Thread II of FF: Ajab Prem ki Gazab Kahani updated on pg-143

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Posted: 2013-12-19T11:31:18Z
Hello everyone! welcome to new thread of "Ajab Prem ki Gazab Kahani". A big thanks to all readers---- to active readers for reading my story, liking it and giving feedback and to silent readers  for reading Smile...Many of you have congratulated me on previous thread but i have not thanked them (thodi lazy hoon so understandLOL) sorry for thatSmile.
To all who have congratulated me and who'll congratulate me  
                           

(sab ka milakar ek hi thanks kaha hai, so please share itLOL)


Now back to update, finally maine propose karwadiya dono ko. do tell me proposing style accha tha ya nahi LOL...i just hope k it is upto your expecations


PART FOURTEEN

Neha n Natasha follows Priya upto her room. Priya was grumbling while pacing in the room.

Neha: Priya kya hua?Itne gusse mai kyu ho?

Priya: Ram ki wajah se

Natasha: bhai ne kya kiya?

Priya snaps: kya nahi kiya wo pucho

Natasha:ok...Kya nahi kiya bhai ne?

Priya: mujhe nahi pata

Neha: what! Kuch nahi kiya toh phir us se naraz kyu ho?

Priya thinks, "kuch kar nahi rahe hai isi baat ka gussa hai"

Priya: i mean wo meri kisi bhi baat se agree nahi karte, tum dono ne dekha na kaise behas kar rahe the

Neha: itni si baat ke liye kyu pareshan horahi ho, usne bas apna nazariya bataya aur tumne apna, so chill

Priya: tum theek keh rahi ho

There Ram was still thinking whether he should make first move. Mamaji comes to irritate him again.

Mamaji: abhi tak yahi ho

Ram: aapko koi problem hai?

Mamaji: toh kab aur kaise parpose karne wale ho

Ram irritatedly: mai kabhi bhi propose karu aapko kya aur aap kyu itna interest le rahe hai

Mamaji: maine socha  k agar koi chance hai toh mai try karlu

Ram shouts: nahi, mai aaj sham usey propose kardunga

Mamaji: mai koi help karu?

Ram: kaisi help?

Mamaji: shaam ko mai antakshree ka program rakhta hoon aur tu koi romantic gaana gaa kar apne dil ki baat keh dena

Ram excitedly: thank you mamaji, mai abhi jaake  song select karta hoon

Ram happily goes to his room settles on the bed with laptop n starts searching for the perfect song for proposing Priya. He looks at Priya who was visibly upset and engrossed in her book.

"aaj mai tumhe propose karke rahunga aur aaj ke baad tumhe koi mauka nahi dunga mujhse naraz hone ka", Ram chuckles at his own thought.

Priya wonders, "Ram itne excited kyu hai aur laptop pe kya kar rahe hai?"

Meanwhile Shipra n Shiney were chatting in the hall.

Shiney: sisterji  kahan reh gaye hamare jijaji

Shipra: ab tak toh aajana chahiye tha

Sudhir enters the house calling Shipra's name. Mamaji goes to receive him at door n to surprise him.

Mamaji: kaise ho jijaji, badi der lag di aate aate

Sudhir was shocked seeing Shiney as he expected him to be here only on marriage day.

Sudhir: toh aagaye aap?

Shiney: aana hi tha ji, ekloti bhanji ki shaadi jo hai

Sudhir while sitting: mujhe laga tha k aap kisi tour pe ho aur seedha shaadi mai aaoge

Mamaji: kaam toh hota rahega ji, lagta hai aapko mera aana pasand nahi aaya

Sudhir murmurs under his breath, "bilkul pasand nahi aaya"

Shiney: kuch kaha kya?

Sudhir: nahi toh...Shipra mehmano ka khayal rakhna

Shiney: aap meri fikr mat kariye, mera apna ghar hai ji...Oye Shipra, yaad hai na aaj dinner terrace pe hoga

Shipra: mai tayyari kar lungi

Sudhir: terrace pe kyu?

Shipra: wo bhaiyya ne dinner ke baad antakshiri ka program rakha hai

Sudhir: koi nach gaana nahi hoga aur dinner ghar mai hi hoga

Mamaji: meri gal toh suniye

Sudhir: ek bar keh diya na

Mamaji has no option other than to agree with Sudhir. Sudhir goes to his room after declaring his decision.

