time virat didn't evn know it..!! as he himself ws sleeping ..!! and there ws silence in the car...and virika wondered why it was so ...jeevs turned back and viren saw through the mirror and jeevika ..

Khaamoshiyaan rakhti hain, apni bhi ek zubaan
Khamoshi ko chupke se sab keh jaane do
Kuch toh hua hai
Jo na pata hai
Kuch toh hua hai

J : ladtey toh aisey hai jaisey abhi ek dusre ko khaa jayenge...!!

Vi : hmmm...soney do accha hai ...shaanti hogi car mai ...i'm fed up by them! Kitne loud type ke insaan hai dono...arghhh my ears are aching!!! just like kids...!! yaar jeevs bacche bhi inse shaant honge ..!! ( jeevika laughs )

They reach the temple after an hour and jeevika woke up Virman and there they wer again in an awkward situation..!! virika got down of the car and started moving towards the temple and here virat and maanvi wer looking in each others eyes..and then maanvi breaks the eyes lock and adjust herself and gets down of the car and even virat gets down ..this incident had bought back the awkwardness ...!!

They both remembered the yesterday's incident and maanvi had now become very silent types ...and even virat had become quiet...they stood at the entrance of the temple and they both at the same time raised their hands to ring the bell of the temple ...and their hands touched...they saw towards each other and ...wer lost for seconds ..they both pulled back their hands and entered the temple without ringing the bell ..the temple was beautifully decorated with flowers it's smell spread all over ..the roof even was filled with the flowers ..and still the people were busy tying the flowers to the roof anyhw coming to the point...maanvi's awkwardness had increased...and virat ws nt comfortable with this behavior ...

Jo kadam kadam chaloon, tujhe hi tai karoon main
Saansein band kar tujhe oddh loon
Tu khyaal sa mila hai jisko gin sakoon main
Aadaton mein tujhe jod loon

They marched silently behind virika where ever they went...maanvi had many questions in her mind running and virat had many wishes running in his mind...and finally they reached in front of the goddess idol...maanvi closed her eyes and joined her hands and virat before closing his eyes, looked at maanvi and smiled and then he closed his eyes...

M (thinking) : aap mere saath konsa game khel rahe ho?? Aapko bada maza aa raha hai na ?? ek toh yeh ek pagal jo mere side mai khada hai ..woh irritate karta rehta hai ..aur kabhi kabhi sweet bann jata hai ...aapko toh pata hi hoga kal kya hua..??!! ...mere kuch samaj nahi aa raha ...yeh mere saath kya ho raha hai ?? itna confusion kabhi nahi hua mere saath...!!

V (thinking): uhhmm ...kya kahu kuch samaj nahi aa raha..!! aapko toh pata hi hoga...yeh pagal jo mere bagal mai khadi hai ...woh kitni important hai meri Zindagi mai ... mai bas yeh chahata hu ki aap maanvi ko hamesha protect karo ..kabhi koi musibat mai ussey na dalo ...agar dalo toh bhi mujhe uske aas paas rakhna ..kyunki yeh jhalli ..apne aap problems solve nai kar sakti ..!!..heheh ..but on a serious note..sacchi I want her to be happy always...ussey dard mai nahi dekh sakta...

Tujh se roshan raatein saari
Tujh pe hi khatam baatein saari
Khaamoshiyaan rakhti hain, apni bhi ek zubaan
Khamoshi ko chupke se sab keh jaane do

M : itna confusion toh mujhe accounts mai bhi nai hota..i swear !! jab bhi mai aapke paas aati hu toh hamesha di ya mom dad ke liye kuch maang ke jaati hu ...mere liye maine kabhi kuch nhi maanga hai aapse ...aur aaj bhi aapse kuch jyada nahi xpect kar rahi hu ...bas mujhe mere sawaalo ka jawaab de do ...that's it ...mai aur kuch nahi chahti ...

V : I love her and I cant see a drop of tear in her eyes ...so plz kabhi aisi situation rise hi mat karna...I wanna stay always with her...mai ussey durr nahi reh sakta...!! So ussey hamesha mere karib rakhna ...hamesha ke liye mere saath...aaj mai aapse bas ek cheez maangna chahta hu ... (taking a deep breath) Maanvi ..!!!

He opens his eyes and looks beside him and sees maanvi ..who had frowns on her head , and she ws giving slight xpression with her eyes still closed and joined hands as if she angry , worried , confused and shaking her head a bit ...!! He immediately has a smile on his face seeing her antics virat sees the idol once ...then again glances at maanvi and looks at the idol again and thinks yeh mast piece banaya hai aapne..!! and I hope ...only for me...!!

