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Posted: 12 years ago
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that was fab! Another cliff hanger, update soon :)
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Originally posted by: KAJU10

I really dunno whr to strt frm or wht to strt wid.
Evry tym u write somethin' nd its jst awesome.
To be honest I wsn't expecting new entry maybe coz I ws preoccupied wid Randhir bt still I appreciate it.
As "Actions speak more den words." I think Abhay hs alrdy fallin fr Sanyukta (maybe, I 'm jst guessing).
Gosh! U hv shown Randhir's desperacy vry brilliantly.
Leaving Sanyukta in d middle of d mess... claming captainship fr Vardhan sir... Ah! He cn really do anythin fr it.
D descriptionof Sanyukta's pathetic condition ws so perfectly done...
I cn imagin hw much embarassed she might be feelin' infrnt of d boys.
I felt pity fr hr limping condition.
I luved d way u portrayed hr firm determination. Though she ws in pain bt still wnt to attend d class.
Hats off to u!!!!
I wuldn't be doubtful if in d chapters to come u show hr killing Randhir (I srsly don't wnt it).

Hmmm... So u left it wid another cliffhanger. U surly knw hw to add intensity nd curosity to d readers mind.
D flow of d stry ws jst captivating.
It ws flawless.

M waiting eagerly fr d nxt prt. So gear up nd write it soon.


First of all, I want to thank you for such a sweet review!! I'm glad my readers are understanding what I'm trying to portray of the characters. The first few chapters are just to flesh out the their' personalities. There will be more development of the story in the chapters after that. As for Abhay, he was just a cameo in this chapter, not going to use him much really.😆 And no, I won't be killing Randhir; not in this story! How can I kill off our hearthrob??!!! 😳

P.S. To all my wonderful readers, I wish you a very, very HAPPY NEW YEAR!!!🥳

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Posted: 12 years ago
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..Don't speak as I try to leave 'cause we both know what we'll choose
If you pull then I'll push too deep and I'll fall right back to you...

'Cause you are the piece of me I wish I didn't need
Chasing relentlessly, still fight and I don't know why...
Clarity by Zedd
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Chapter 3. Because She Saw His Face

'Aaj ka din hi bura hai.'

She was falling; her eyes droopy, slowly closing as if she was entering a deep sleep.

Except.

She didn't.

"You should thank me, you know."

She knew that voice!

"Tumhe Mr. Floor ko kiss karne se bachaa liya."

Her eyes shot open and she turned her head to look at the owner of that voice.

There he was, standing there like some hotshot, with an strong, tightening grip on her wrist, unwilling to let go.

Mr. Randhir Singh Shekawat!

In an instant, she pulled herself up and with her free hand, grabbed the sling of her bag and rammed it into the side of his head with full force, separating her hand from his!

His face whipped sideways as he stumbled back and shouted, "Ow!" "You crazy girl!"

"Yeah and you're very sane, right? Pushing girls and spraining their feet!"

"I did tell you to move!"

"After you pushed me!"

'This...this girl was insane!,' he thought as he rubbed the side of his head still feeling the impact of her bag striking his head!

'She was more angry than he thought.' 'There was no chance in hell she would accept him as her leader, now.'

"You double-crossed me on top of that!"

'How dare he!' 'How dare he show his face to me after what he did!' She still couldn't believe he was standing there, in front of her eyes!

"Dekho, hum already bohot late hain, Vardhan Sir abhi kuch important announce karega." "We have to go."

She ignored him, turning around and limping her way across the empty hallway, grimacing at the pain in her foot.

He watched her as she tried to put her foot on the ground and then remove it; repeating the same process a few dozen times.

It was a funny sight, really. He wanted to laugh but it would be plain weird to just laugh out of nowhere so instead, he walked up to her and offered her his hand.

She swatted it away indignantly.

He rolled his eyes and offered her his hand, again.