Mamaji to  Shipra: ye itna boring kyu hai

Shipra: mere pati ki burayi mat kariye

Mamaji goes from there.

In Mamaji's room:

Ram comes to meet Mamaji.

Ram: mamaji, mamaji

Mamaji: kya hua bhai

Ram: aap itne udas kyu ho?

Mamaji: wo rehne de, tu bata kuch kam hai kya?

Ram excitedly: maine list prepare karli hai romantic songs ki but konsa song choose karo samajh nahi aaraha hai

Mamaji takes the list from Ram's hand n starts reading the songs.

        Meri aashiqui ab tum hi ho,
         I am in love,
         tum dil ki dhadkan  mai rehte ho,
         zara si dil mai de jagah tu,
         Hum ko tumse hogaya hai pyar,
         Bakhuda tum hi ho,
         Dil ne ye kaha hai dilse,
         Hame tumse pyar kitna hum nahi jaante...And many more songs.

After reading, Mamaji tears the list in pieces n throws it in dustbin.

Ram: ye kya kiya aapne?Meri din bhar ki mehnat waste kardi

Mamaji: ab iski koi zaroorat nahi hai

Ram: kyu?

Mamaji: hum koi antakshree nahi khelne wale

Ram: kyu?

Mamaji: kyunki Sudhir sharma urf pyar ke dushman ne mana kardiya

Ram was disappointed.

Mamaji: udas mat ho, mai koi aur pilan(plan) banata hoon

Ram: aap apne ideas apne paas rakhiye, mai dekhlunga ke mujhe kya karna hai

Mamaji: madad chahiye to batana

Ram: koi help nahi chahiye, bye

Everyone had their dinner n nothing much happened that night. Priya was thinking her fake sadness is not working, "she should give one last blow to Ram next day", she thought.

Next morning, Mamaji asks to Ram whether he has proposed Priya.

Ram: aapko kyu jaanna hai?

Mamaji: wo mai soch raha tha k agar koi chance hai toh mai bhi try karlu

Ram: kitne besharam hai aap, wo aapki beti ki umar ki hai aur aap aisi baatien kar rahe hai

Mamaji: kaisi baatien?Mai bol raha hoon k agar chance hai toh koi help karu, kuch bhi sochte ho yaar

Ram: sorry maine galat socha par mujhe help nahi chahiye

Mamaji goes from there murmuring, "bhalai ka toh zamana hi nahi raha"

Ram was very confused thinking how he should propose Priya without taking anyone's help. Lost in his thoughts he entered his room n bumped into Priya.

Priya screams, "ouch"

Ram: sorry...Sorry

Priya: dhyan kaha hai aapka?

Ram: sorry bola na

Priya: it's ok, mujhe aapse kuch baat karni hai

Ram excitedly: kya...Kya batana hai?

Priya: maine decision liya hai kuch

Ram: kaisa decision?

Priya: mai sirf kal subah tak ka intezar karungi

Ram: kiska intezar?

Priya Ram ko ghur ke dekhti hai jaise asking him to let her finish.

Ram: tum batao

Priya continues: agar mere boyfriend ne mujhe aaj raat tak propose nahi kiya toh mai usse baat nahi karungi

Ram: you can't do this, i mean tum baat nahi karogi toh wo udaas hojayega na

Priya:udaas ho toh hojaye, jab usey meri udasi ki fikr nahi toh mai kyu chinta karu

Ram argues: how can you say that he doesn't cares for you?

Priya: arey care karta toh ab tak apne dil ki baat bata deta

Ram:toh tum batado na

Priya: mai kyu batao, ladke ko propose karna chahiye

Priya walks out of the room. Ram was very upset n irritated too.

"kya musibat hai yaar? Ajeeb faisla suna gayi, kitni ziddi hai ye ladki...,.Ufff...Ab shaam tak kaise propose karu"

Ram taunts himself, "Mr. Ram Kapoor happy now, aapko toh hamesha se hi aisi ladki chahiye thi na jo kisi ke liye bhi khud ko na badle toh ab bhugto"

Whole day Ram kept himself busy thinking about how to propose Priya. He, infact searched on  internet also but found nothing. He didn't proposed Priya and as a result Priya decides to sleep in Neha's room.