Kuch toh hua hai
Jo na pata hai
Kuch toh hua hai

Kuch toh hua hai
Jo na pata hai
Kuch toh hua hai

M : you have to answer...!! Mujhe nahi pata kaisey ..but you have to answer my questions...who the hell is he to me ?? virat aaj kal itna kyu affect karne laga hai mujhe ?? why ?? kon hai woh..?? ek toh dimaag itna khaata hai ...upar se itna care bhi karta hai ...im I falling for him ?? gosshh ..aapko meri madad karni padegi ...mere sawal ka jawab aapko dena toh padega ... pata nahi aap kaisey help karoge ...but u have to help me this time...!!
She opens her eyes and sees the idol ...and she ws gonna shift her gaze from the idol but at the xact time a flower fell from the idol and maanvi's eyes widenened due to this...she ws shocked ...she cudnt believe her eyes tht her question ws answered so quick ...and she quickly moved her gaze to virat ...who was already seeing her ..and they had an eye lock there...

Tujhe ek baar pyaar se jo choo sakoon main
Waqt ko phir wahin rok doon
Phir dil machal ke bhool jaaye
Dhadkano ka safar chodd doon

Maanvi POV (Point-of-view)
Viraaat... Yeh ...sign tha kya ..?? aisey kaisey ho sakta hai ..?? nahi yeh sign nahi ho sakta ..!! nahi yeh sign nahi hai ..!!
making a decision she breaks the eye-lock ... and maanvi says

M : aisey kyu dekh rahe ho ?? V : nothing... (smile) now maanvi ws getting conscious about virat being around her...!! (yipeeezzz first sign of love)

And they move front...people were trying to tie up the garland of flowers on the roof ..and they wer adjusting it (just above virat and maanvi were they wer standing) ...as the Indian custom is ...they knelt to the ground to touch their forehead on the ground in front of the idol...and doing so maanvi ws thinking...

M : aapne jo sign dia ...nahi chalega..!!! flower toh hawa ke chalne ke waajah se bhi toh girr sakta hai ..!! this is cheating...koi aur sign do ..!! virat was thinking ...

V : bas tht's it ...jo puchna tha puchliya ...!! Maanvi ...!!

And suddenly maanvi and virat felt something on them...and they got up and found themselves trapped in a big garland kind of thing ...(waaah bhagwaan ki leela..!!! maanvi didn't agree on the flower ..so bhagwan ne pura ka pura garland hi gira dia).the people helped them come out of it ..and virika were actually getting laugh seeing all the funny things happening with their siblings...!! Maanvi saw towards virat and he ws giving her a stupid kind of smile or smirk ..whatever you call it..!! and virat helped maanvi get up ...and maanvi ws thinking...

Tune di hai, saari khushiyaan
Tune hai, toh hai meri duniya
Khaamoshiyaan rakhti hain, apni bhi ek zubaan
Khamoshi ko chupke se sab keh jaane do

M : nahhi ..this cant be the sign ..nah..!! yeh toh ..unn logo ki galti ke waajah se gira...nahi ..this is nt a sign ..!! mai aisey kaisey maann lu ?? nahi ... (maanvi ws in her own LALA land...!!) (uff ...hw many signs does this girl need?? Mai toh pareshaan ho gayi ..!! ab toh bhagwaan bhi pareshaan ...iss gadhi ko signs dete dete🥱)
the people who wer hanging the flowers apologized for the incidence tht took place...virman wer walking to a section in a temple ..where the pooja ws gonna be done in the name of virika as they are newly weds...

Vi : chalo jaldi ...!! Pata chale puri shaam yaha pe hi guzar jaaye...pandit ji hamara hi intezaar kar rahe hongey..!! All : hmmm
while walking...

J : maannnu u are fine?? Bada ajeeb behave kar rahi hai ..!! kal raat ko andhere mai kahi deeewar se toh nahi takra gayi ?? (giggling)

M : dddiii ...!! J : arey kiddin baba...!! Vi : kyu meri saali ke piche padi ho ??

J : jaisey aap mere devar ke piche padey rehte ho!!

Vi : watevr..!! (idiotic smile) J : same pinch.!!!

Virat was gonna say something to maanvi ..and seeing tht, maanvi moves fast towards the section ...and virat ws following her at the same speed...! And seeing virat maanvi walking away ..virika also rush behind them ..!! Virman reach the section first ...and they see the pandit and they bend down at the same town to take blessings ...they took blessings and quickly stood again straight...and as a reflex action to their bending together pandit says ..

P : sada sukhi raho ...tum dono ki Jodi sada bani rahi ...aao pooja ke liye baitho ...(woowww now..!!! the pandit thought these two were couple as they bent down together..!!)

Kuch toh hua hai
Jo na pata hai
Kuch toh hua hai

Kuch toh hua hai
Jo na pata hai
Kuch toh hua hai

Virman shocked...!!! And more than virat ..maanvi ws shocked...!!! Pandits words kept on ringing in her ears just as the bells which wer hanged at the temples entrance! LOL ...she kept analyzing things ...