She was confused. Angry and confused. First he pushes her, almost crippling her in the process, doesn't even bother to apologize, and even ditches her on the spot, then he saves her from falling; which let's just say was on instinct since you would normally do that to anyone, but to offer help, to offer a hand repeatedly to someone whom you considered your enemy was something that left her very perplexed.

He definitely had something up his sleeve. Yes, she wouldn't make the mistake of ever trusting him again,' she thought decidedly.

"Look, I'm trying to help you here." "Genuinely."

But then again, this was the same person who had helped her get to her room that night.

'Maybe he realized his mistake after really seeing the condition she was in.'

Hesitating a bit, she gradually moved her hand towards his.

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So, so sorry for such a short update! I wasn't going to post anything today as I'm reeeally busy with my family. Yeah, we have a large family and they're all under one roof today! 😆

Hmm...what could be going on in Randhir's mind? Is he trying to get on her good side for leadership or is he genuinely helping her? And what's with Vardhan's important announcement? 😕

Don't worry all these questions will be answered in the next chapter!😉

And yes, for those of you who noticed, I have changed this story from an SS to an FF 'cause it's turning out to be longer than I thought! So, yay for that!

Like always, share your thoughts and reviews!! You know I love reading them!!😳

'Till the next update!😉

P.S. Once again, to all my wonderful readers, HAPPY NEW YEAR!!🥳🥳

Edited by mai47 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesmm update..bt itna chotu sa update...expected a lenghty one.bt chalo..koi gal ni.next wale me compensate kr dena...😉 😆
plzz update asap
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Posted: 12 years ago
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it was amazing...nd yeah same pinch j love reading too...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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interesting!
randheer helping her...wow!
plzz update soon dear
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...'Cause you are the piece of me, I wish I didn't need,
Chasing relentlessly, still fight and I don't know why...

...If our love is trajedy, why are you my remedy,
If our love is insanity, why are you my clarity...
Clarity by Zedd
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Chapter 4. Of Likes and Dislikes

He jerked his hand away from her as soon as their classroom was in sight. "What-"

"Wait here," he instructed before heading off and disappearing into the classroom.

A few seconds later her friend, Kaustuki, came rushing towards her.

"Sanyukta, are you ok?" "Yeh sab kaise hua?" "What happened?"

"To answer your questions, yes, I'm okay and yeh sab usne kiya jisne tumein yaha bheja tha."

"Who, Randhir?"

"Yeah," Sanyukta confirmed.

"But how, kaise?"

"Long story, baad mein bataongi."

"Toh kya tum class mein jaogi iss condition mein?"

"Of course, tumhe yaad nahi hai?" "Vardhan sir aaj kuch important announce karenge." "Woh class main hai, kya?'

"No, he's not in there yet but tum abhi mere saat hostel vaapas jaogi aur Vardhan sir jo kuch bhi announce karenge, I'll come and tell you, ok?"

"But-"

"No buts, come on, let's go warna main late ho jaongi aur Vardhan sir jo kuch bhi kahenge mein miss karungi aur phir mujhe jaake Jignesh se puchna parega aur phir tumhaare paas-."

"Okay, okay, let's go"

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"Personality report!?"

"Yeah, iss assignment mein jo koi bhi winner hoga, woh next project ka leader hoga."

"Hmph, genuine help, my foot," Sanyukta grumbled, reprimanding herself for believing him again.

She should've known. That man was not worth trusting.

"Exactly, woh sab natak tha." "He wasn't trying to help you." "He just wants to be the one in control in the next project."

Aur Vardhan sir ne 'next project' ke baare mein kuch nahi kaha?

"Not yet, he told us to complete the assignment first."

Sanyukta set her chin on her pillow, hugging it tightly.

'How much worse was today going to get?' she thought dejectedly.

"Aaahhh, ab mujhe uss Randhir ke saath 20 questions khelni hogi?!"

"God, please help me!," she mumbled into her pillow.

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"Oh my God!" "How can he do this to me!?"

He grabbed his punching bag, resting his head on it, frustrated at the turn of events. He didn't expect Vardhan sir to put up such a task! This was so stupid! They weren't in elementary school. This was FITE!