Ram: kahan jarahi ho?

Priya: Neha k room mai

Ram: milne jarahi ho? Mai darwaza khula rakhunga

Priya: mai Neha k saath so rahi hoon

Ram: par kyu?

Priya: good night

In Neha's room:

Neha n Natasha who were chatting were surprised to see Priya in their room.

Neha: kuch chahiye Priya

Priya: kya mai tum dono ke saath so sakti hoon?

Neha: ofcourse, come inside

Three of them lie down on bed with Priya in middle.

Natasha: aap apne room se yahan i mean kuch hua hai kya?

Priya: kuch bhi toh nahi hua

Ram too comes to Neha's room behind Priya.

Ram: hi girls!

Natasha: kuch chahiye aapko?

Ram: haan Priya chahiye i mean Priya se baat karni hai

Neha: ok karlo baat

Ram: Priya wo meri blue file kahan hai

Priya: aap khud dhund lijiye, room mai hi hogi table par

Ram: nahi mil rahi hai, tum please dhund kar dogi

Ram was praying that Priya should agree to come with him.

Priya: theek se dekhiye wahin par hogi

Natasha teases: bhai mai help kardu aapki?

Ram: its ok, mai dekhta hoon, you guys sleep...Good night

Natasha: good night bhai

Neha: good night fatty

Ram goes from there defeated n disappointed.

Neha: Priya tum upset kyu ho?Fatty ne kuch kaha kya?

Priya: Ram ne kuch nahi kaha

Natasha: bhai se jhagda hua toh aap room chodkar yahan aagayi

Priya fumbles: mai thodi na unki biwi hoon jo upset hokar room chod do...,...Hum log sirf pati patni hone ka natak kar rahe hai

Neha: tum nahi batana chahti ho toh it's ok

Priya: mai bata rahi hoon na

Neha: hum sun rahe hai

Priya manages to speak one word, "couch"

Nuts confusedly: couch?

Priya: haan wo roz couch pe sone se back pain ho raha hai aur Ram ke saath bed share karne mai i was not comfortable toh yahan aagayi, tum logo ko problem ho toh mai chali jaati hoon

Neha: no it's fine, tum yahan so sakti ho

Priya: thank you

Natasha switches off light n they dozzes off but Priya was still awake thinking is she being very rude to Ram. Her thoughts were disturbed by her phone's message tone. It was Ram's message, she didn't want to read it but goes against her mind n opens the message.

"i know Priya you are still awake, please tune in to your favourite radio station right now, please:)"

Priya tunes in radio.

RJ: hamare next caller hai Hiraman aur wo Iravati se kuch kehna chahte hai

Priya was wondering what Ram is up to. Why he has make a call on Radio.

RJ: aap apna message de sakte hai

Hiraman urf Ram: mai janta hoon Iravati tum is waqt mujhe sun rahi ho, maine bahot socha k kaise tumse apni dil ki baat kaho aur is natije pe pahoncha k agar kisi bhi ladki se poori duniya ke samne apne dil ki baat kahi jaye toh usse accha kuch nahi hosakta

Priya's heart was racing as finally Ram was going to say those 3 magical words which she wanted to hear from so long.

Ram continued:  I am in love with you, i want to live my life loving you...I LOVE YOU AND I'LL KEEP LOVING YOU TILL MY LAST BREATHE

Priya was on cloud nine, her eyes started flowing with tears of joy.

Ram took a deep breath n continued: so Ms. Attitude, Will you spend your whole life with your Driver? Will you grow old with me? Will you marry me? I am waiting for your reply.

RJ: Hiraman ne apne dil ki baat kehdi, let's see Iravati call karti hai ya nahi

RJ gets a call immediately.

RJ: hello, is it Iravati?

Iravati urf Priya: yes

Even though Ram knows Priya's answer, he was still curious, impatient, anxious, nervous, excited, happy-all at once.

Priya speaks: Hiraman My answer is...