"Maanvi ..tu issey toh ignore nahi kar sakti ..!! tujhe hamesha apne questions ke answers miley hai ..!! and this time toh teen baar...!! Thn how it cud be wrong ...?? Par virat...??!! Nahi maanvi ...aisa kuch nahi hai tum dono ke bich ...shut up ..!! ur not going to concentrate on it..!! aisa kuch nai hai ...!! Virat mere liye kuch nahi feel karta aur na hi mai uske liye...!! " She concluded...

V : nahi ...nahi ..hamari shaadi nahi hui hai ...!! Woh mere bhai aur bhabi ke naam par puja karni hai ... aa gaye dono ...virika enter...pandit apologizes for the confusion and they sit for the pooja ...all the while the pooja was going ..virat and maanvi were stealing glances at each other...!! Maanvi's heart kept denying it ...and virat's heart kept falling for her..!! after an hour pooja is done ... and they move out of the temple for some side scene...

For next update you need the song Manchala - Hasee Toh Phasee. Keep it ready 😳

Let the chapters unfold in the coming days...!! 😳

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Hoping to get good reviews on this ...hoping you all will like and comment and give me my deserved FEEDBACK 😭
spread the news of this FF 😳!!
chalo ..!! hit the like button ...😳 waiting for all of your reviews on this one ...

..see you all with the next update till then hit like button, keep commenting and keep loving me ..😳
Edited by lavanya_sweet - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
ressy 😆
unresss
awesome super hit update
haye virat is so caring😳...and manvi also took medicine without nakhre😲...but nakhre ke badle akwardness aa gye virman ke beech😆
virat and manvi lag gye taang khecai par😛😆..poor virika😛...
what a concidence temple ja rhe aur virman tample run kel rhe hai kya choice hai🤣
i missed virman fight😃 ab toh jeevika ne bhi declare kar diya dono janwar ke tarah ladte hai🤣😆😛viren ne sach kaha manvi ke marne se sach mein mar jaega virat😉 kyuki manvi is SHERNI😆
they both slept keeping head on each other its so sweet😳😊
hehehe manvi ke complaint shuru bhagwan ji se😆bechare bagwan ji bi pareshaan ho gye manvi ko sign de de kar🤣bechare bhagwan ji ne thak kar pandit ji ko bol diya sign dene ko🤣😆
i loved this update😃ab jalde se update karne😃
Edited by virman.lover - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Vowww awsum update lavi ❤️ IT
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Posted: 11 years ago
AWESOME UPDATE DEAR. LOVED IT. LOVED VIRMAN CUTE MOMENTS VERY MUCH. WHOLE SCENE AT MANDIR IS BEAUTIFULLY WRITTEN BY U. MANVI AND VIRAT THOUGHTS R SO MATCHING TO EACH OTHER. AUR BAGVAAN KA ISHARE TOO GUD. MANVI IS SO CONFUSED NOW MAYBE SHE WILL GET A HINT NOW. UPDATE NEXT PART SOON. TAKE CARE.😊😊😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
its tooo late dear..
Frst I didn't believe on my eyes that I got ur pm..
But as always the update bring wide smile on my face. ..
Love virat's care for manvi...
And our mannu's the great 's clues...
Even GOD tired yo gave her clue...but mannu is mannu after all. ..
Hey temple run also one of my fev game. .
And the way u expressed each n every part. ...its awsm..
Virika's irritation on their siblings part was outstanding. .
Virman teasing part was superb. ..
Totally outstanding n enjoyable update dear. .
Keep rocking dear
Thanks alot for pm dea. .
Try to update soon. ..
Tc
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Posted: 11 years ago
Superb update!!!
Liked d chase game here..n maanvi is still in denial..obviously thoda time tau lagega to accept her feelings..but nice 1...thanks for the PM!!
Edited by Syed695 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Superb update 😊
Wish Manvi realises her Love soon@they confesses to each other
😊 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: sandhYA_123

AWESOME UPDATE DEAR. LOVED IT. LOVED VIRMAN CUTE MOMENTS VERY MUCH. WHOLE SCENE AT MANDIR IS BEAUTIFULLY WRITTEN BY U. MANVI AND VIRAT THOUGHTS R SO MATCHING TO EACH OTHER. AUR BAGVAAN KA ISHARE TOO GUD. MANVI IS SO CONFUSED NOW MAYBE SHE WILL GET A HINT NOW. UPDATE NEXT PART SOON. TAKE CARE.😊😊😊



thanks for your view dear...
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: GOOGLU

its tooo late dear..
Frst I didn't believe on my eyes that I got ur pm..
But as always the update bring wide smile on my face. ..
Love virat's care for manvi...
And our mannu's the great 's clues...
Even GOD tired yo gave her clue...but mannu is mannu after all. ..
Hey temple run also one of my fev game. .
And the way u expressed each n every part. ...its awsm..
Virika's irritation on their siblings part was outstanding. .
Virman teasing part was superb. ..
Totally outstanding n enjoyable update dear. .
Keep rocking dear
Thanks alot for pm dea. .
Try to update soon. ..
Tc



Lol ...and ur comment makes me smile ..!! thanks so much dear ...keep reading 😳

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