What the hell is up with that personality report!?

He glared down at the sheet of paper lying on his bed.

"Agarwal, ab tumhe mujhse koi nahi bachaa sakta."

He needed that position. And he was going to do anything to get it.

"You can only pray to God for help now."

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"Where do think is the best place to conduct an experiment in FITE?"

The gates of FITE that'll be bidding you farewell on your way out."

"What's your favorite color?," she tried differently, hoping to get something out of him.

"Black, as in the gates of FITE that'll be bidding you farewell on your way out."

She sighed annoyingly.

She couldn't do this. She just couldn't do this!

They were currently in the library as she was trying to get some information out of him to fill that damned personality report, quiz, whatever and he was continuously answering her in the most ridiculous ways possible!

He was definitely not making her task easier.

Not that she expected him to.

"Look-"

"No." "You look, and you listen very carefully to what I'm about to say."

He stepped closer.

"I'm not telling you anything about myself."

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"If you're not telling me anything about yourself, then I won't tell you anything about myself either." she declared.

"Spare me the horror."

"Kaash Abhay mera partner hota."

Now it was his turn to ask.

"Who?"

Abhay, jisne kal meri madat kiya tha. "When a certain someone gave me a sprain." "Someone whose name rhymes with Bandhir."

"Oh, like that guy named Sandhir," he countered.

She did a double take. "You know someone named Sandhir?"

He scoffed. "Of course not, you idiot."

He gave a sly smirk behind his book as he heard her sigh in exasperation. He was seriously enjoying this. She had followed him all the way to the canteen trying to pull out some information for Vardhan Sir's assignment because she had no other way of knowing anything about him and she thought he had no way of knowing anything about her as well.

But he did.

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"If you don't believe me, then have a look at it yourself," Professor Vardhan offered.

So she did, and once she went through it, she knew she had lost.

She couldn't deny it. It was all correct.

But, from where did he get all this information?

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"Engineers!" Taking the last sip from his coffee, Vardhan walked towards his small group of students.

"Aaj jaise ki ap jaante hain mein aap sabke teams mein se ek leader choose karunga and that person will be your leader for the next project." "Anything you do, you must ask, inform, and report to your leader."

"Maine aisa isliye kiya kyunki this was the easiest way for me and for you." "The winner is the one who understands you, who knows your strong points as well as your weak points, who knows where you need improvement and where you just need encouragement." "Now, let's cut to the chase, shall we?"

"Team Vidushi and Sahil," "Vidushi"

"Team Jignesh and Kaustuki," "Jignesh"

"Team Randhir and Sanyukta," He paused momentarily glancing at them.

"Randhir"

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How much she hated the man standing by her side! The man who had forcefully made his way into her life, making everyday, a hell of a day. He was currently listening to what Vardhan was saying but she could see the taunting smirk his face held at now having the upper hand in this little game of war they had started. She wondered what he had in store for. He wasn't about to make her life easy, that was for sure.

So consumed by the kinds of torture she would have to go through now that she was practically his slave, she was only able to hear the last part of Vardhan's announcement.

"Now get lost."

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Tumne suna nahi, kya?

"Kya?"

"Oh, let me guess." "Your dumb, dimwit of a brain was too busy digesting the fact that your great leader was standing right next to you that it forgot to receive and process that information, right?"

She walked past him, her self-esteem impervious to his snide remark on her brain's functionality, and asked Kaustuki about what Vardhan sir was saying.

"Our project is after three days."

"In a training camp in Manali."

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Edited by mai47 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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yaar you are awesome
manali trip
plzzz update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Manali..Oh man.. I was gonna use that place in one of my FFs. m telling abhi se okay so that u don't say I copied or anything 😆
Okay so Manali trip... I can smell romance now 😆
Jaldi jaldi update karo
Edited by supriya.ipkknd - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: snowwhite123

yaar you are awesome

manali trip
plzzz update soon


thanks, I hope I do this trip justice, am not very confident right now. will update soon😊

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