Priya delibarately took few seconds before answering. Ram was furious n murmurs, "speak up Priya, i know tum mujhe pareshan karne ke liye kar rahi ho"

Priya continued: Yes I do, I really really love you and will keep loving you till my last breathe(Ram closes his eyes in satisfaction with smile adorning his face) agar aap poori life mujhe jhelna chahte hai toh mujhe bhi aapko zindagi bhar jhelne mai koi problem nahi hai

Ram laughs at her last statement.

Priya ends the call and slowly moves out of the Neha's room and tip toes in Ram's, rather their, room. The room was completely dark.

Ram: mujhe pata tha k tum zaroor aaogi

Priya: kahan hai aap?

Ram switches on the light n taps on Priya's shoulder from behind. Priya was surprised to see the whole room decorated with flowers.

Priya: ye aapne kab kiya?

Ram: tumhare jaane ke baad, pasand aaya?

Priya: bahot pasand aaya

Ram takes out his finger band n goes on his knees

Priya Sharma kya tum mujhe apni  khoobsurat zindagi ka hissa banaogi, mujhse shaadi karogi?

Priya says, "yes"

Ram slides his finger band in Priya's finger. The band was loose for Priya's finger. Ram bits his tongue in embarassment.

Ram: wo actually ring kharedne ka time nahi mila

Priya smiles: it's ok

Priya takes out her finger band, holds Ram's hand n slides it in his finger but the band was small for his finger. Priya pushes hard the band hurting Ram.

Ram screams: ouch! Kya kar rahi ho Priya

Priya: kuch nahi, aap chup chap nahi reh sakte

Priya's efforts pay off as she successfully slides the ring. She gives winning smile to Ram.

Ram: dance?

Priya:is waqt??

Ram: haan is waqt

Priya: agar is waqt music on kiya toh sab jaag jayenge

Ram: hum music on nahi karenge

Priya questions: bina music ke kaise dance karenge?

Ram excitedly: i'll sing the song

Priya: no way, aap bilkul nahi gaa sakte

Ram pleads: please, please

Priya: i can't tolerate your singing

Ram: this is not done yaar, abhi poori duniya ke samne tumne kaha ka tum poori zindagi mujhe jhelne ko tayyar ho aur ab meri singing nahi jhel sakti

Priya: it's ok, natak karne  ki zaroorat nahi hai

Ram excitedly: thank you

Ram starts singing the song

Hum dil de chuke sanam

Priya: acha khasa gaana bigad rahe hai aap

But Ram paid no attention to it n continued singing.

Hum dil de chuke sanam

Tere hogaye hai hum,

Teri kasam

They start swaying to Ram's melodious song, lost in each other's eyes.

Chalo update khatam , thodi privacy de do unhe LOL, let them enjoy their old found but newly confessed love. LOL.,..,tata...Bye, bye Tongue

Edited by peeyara - 2014-02-24T01:47:09Z
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Posted: 2013-12-19T11:38:01Z
INDEX:


LINK TO PREVIOUS THREAD :http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3776209

PART 14: 01
PART 15 : 14
PART 16 : 25
PART 17 : 33
PART 18 : 43
PART 19 : 51
PART 20 : 61
PART 21 : 70
PART 22 : 81
PART 23 : 94
PART 24 107:
PART 25: 117
PART 26: 131
PART 27:143


link to neat thread: http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3932231
Edited by peeyara - 2014-02-27T22:33:51Z
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Posted: 2013-12-19T11:50:28Z
At last Ram has proposed to priya.  Priya was gracious enough to accept the proposal. the floral decoration, proposal on FM and a romantic dance. Not bad.  Ram is a quick learner.
Waiting for the next. Well written.
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Posted: 2013-12-19T11:52:01Z
Hi,
congratulations on the start of the2nd thread.

Good night.
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Posted: 2013-12-19T12:06:50Z
Hayee .finally confession ... beautiful .. continue soon :) :) :)
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Posted: 2013-12-19T12:08:14Z
and congrats for new thread .. :) :) :)
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Posted: 2013-12-19T12:09:33Z
very nice...
pls continue soon...
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Posted: 2013-12-19T12:17:48Z
Hehehe totally hattke propose..jst loveee it..hiraman ne toh iravati ko ILU bol diya..abh raya bhi ek dusre ko ILU bol de jaldi ;)
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